SS: 'Will he be okay?' Updated Part 5 Pg14 - Page 5

Originally posted by: murphy369

Writing both the people's thoughts so good is really an art, awesome, You have done a great job dear and why did you think that this will not be liked, you are being a perfectionist, hahaha, lovely once again

Great monlogues dear!!!

Here is Part 2 Guys! Hope you like it, the third part will be all the action 😆

A sudden bright light brightened her face, sparkled her glistening hair in the wind. She was so beautiful, now if she could just smile. Her eyes are very familiar, yet they peer back at me like I'm a stranger. I was lost in them, and all my anger seemed to disappear. A tune started playing, a familiar tune, my ringtone? Oh- I jumped up in my bed to notice I was dreaming. And that face in my dream- was Khushi? Now she is in my dreams too? My dreams seemed to have halted, but the ringtone continued to sing, so I picked up the phone to see it was Lavanya. Hey ASR, yesterday I was so happy you broke my fast, I... Lavanya, can I talk to you later? I abruptly disconnected as yesterday's events appeared in my mind. Di walked in just then. 'Di, you? How's jijaji's leg now?' 'With God's blessings everything is fine now, your jijaji and I am fine' Arnav was truly happy for his sister but could not deliver his happiness to his face- he looked like he was in pain. 'What happened Arnav? - aren't you happy you broke the fast?' 'Di I didn't mean to break Khushi's fast- it accidentally happened'

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'Khushi!' 'Khushi wake up!' payal screamed as Khushi was deep in her sleep. Little did she know that her sleep only began a few hours ago due to her thoughts taking over her. 'Yes Jiji, I'm awake, what happened?' 'Khushi you know the time?' 'And what was wrong with you? Has that Arnav Singh Raizada started appearing in your nightmares too? Why were you murmuring his name in your sleep?'

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'What? I was talking about Lavanya. You broke Khushi's fast? How?' I knew that lying to di would not help; she would read my face in an instance so I truthfully began reciting the story to her. As the story proceeded, I began to see her lips curving to form a bright smile. Did I tell her too much? No, that's just di- besides Lavanya is my girlfriend, she knows that very well. 'Did Khushi see you break Lavanya's fast?' Di asked with sudden curiosity. 'No, I don't know, I think so.. why?' Di surprised me by cracking up and shooting up another bright smile before leaving my breakfast and walking away.

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'I don't want to talk about it Jiji' I was already upset about that Laad Governor and now Jiji was repeatedly asking me about him. How am I to know why I was murmuring his name? I couldn't even sleep last night. I'm sure that Laad Governor is going to be the cause of me falling ill again. Without facing Jiji and her questions again, I began preparations for making jalebi's and went back to thinking; while twirling different designs in the hot oil, I was preoccupied in my own world. He didn't say anything yesterday? Why? Maybe because I didn't give him a chance. That has to be it, otherwise that Laad Governor would never miss an opportunity to insult me.

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I don't even have time for gardening today- I'm already so late for office. On top of that that girl keeps haunting my mind. Who does she think she is? ASR doesn't care for anybody except his family and himself. I kept ranting to myself while driving on the busy roads of Delhi. On every stop there is a girl that looks like her. Except there isn't. There is only one Khushi Kumari Gupta- and she is more than enough for me.

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'Bye Jiji! Bye Buaji! I'm leaving!' I wonder where Shyamji has been for so long? I did not hear of him since the day ASR... yesterday, right? But my thoughts could not divert for even a moment, I was back to square one- thinking of him again. My jalebi mix was over, I needed to go to the market and bring more ingredients to make the best jalebi's made in India- only by Khushi. More than that, I needed to get out of the house, needed to scatter my thoughts and decide what to do now. Obviously I won't go back there- unless if he calls me- EVEN if he calls me-I won't go back. But what if I see him again? What if I don't see him ever again?

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My mind was lost, I was losing my edge and just when I seemed to realize the fact that Khushi was slowly taking over my life, bright lights and booming sounds surrounded me- till I lost control. My car skidded across the road till a heard a huge screeching noise. A cool liquid seemed to drip across my face and I could not gather the strength to move. I heard my uneven breathing lessen till a black light faded over my eyes. The only thought that repeatedly went across my mind- 'Where are you Khushi?'

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Nidhi🤗

Originally posted by: ..Jojo..

Loved this update! You are amazing at writing from both the perspectives :) I love how Arnav simply told Anjali everything, didn't hide anything. And.. umm.. Arnav's accident in the end? :O Khushi aaegi bachane? ;) Anyways, this part was really nice. :)

Update soon :)

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Jyotika

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Nidhi🤗

Loved this second part! Loved the way he was thinking about her all the time, even consiously! 😳

Yup there's definitely only one Khushi Kumari Gupta for you ASR! 😆

It'll be soo funny if we get scenes where Arnav sees khushi everywhere 😆

Keep writing hun! You're getting better and better!

Eagerly looking forward to the next part..and the next..and the one after that..and you know what i mean 🤣

Lots of ❤️

-Noorie

Oh gosh , what a great story you have written. PM me when you do update !😊

impatiently w8in 4 z nxt update...😊

Aww... They were missing each other!! Lol Khushi was saying Arnav's name in sleep. Update soon!! Btw nice ss