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Sorryyy... :'(
Didn't get time to edit my comment... :(
But i'm here! :)
OMG!
This part was HOT! :D
loved it! :)
You've written it so well... :)
And LOL.. :P
Armaan's reaction to the job thing...Hahaha!
The whole update was in shirt: AMAZING! :D
I've already told u sooo many times that u are an amazing writer and i'll say that AGAIN!
You are truly an AMAZING writer! :)
Loved this part!
One of the best updates u knw...
And now i'm eagerly waiting for the next part...
Wonder what's gonna happen next!
If possible THEN UPDATE SOON Shru! :)
Love
Rhea

Amazing installment. complete it soon and thanks for the pm

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amazing part luv it

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Shruuu🤗

Mahn, was this instalment AWESOME or what??!!!!!!!!
I LOVED the additions!!!! you know what i mean😉
I already gave you my views on some of it earlier by pm!!!!

So will continue from where I left off, on the revisions!!!!!
OK, I was so much in agreement with Nikki when she made those statements regarding how much Riddhima has changed!!!!😆 I loved how she kept nagging and egging Riddhima into doing what she felt like doing!!!!
"Ridz! Don't you ever wonder how much control Armaan has over you?" Nikki asked me incredulously. "Where's my self-confident, independent best friend?" She asked me dramatically, shaking her head in disapproval.

And while I loved Riddhima for giving Armaan that kind of control over her ( it just made her so much the girlfriend) I was a little surprised that she was actually listening to him and a little scared of his anger!!!
It kinda also showed a new side of Armaan ---- LOL --- not allowing Riddhima to wear short dresses!!! ROFL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That entire sequence in the casino -- A-R war of words, Armaan-Abhi , and then Nikki-Riddhima , was just awesome!!!

and then comes the masterstroke-----Nikki nagging Riddhima again and coercing her into buying the short dress!!!!!!! She knows what buttons to press to get Riddhima to agree!!!!!
I wish I could see the expressions on Armaan's and Abhi's faces... like SERIOUSLY!!!! That really wouldve been SOMETHING!!!!!

Nikki-Abhi --I hope Abhi is able to manao Nikki!!! I wouldnt want anything going wrong between them -- so hoping they can talk and resolve their issues!!!

AR --- Well.. I echo Riddhima's sentiments ---- It wasn't everyday that one could fluster Armaan Mallik.
Loved Armaan's DUMBSTRUCK reaction on seeing such a HOT Riddhima!!!
I am sure the RIO danceclub will only ignite his emotions (read PASSION) further!!!!
WAITING FOR MORE!!!
AS ALWAYS!!!!

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omg amazing! but i wanna know what happened that he is avoiding herr

awesome installment :).. plz finish this part of soon :).. cant wait to see how armaan reacts when he find out about riddhima;s new job :)

Lovely part. I love how Arman manages to annoy ridhima and have that control over her. Ridhima loves that control of Arman and not complaining..
I didn't know Arman will have problem with short dresses and with knee length dress also . Typical BF...
Arman didn't give a proper reaction to her dress. may be in the next part 😉 Don't know what will be the reaction after knowing about Ridhima's job.
Hope they don't fight over that (i am sure they will).
continue soon ..

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