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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 14 years ago

#591

done with part 25...

[Maan relaxed rejoiced ''. His happiness now no bounds ..from the extreme pain of lossing her forever he got her back ..and he hugged her tight '.

Tighter ' as if she only belongs to him..and he will never let her go now..He higged her and dipped his head in the nape of her neck ''.crying his heart oout '

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here maan actually moved , am i right dear??? 😕

Edited by honeygrape - 14 years ago

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Magicia

@magicia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#592

Originally posted by: honeygrape
[Maan relaxed rejoiced ''. His happiness now no bounds ..from the extreme pain of lossing her forever he got her back ..and he hugged her tight '.

Tighter ' as if she only belongs to him..and he will never let her go now..He higged her and dipped his head in the nape of her neck ''.crying his heart oout '

]

exactly ...
here maan actually moved , am i right dear??? 😕

Her eyes were cloudy , she cant see Maan' face '.. And ..and the ..agony in it ''.. Yes it was expressed , his eyes flowed , but he was not in a condition to realize it , his eyes were closed and his body shivering in fear of losing her . Her soulless face 'and her mind unable to note any change in Maan ..

When he hugged her with his hands he not just realized ''.
He crushed her body in to his embrace .. Dipping his head deeply
He hugged her ''..

Both '..just wanted to be in each other and god heard them ,,and it the miracle happened ''..

Sad part is none was realizing it was real ...😭

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 14 years ago

#593

Originally posted by: magicia

Her eyes were cloudy , she cant see Maan' face '.. And ..and the ..agony in it ''.. Yes it was expressed , his eyes flowed , but he was not in a condition to realize it , his eyes were closed and his body shivering in fear of losing her . Her soulless face 'and her mind unable to note any change in Maan ..

When he hugged her with his hands he not just realized ''.
He crushed her body in to his embrace .. Dipping his head deeply
He hugged her ''..

Both '..just wanted to be in each other and god heard them ,,and it the miracle happened ''..

Sad part is none was realizing it was real ...😭

everything is clear now... 😊 when will you update the next part... 😉 dying to see geets reaction to this n maans next step... continue soon

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Seher

@Speechless

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Posted: 14 years ago

#594

Originally posted by: magicia

Lion you are Late😡

My Lord

edited my Comment

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Dilsay

@Dilsay

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Posted: 14 years ago

#595

my my what a mind blowing super duper hawt update ...me blushing ...

ya hooo Maan is back in action ...so Geet doesn't know what is going on...

yaar betabi aur bar gayee hay...continue soon

Edited by Dilsay - 14 years ago

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TeamMcSwarek

@TeamMcSwarek

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Posted: 14 years ago

#596

i'm hoping for a good reaction from Geet when the drug wears off!

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#597

hiii

awesome update

loved it

loved maaneet

maan is back

cant wait 4 more

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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Seher

@Speechless

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Posted: 14 years ago

#598

Want

in action

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Seher

@Speechless

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#599

Originally posted by: magicia

hwww JHOOTabhi thori der pehle hi tu mein ne btaya

meri pic mein tu mera Zodiac sign ha... u can call me with any name

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Magicia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#600

Originally posted by: Speechless

hwww JHOOTabhi thori der pehle hi tu mein ne btaya
meri pic mein tu mera Zodiac sign ha... u can call me with any name

hi rabba is ladkee bath karna hee bekar hi..

hamesha mey har jaathee hooom..

yar working on another story ..lol