-dreams- maaneet FF THREAD 2

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Shalve

@Shalve

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#141

awesome... superb... i wht was Geet's fault in all this... y she has to pay heavy price each time... i'm very sad abt this

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Bye_Bye_if

@Bye_Bye_if

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#142

Awesome update... just loved it...

its ok she doesnt want to disclose her hailing from a royal family to prevent her family to face further disgrace (so called) because of her... but she can atleast tell about the education and she isnt from HP but London, not telling about royal family but a simple family in London...?? why not?

uptill now she had spoken many sentences in english moreover she was showing interest in reading books... cant Maan frame out that she is educated...?

i feel very sorry for Geet for being insulted by Simran... that Simran... ufff for the same reason i dint wanted her to come back.. i knew she will turn out to be a negative character...

anyways... party isnt over yet... you can still teach her(simran) a lesson from Geet... and make Maan more proud of his wife...!!!!

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Hima

@Ramhari

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#143

Wonderful part.
Loved the way geet carried herself throughout.
She was comfortable with the media ,made Maan feel proud and at the same time
was loving the baby.
They were perfectly complementing each other.
Even Geet could read Maan's thoughts and restlessness now.
They are so beautifully connected.
That annoying Simran ruined everything.
In a way it was good because the truth came out infront of Maan.
So Simran was the one who trapped both of them.
It is now proved to Maan that Geet is innocent and she has been trapped just like him.
Geet's slap showed all her pain.
She lost everything because of Simran's trap.
Good that Simran is out of Maaneet's life now.
Geet can clearly feel Maan's pain.
Hope she tries to comfort him.
Waiting for the next part.

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Reena Varghese

@reenasv

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: deniac
Muski - can u give her the opportunity to show these losers that she aint an illetarate??? can Geet do the thank u speech after maan"s award??? full elegant english speech??with her typical english accent??? n her starting with apologies that she will speak in english coz she aint very conversant in Hindi... ??????

me too wanna see this. 😛

i hate simran. good geet slapped her. simran deserves more than a slap. 😡

i wish if i could go nd punch the living daylights out of her.

awesome update. pls continue soon.

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princess163

@princess163

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#145

When did it happen-I don't know!

How did it all change-I don't know!

You were a stranger, she-my love.

but, today I know a different meaning of LOVE...

With her I screamed, I shouted, I flaunted,

With you, I just want to hide you within,

With her it was just skin deep,

For you, my love can even make the oceans feel shallow!

I showered her with my love,

On you I eaped contempt...

She was happy, but you are not,

And to this guilt forever I am condemned!

How could I even fail to believe you?

How could I miss that innocence that oozes from you?

How could I become such a devil?

How could I expose you to such peril?

I feel disgusted, I feel so sick...

the fear in your eyes always pricks,

How much I wish to hold you close,

The apprehension that you hide I can see up and close!

The simplicty, the innocence, the twinkle in your eyes,

Yet my mere sight causes it to die...

How unfortunate can I be?

Want to make you happy, but wiped off your glee...

I don't even know where the guilt finds its space,

For the love I have for you fills each inch...each ounce...each fragment of my being...

Guess my guilt has seeped into the love,

Fail to separate, and fail to club.

I will wait for you forever,

Will watch you from a distance, admire you as a mother.

The fatherly feeling makes me swell with pride,

But, do i deserve it-the question haunts my stride!

You are now my soul...the reason for my existence,

My child's mother-the best on all pretence!

Love

Swati

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Water

@Water.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#146

What you see is not what it is.

What you crave for does not necessarily come to you the way you want it to be.

Your silence can be misinterpreted and preceived differently through the eyes of others.

Does it make any sense for you to prove your stand, when you know who you are and what you want?

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Water

@Water.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: princess163

When did it happen-I don't know!

How did it all change-I don't know!

You were a stranger, she-my love.

but, today I know a different meaning of LOVE...

With her I screamed, I shouted, I flaunted,

With you, I just want to hide you within,

With her it was just skin deep,

For you, my love can even make the oceans feel shallow!

I showered her with my love,

On you I eaped contempt...

She was happy, but you are not,

And to this guilt forever I am condemned!

How could I even fail to believe you?

How could I miss that innocence that oozes from you?

How could I become such a devil?

How could I expose you to such peril?

I feel disgusted, I feel so sick...

the fear in your eyes always pricks,

How much I wish to hold you close,

The apprehension that you hide I can see up and close!

The simplicty, the innocence, the twinkle in your eyes,

Yet my mere sight causes it to die...

How unfortunate can I be?

Want to make you happy, but wiped off your glee...

I don't even know where the guilt finds its space,

For the love I have for you fills each inch...each ounce...each fragment of my being...

Guess my guilt has seeped into the love,

Fail to separate, and fail to club.

I will wait for you forever,

Will watch you from a distance, admire you as a mother.

The fatherly feeling makes me swell with pride,

But, do i deserve it-the question haunts my stride!

You are now my soul...the reason for my existence,

My child's mother-the best on all pretence!

Love

Swati

Swati,

You write amazing poems. A fantab writer.

Ur poems prick a place in the heart.

Lovely, keep writing.

Rachana

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Hima

@Ramhari

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: princess163
When did it happen-I don't know!

How did it all change-I don't know!

You were a stranger, she-my love.

but, today I know a different meaning of LOVE...

With her I screamed, I shouted, I flaunted,

With you, I just want to hide you within,

With her it was just skin deep,

For you, my love can even make the oceans feel shallow!

I showered her with my love,

On you I eaped contempt...

She was happy, but you are not,

And to this guilt forever I am condemned!

How could I even fail to believe you?

How could I miss that innocence that oozes from you?

How could I become such a devil?

How could I expose you to such peril?

I feel disgusted, I feel so sick...

the fear in your eyes always pricks,

How much I wish to hold you close,

The apprehension that you hide I can see up and close!

The simplicty, the innocence, the twinkle in your eyes,

Yet my mere sight causes it to die...

How unfortunate can I be?

Want to make you happy, but wiped off your glee...

I don't even know where the guilt finds its space,

For the love I have for you fills each inch...each ounce...each fragment of my being...

Guess my guilt has seeped into the love,

Fail to separate, and fail to club.

I will wait for you forever,

Will watch you from a distance, admire you as a mother.

The fatherly feeling makes me swell with pride,

But, do i deserve it-the question haunts my stride!

You are now my soul...the reason for my existence,

My child's mother-the best on all pretence!

Love

Swati

Beautiful one Swati
You always amaze me with your wonderful poems

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Tanu

@ytanuja

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#149

Congrats for the new thread:

Part 14 and part 15 are simply marvelous maan is trying to come closer to his geet and his baby loved to see atleast geet is not avoiding him .so his family is their with him on his spl day but what is the use simran has spoiled all their happiness, waiting to see what comes next.