DHADKAN_ MANNEET FF NOTE PG 133 - Page 53

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Posted: 13 years ago
That was great. Do continue. Loved reading it.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, beautiful part
loved it
precap is confusing and interesting
continue soon



yes it is
before geet he ll amy
and before maan he is armaan...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zohafarheen

awesoem kenu
loved it yaar
but so sad of armaan phas gaya in duno ke beech main yaar
so let see wat ur updates bring us
thanx for pm dear






yes dear
he is puzzled which side he should take
sometimes situtaions make person to dont no which side they should take dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: krati5

nw hw is maan gng to sy sumthng to her???????? she is nt gng to office as her brothers will nt allow her nw



brother
what bro dear?
i dont think in this ff
we have bro for geet
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: piya-

Wonderful update yaar

Maan tum Geet se seedhe se puch lo k she loves u or not regarding amy it is none other than Armaan
can't wait for the next part and sorry for the late response Abi
love-Piya



i knew dear
nowdays u are busy in ur updates
thanx that u commented now dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear
pls conrt soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan hates amy and like armaan
kaha phasaya bhagwan... love this line
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART:16
what the hell?
how can she give me this letter and leave
may what happens today i should say her that i love her
i have to confess my feelings to her
atleast at that time she can understand my feelings
if not she wont
i have to say...
i cant afford to loose her
and maan singh khurana gets what he wanted
i think i m not being what i am
so only i cant get her
if i am like that till now she comes to me and propose me that she loves me
yes i think she is taking me as granted
but this is the last chane for her to accept my feelings
if not i wont even take care of her
i can do what i want
i ll do what makes me happy
today i ll confess her
if she loves me ok? then i wont even think she exist in my life!
yes that is better
but let me say armaan about this once

where the hell u were?
i m calling u from much time
cant u even take my call
hell r u there?

yes i m there?
but me in operation theatre
there i cant take ur call
what's the matter
u sound so serious

yes i am serious
today i just wann to say my feelings to her
i knew she loves me
but if she cant admit today then i ll leave her armaan
i cant be like this
she is taking me as granted
she had never seen MAAN SINGH KHURANA
no one knows what me is actually
i had been nice to her
now it is finsh
this is the last chance
i m confessing about my feelings when she comes back
r u there?


yes i m here!
u are not even giving time to speak yaar
i think sagath ka asar hai

armann...😡

listen dude!
till i come u pls wait
after that do whatever u wann to do
but pls wait till i come
lets see what she can speak to u
but wait for m
i ll be there by eveng!
pls maan dont take any step in anger
i knew about ur anger once u say and after wards u ll regreat it a lot
pls ...



ok i ll wait till u come
not more than that
and u dont give my any excuse that u are late
i wont listen to ur lame excuses
and i m damn serious about this...
do u get me?

yes sir !
i got u
i ll be there by evng ok
now bye!

i ll make u to say yes GEET!
or i ll never come back in ur life...
this is a challenge for my self
i desire to win...



now where is this geet?
omg ! maan so serious
if she says no
dont no what happens
i should call her?
geet geet geet pick up !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



geet just listen to me
now only maan called me
he spoke as if he even wann to kill me
he want to confess his feelings to u now
may be at the evng
he said if u say no
he wont come back in ur life again
but i dont what happens when u say no princess
it is being serious a lot
hope we say the truth today
that is better dear...




no amy dont do that pls
if we say him the truth he cant bare dear
and ...
i dont what i did
why i should come to his life...
why i created all this mess amy
i wannn ...

listen princess nothing is in ur hand
it is ur destiny that made u both to be together
u cant change that
listen i said him to wait for me and not to confess till i come
but if he does what u wann a say?



i dont no amy
may be i ll say...no
i cant do this amy
seeing his face
and those eyes which are only meant to love
seeing them i cant say no amy
i m breaking amy!!!!!!!
why it happened me
why i cant be with him...
why ?
why ?

listen geet be brave...
i m coming
in the mean time even is he says anything to u
just be urself
u knew why u came?
now it is time to leave also
u only decided everything
so be strong
i knew that u love more than anything in ur life
but geet sometimes u have tooo
lets see what we can do
and he said if u said no he wont come back in ur life
maybe that is good only dear
even u wann that right!



even u wann hurt me right
so only u are speaking in this way
that i want him to leave
i knew wann u want
u wann me to say the truth
but say me amy ll u be able to take the break down of ur frd
say amy!!
will u

then why u came in to life GEET!!!!!!!
why?
dont u know that once if he love anyone he ll sacrifice anything for them
say geet !
dont u know that!!!!!!!!!!!!
i cant see u in tears at the same time him geet
now be with ur self
what u wann u do
i dont care anything !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
he cuts the call!!!!!!!!!!!



why u do this babaji???????
why u do this
now even i lost my frd too
who cares me ,who loves me
why i lost everyone...
why ?????????????????

PRECAP: MAAN CONFESSION


i knew that this part is full of emotion dear
but u should wait for the truth
may be in next 2_ 3 parts it ll be revealed dear
and pls do comment
this is long update
sorry for late
but pls give the comments and press like button
silent readres pls do comments dear
plsss





HAPPY CHIRSTMAS EVE
FRDS




Edited by abisamratgunjan - 13 years ago
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