NEW FF ON MAANEET:NAINA TORE - Page 31

hey just came across this ff and its awesome!!😃

Dis story seems to altogether changed its route.
I wanna knw wat maaneet exactly feel fr each othr n also maaneet moment,both close n romantic n also few mature talkings

hi chandu... 😊
i just read ur ff as it was suggested by one of my frnd...
must say yar.. its just awesome ff... wonderful.. 👏
luved it... 😃 ur a wonderful writer yar... 👏 n the way u explain the feelings.. luv n all... its just awesome... 👍🏼
wat an wonderful story.. with luv n full of suspences... 😃 n ur poems n shari's r also wonderful... 😎 😃
me waitin eagerly for next update yar... 😊 😍
n plzz.. do pm me too.. so tat i can wen u updatin... 😊

Thank u for the lovely update and PM...plz continue...TC 😊

hey just came across this ff and its awesome

awesome start

part 35-

last update stated tht it had been few months aftr geets marriage n descybd her bond wid everyone n bit of detail abt sinhals as maans rivals'''''''..dis update talks abt 1yr 5 months latr frm tht day''''''..nw ill simuntaneously tell abt present n past 1.5 yr

Frnds back aftr a long tym'''''..well i kno bt busy schedule''''''.though there r very few who read my ff bt still its my dream ff so ill continue to write it with utmost love and care

Today neil was resting on his bed and trying to think something sensible something positive

For past 5 months nothing had been the way it should have been''''''''geet was a girl whom he had always respected for her confidence for her courage for her stability to maintain a balanced and happy life and face any situation

But today geet was nothing more than a a dead soul with a living body'''''''..yes he had always loved her but her love had misunderstood her

Her maan had misunderstood her''''''''''''

To him geet was a girl who could fight any storm for maan and maan had failed to understand her love and thought himself to be her mission and not her love thus getting immensely hurt himself

Kyun na bole mose mohan kyun

Hai ruthe ruthe mohan kyun

Geet was sitting under cold shower and trying to wash away the reminiscence of her love ''''''..she was trying a futile attempt to erase something what was in her what she was made up of

Kaise manau hai kaise manau

Un bin kate raina un bin na ave ek pal chaina

She spoke as if to herself-I had loved him yes I had from the very beginning,no he was never my work,never my duty,then why????

Un bin jiu to kaise jiu

Bhahe naina bhare more naina

but she herself could not understand the why''''''''.

Jhare more naina na sune more naina

Naino ke dwaaro

Her maan had left her''''''''.did she still have any reason of living then'''''''.did she have any right to live without her maan's love

Aane ke vaade

Baandhe aise bolo kahe

She slowly smiled and let water trickle down her body this was the fifth hour she had been continuously under the shower

Chokhat pe dil ki aahat rakhi hai

Takho pe tore saaye

Her whole body was numb with pain she was cold as ice but her mind and heart was on fire

Un bine une manae

Un bin unhe kaahe rijhaye

She was bleeding love of maan and dying her death for now going away from world was the best releif

Unhe bin chale hai more ye jiya

Bhahe naina bhare more naina

Slowly she closed her eyes and surrendered herself to pain of love

Jhare more naina na sune more naina

Komal bari hai saasan ki dori

Her body fell limp on the washroom floors but she had a painful smile on her face

Roothe se bhi toot jaye

Paavan tarah se jii ko manaya

Here maan rushed after knowing the truth to geets apartment'''''''his mind and heart pleading guilt

Khoje ajohu tori raahe

Un bine mai pau

He drove madly and barged intoher flat to meet the lifeless body of his beloved

Unhe bin me karva lagau

Un bin unhe more na jii lage

All the colours from his face drained off while dev called for the ambulance

Maan was shattered''''''''and kept her close hugging her

Bhahe naina bhare more naina

Jhare more naina na sune more naina

Both their heart cried for love and union

Moe naina sune nahi kehna thage more naina

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Precap-im sorry mr.khurana

Maan whispered 'no as if to himself

nice update!!😊

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