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Posted: 14 years ago
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AWESOME!
loved it!
pretty please continue soon
thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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only 4 cmmnts n 25 oms woww can i cry plsss cos im crying badly
i had plans 4 2 updates today but after seeying this i should cancel my plans
here goes an update plsss ppl cmmnt more plsss pretty plss
n yaa im in luv wid magicias ff d mystru gal so ill lyk 2 dedicate dis update 2 hr

Part 7

Next morning(day 2)

Maan-adi im going to the gym

Adi-yup,ill join you later im in a call with pinky

Maan raised his eyebrows…………….adi-office related maan

Maan- did I say something…………………………..well about you two lovebirds

Adi-are your expressions not enough, sometimes to scare away and sometimes ………………………he just smiles

Maan- sometimes???

Adi-like a bay,like a father,like a brother, like a protector

Pinky adds the list-and the most khadooos but caring boss a great employer on the phone

Maan snatches the phone from adi's hand and says- thanxx saali sahiba,rohans turn is over what about you two,adi ke hath kab pile karne hai???

Adi makes faces while pinky giggles and asks some doubts to maan and ends the call.

Adi-maan tughe to main………………

Maan-owowooow your pinky baby didn't give you a goodbye muaaahhh na srry

Comeon lets hit the gym

While on the other hand…………..

Geet-muski n rohan good morning………………..ohno ohno I didn't see any thing nothing at all

Muski comes out of the kiss and straightens herself while rohan –geet are yaar its just morning kiss now remove your hand from your eyes

Geet-have the decency to lock the door atleast

Muski-its you only na geet

Geet rolls her eyes-besharm ho tum dono ke dono,acha see what I brought

Muski opens the packet to find blueberry muffins inside(ummm yummy I love them)

Muski-geeettt ooommmgggsss

I luv u I luv u I luv u oh god

Geet winks at rohan- now you know that its not the precious gold sets ,great designer gifts,muskis muskaan precious hai

Bahut hi rare chizo se lagav hai ise, n one of them is blueberry muffins

N whispers in his ears -another one is tulips and white roses ka bunch,suhaag raat me try karna jijaji

Rohan gives a side hug to geet n mouths a thnxxx for making his jaan muski so happy

(friends u know wat, sumtimes very small things bring immense happiness to us,it shows the luv of the giver)

Geet tells the couple to come to her room and she also calls maan and adi 4 the blueberry muffin treat

Maan is highly touched by this effort of hers

Maan- geet the muffin is tooo goood but more than that ill like to thakn you for inviting us and makins us a part of your happiness,you are a simple girl with no show offs

Rohan n adi smirks

Rohan-saali jii sambhal ke rakhieinke baaton ko, maan ke much se kisi ke liye taareef nahi nikalti

Maan smiled at geet

Geet-maan why will I showoff
??

Adi-he is the great maan singh khurana tired of girls loving him for his money and killer looks………………….

Geet- I got it, you know what maan mine condition is quiet similar the junior boys in our sets constantly try to hit on me to climb the ladder of success

Maan- seeying you now I know that they make futile attempts

Geet-truee

The rest three spectators were very happy seeying their friends atlast got someone like them if this could go ahead………………………….

Soon after the breakfast maan and adi got busy and they went to visit some site location for their business,muski and rohan were busy attending the guests and geet left for some add shoot

At the shoot-----------

Director- hello geet

Geet –hi mukesh ,good morning guys

People throw glances full of lust at her something she was used to by now

She went and had a talk with the actors and then started the shoot

As soon as the main stills were shot and she knew that the photographer can mannage the rest……………..she excused herself and went back to the hotel

Hotel evening 7:30-----

Maan was walking through the lobby when he saw a crying geet rushing towards her room

Maan ran behind her and caught her and turned her so that she could she could face him he held her by her shoulders

Geet- whats the matter

Geet-n…nothing

Maan- geet im not a fool ,tell me what is the matter

Geet felt that for the time she could find some support from him he was different aferall he was,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,maan

Maan gave her an assuring look………geet entered her room and left the door open for maan to follow

Maan closes the door behind and sits beside a crying geet on the bed

Maan-now cummon crying puppy ,tell me whats the matter

Geet-im a crying puppy haan,im a crying puppy????(angry welll apne geet ka sweet anger)

Maan-well well see I knew that calling you such would make you angry and ill be able to see a crying , red,cute and pouting geet…………………….awww chooo chweet(well its difficult for maan to pretend and have such sweet talks but 4 a doll like geet anything is possible)

Geet-oh maan you know the exact tactics

Maan-phew mission accomplished now be a good girl and wash your face change your clothes and come to my room…………………………..

Geet- well why I did not know tht today any function is there???

Maan while closing the door shouts-muski ,rohan,adi,me and you are going to a disco,we did not get enough time for a bachelors party that is why……………………………….get ready fast geetuuu

Geet-geeetttuuu ewww but he likes calling me so then that's fine(she smiles a smile that reaches her eyes)

For going to the disco maan forses rohan,muski and adi into one car and takes geet with him into another car(rest 3 smirking)

In the car-

Rohan-they are coming close

Adi- he doesn't usually do so

Muski –she doesn't usually trust anyone to come close

Rohan-an innvisible string is pulling them

Adi n ,muski-I m happy for them

The three share a laugh………………..dost ho to aise

On the other hand in maan and geets car------------------

Maan- geet ab puchna parega yaa tum bataogi bhi

Geet-aaj jab shoot ke break me mai canteen gayi thi to waha per I heard two people commenting on me---------

FLASHBACK-

Boy 1-you know that geet handa

Boy2-the lead photographer

Boy 1- yaaa,shes something yaar I just feel like…………………..

Boy2-so why don't you approach her

Boy1-yup I was thinking to try it out…………………….

Boy2-yup then later if you find that shes not good in the bed then………….walk out

Boy1-I don't think so she appears to be a good one…………jangli billi and she can give my recommendation to higher authorities too

Boy2- if shes good you will have to share her with me

Boy 1-of cource………………..

Both have an evil laugh noy knowing that geet is watching them

Flashback ends-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

After narrating the story to maan geets eyes becomes moist again……………….

Maan- use and throw chiii I hate such men who are a disgrace to all men

Geet- I face this everyday, I am just tired

Maan-well I don't see any suggestion for this you cant change them so its you who will have to be strong geet and apart from that I will always be a supporting friend to you.

Geet leans her head on maans shoulder as the taxi stops near the disco

As they come out and and are heading towards the trio maan says geet

Maan-geet now stop crying and just give that angelic smile of yours which takes hearts away

Geet- are you flirting with me

Maan-geetuu we are going to a disco lighten up your mood

As they meet the trio they hug each other n head towards the disco-

Then geet whispers in maans ears----thnxxx maanu

Maan gives her a glare n geet giggles

Precap-

Hot n cold…………………………………………………….

but whos hot n whos cold??????????? i wonder….

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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely part sorry for late reply..me gets pc only in day time...loved geet acting scared in front of the mouse and so mature when maan sees her in a towel...maan is so decent guy that he doesn't make her uncomfortable..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
loved this update how maan eases her pain and so lovingly tells her to share her pain and be strong...loved maan calling geetu and geet calling maanu...precap...me wonders what is hot and what is cold???????
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: leverne

lovely part sorry for late reply..me gets pc only in day time...loved geet acting scared in front of the mouse and so mature when maan sees her in a towel...maan is so decent guy that he doesn't make her uncomfortable..

hii thnxxx 4 d cmmnt
acha did u notice d maanu -geetu thing i dnt know y bt ws laughing myself while ryting
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
hey pls dont use light colors its not visible properly...pls o pls..i have to highlight the screen to be able to read it...use darker colors..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
hey loved ur ff...
its interesting & both behaving maturely...
loving it...i wud like to c pre shaadi scene with their dialogues...
sent u buddy req can u pl pm me when u update...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesomeee!
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
7 cmmnts haan though i wntd next update only aftr 10 cmmnts bt next tym i wnt 10+1 cmmnts n yaa hit d lyk button too
dis updates 2nd prt made me almost cry yes i ws crying while typing so hope u guys lyk it
part 8-(its long)

Part 8

As they enter the disco the boys head towards the bar and the girls find themselves a comfoting couch

Adi n rohan orders drinks for themselves and maan orders three apple juice

Maan gives the girls their juice and sits with them whereas muski thnxx maan and goes towads the dance floor pulling geet with her

Then muski pulls rohan to the dance floor and both dance to the tunes while adi is still drinking maan and geet are standing there and watching

Geet-you don't dance or don't know how to dance

Maan- you bet,I thought you are not in a mood

Geet- I thought you are not,you are having apple juice???

Maan- I don't drink other than office parties and that also minimal just to raise the toast

Geet- I don't drink at all but for me being in a nashiiilllaaa mood alchohol is not needed you wanna see

Maan- go ahead let me see you groove…………………

Geet pulls maan to the dance floor along with her

Maan- leave me baba…………………..

Geet-nup not at all and now be ready to see how well you can dance………………

Then the song changes to hot and cold by katy perry--------------------

Geet places maans hand at her waist and looks challengingly at maan

You change your mind
Like a girl changes clothes
Yeah you, PMS
Like a bitch
I would know

And you over think
Always speak
Cryptically

I should know
That you're no good for me

[CHORUS]
Cause you're hot then you're cold
You're yes then you're no
You're in then you're out
You're up then you're down
You're wrong when it's right
It's black and it's white
We fight, we break up
We kiss, we make up
(you) You don't really want to stay, no
(but you) But you don't really want to go-o
You're hot then you're cold
You're yes then you're no
You're in then you're out
You're up then you're down

Maan accepts the chalenge and tithetens his grip

Both move their hips to the groove

We used to be
Just like twins
So in sync
The same energy
Now's a dead battery
Used to laugh bout nothing
Now you're plain boring

I should know that
You're not gonna change

[CHORUS]

Someone call the doctor
Got a case of a love bi-polar
Stuck on a roller coaster
Can't get off this ride

You change your mind
Like a girl changes clothes

Maan stretches his hand and geet rolls and comes to him,he drive his other hand from her hair sensually down her waist

Geet shivers and clutches his shirt tightly

Cause you're hot then you're cold
You're yes then you're no
You're in then you're out
You're up then you're down
You're wrong when it's right
It's black and it's white
We fight, we break up
We kiss, we make up
You're hot then you're cold
You're yes then you're no
You're in then you're out
You're up then you're down
You're wrong when it's right
It's black and it's white
We fight, we break up
We kiss, we make up
(you) You don't really want to stay, no
(but you) But you don't really want to go-o
You're hot then you're cold
You're yes then you're no
You're in then you're out
You're up then you're down, down...


Maan forses her to look into his eyes and she gives him a sweet smile that takes his breath away

The sensual song no longer was having an effect on them

They were into their own world two trained salsa dancer or two trained souls no longer could be differenciated

Maan picks her high up and she throws her head back and enjoys the new sensation

Then both again come face to face only to know that yes they were something

Rest all in the disco were gaping at them and appreciating their passionate dance

Yes that day they were drugged …………………….by each other

As the song came to stop they came back to their conciousness only to be greeted by a smirking muski ,rohan and adi

The three were questioning them with their eyes and maaneet were looking down as if they have committed some serious crime

Then to lighten the mood adi-im damn hungry so I think we can treat ourselves to the resturant next to this lane

The walk to the resturant was silent and as they seated themselves ,all were caught in an awkward situation

Muski- guys nice dance

Rohan- ofcource maan is trained salsa dancer

Geet-really you know maan even im trained in salsa and contemporary

Adi- gr88888888888888 jodi

Maan coughed,geet nervously looked down while rohan and muski giggled

Adi- I mean in dance

Soon their order arrived and they enjoyed their dinner and went back to the hotel

In the lobby-

Adi- I had gr88 fun today………oops phone guys need to go byeeeaaa

Maan- pinky ka phone

Muski-whos she

Rohan-KC ki employee

Geet- and why will an employee call someone at 1:00 night

Maan-because shes his ahem ahem tooo

Muski –oh wow

Maan- yup meri saali sahiba is very helpful kind and sweet

Geet- im soo excited tommorow is finally the wedding day

Maan-lag to aise raha hai shaadi in dono ki nahi tumhaari hai

Muski-geets always like that…….meri geet side hugs her

Rohan-mer saali

Geet-ooowww my sweet jijaji

Maan-meri ummm pata nahi

Geet after hearing this blushes and even hugs maan and whispers into his ears good night mr.pata nahi

All head towards their rooms after wishing each other goodbyeaasss

The next morning maan and rohan are having tea and maan becomes very serious and asks,

Maan-Addiction is different from love

Infatuation is different from love

Want and need is different from love

But are not all of above part of love??? How can we differenciate between them and love,what is love???

Is it freindship?

Is it attraction or what we define as crush in our teenage ages??

What does it mean when people say love is life……………………..then am I not leaving???

Is someones being in my life immportant,will it change me,affect me

How can someone be a part of me

How can someone be as important to me as my breath?????

Rohan-love is where you will like if she can feel your heartbeat

Want her to be part of your breath

Be a part of her body
let yourself hide in her embrace

Be her dreams,destiny……………sacrifise yourself to her

When somebody searches for you they should find you in her eyes

Be a man for the man

When you are in love you will accept her eith all her faults

Let her rule you,let her try to improve you

You will only want her for support cause she will always stand by you

Just hold her hands at the correct time and she will be yours, else you may loose her in a manner to never get her back

Remmember maan always remmember one thing---care for her,love her,support her cause she will return all those to you ,but after owning her if you don't keep your promise ,you will simply loose and be the cause of her death,may be not physically but you will rip appart her soul and that will be the worse condition for you.

Maan- but why me??

Rohan-2 words maan---- guilt and remorse

Loosing her will not allow you to die or live

You will be covered by such darkness from where none will be able to save you other than her.

Never loose her maan never,cause she will die sattisfied that she has loved and cared for you as long as she was there,but you will be left behind in this cruel world alone ,desserted and a living body dead soul

Her eyes will haunt you

Her dreams which remained unfulfilled will haunt you

maan holds his hands but rohan continues-maan just love her that is enough for her and will take care of her

if you physically be present and not mentally she will feel the void,she will die…………………..only you will be able to save her but may be she will be back to you physically and leave you to repent

she will still cry for you but will not be able to help you

and if she is able to do so name her your angel

at that time adi enters the room and says and faces a serious faced maan and a teary rohan

adi caughs-guys whats the matter,rohan why are you crying????awww I know you will miss your bachelor days and you must be thinking of the future tortures ,don't worry ill tell muski bhabhi not to beat you

all the three of them have a laugh just then rohan gets up suddenly and leaves them and goes to muskis room where all the ladies and geet is sitting

rohan goes suddenly hugs muski ,sobs and hides his face in the crook of her neck

muski got worried and started enquiring to which he says between tears looking at her eyes

rohan- jaan just stay with me till my last breath ,there is nothing else I expect from you cause the rest you know to handel,aaj jo rishta me ham bandhne ja rahe hai usme kabhi akela na chod dena…………………..muskaan meri taraf dekho …………………….you are not a part but my life and more than that tum ho to mai hu nahi to mai kuch nahi

shaadi ke saath vachan shayad vidhi ke liye mayne rakhta hai parantu mere kiye sirf tumhara mere saath hona mayne rakhta hai

muski tiptoes ,understands the depth of his words and kisses his fore head and says only a sentence-rohan tum mere pehchaan ho,mai pyaar tumse dil se man se tan se karti hun,so saath to rahungi hi

then to lighten the mood------

aur agar phir kabhi kuch ulta sidha soch bhi liya to tum to dimagh ke doctor ho thik kar dena use and bring me back on the track

rohan hugs her back and then realises that he is sorrounded by all his sasuraal relatives and runs away from there

geet comes and says-muski im truly happy for you

and thinks kaash mere liye bhi aisa ho

muski could well understand her-geet tughe bhi koi milega ,isse acha,tughe geet se geetuu banane vala

and winks at her while geet looks at her desbeleivingly

precap-muski-rohan wedding n reception and maaneet back to delhi

kya who phir milenge???

Who will approach whom???

Or will they again bump on each other………………lolsss

cmmmnt guys plsss

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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved the update...
it was emotional update..
the dialogues were awesome...
pl cont soon

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