New FFAbhiya 'Always U' update pg23 23/10 - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
awesome story. Really took my breath away. Please add me to ur PM list. Eagerly waiting 4 ur update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
pls pm me wen u upd8!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu

nice update dear, quite emotional


Thank u 😳

Originally posted by: Lifu18

its awesome pls pm me after ur next update pls pls


Sure! Thanks !

Originally posted by: ifrah.

oh..first take care of urself..:)btw it was such a cute update..liked it..:)abhay is sooo cute..;)


Thank u so much dear for the care and appreciation.

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

hey nice part dear.Now inko bada karo so tht they meet soon.😆😆


haha 2 more updates us ke bad tum dekhna :D

Originally posted by: CleviveDsouza

wow

awesome
great
fantastic
continue soon
plz pm me


Pmed u!
Thanks alot dear!

Originally posted by: missglam


Awesome update
loved it..
I loved haseena n her motherly love for abhay!
Poor pia..she is again alone!
Thanks for the pm.& the update...continue soon..tc


Thanks dear!
yes u will love hassena and Abhay's bond !

Originally posted by: Selinapiya

Lovely update,,...

oh Abhiya seperated...😭😭


dont cry dear
woh bhuaat jald milein ge!

Originally posted by: Akshi0019

lovely update...n it was quite emotional...

i loved it... n waiting 4 abhays letter..
cont soon


Thanks dear
i hope u like the update!

Originally posted by: ...Tich...

Munaza nice part.
But how come jeh is grown up while abhiya are kids?


Ye mystery he dear!
Thanks btw!

Originally posted by: abhiora

superb!!continue pls!


Thank u dear

Originally posted by: neha_dubey1709

awesome update... Continue soon :-) and Thanxx for the pm


Ur welcome dear
hope u like the next part

Originally posted by: sunu123

HEY DEAR😃

AWESOME UPDATE DEAR👏👏👏...I REALLY FEELS BAD FOR BOTH YAAR😭😭😭😭😭...PLZ AB JALDI SE DONO BADA KARDO YAAR...AB AUR INTEJAR NAHI HOTA...PLZ UPDATE SOON YAARHAV A NICE DAYLUV USUNITA


Aww dear
dono jaldi milein ge
dont worry
thanks for ur views

Originally posted by: peehu24

lovely update...continue soon...and take care...thanks for pm


Thanks dear

Originally posted by: princessark

Nice concept. Do pm me too


Thanks dear

Originally posted by: Gals_11

Gr8 update yaar.. carry on.. thanx for d pm..lol.


thanks dear

Originally posted by: charmingkiller

awesum part! awww soo sad


Thanks dear

Originally posted by: iqrahareem

Nyce =D... plzzz pm me...


Thanks dear

Originally posted by: Abhiya_vijata

Awesome UpdatesClapClap!!!!!luved it😃...Poor abhiyA feel bad for both of demCryCry...Hope dat dey will meet again😳...Bt y was Jeh Khurana so Curious abt Pia when he first saw her??😕😕 Is she like abhay??I mean some Supernatural thingy??Anyways Plss Continue...Wanna read more:D add me 2 ur Pm list:)


Stay tunned to see what happens next
Thanks btw!

Originally posted by: purple_shadoz

hey...ur ff hs a vry ntstng cncept...hope abhiya grw usp sun n fal n lv wd each odr agn...wtng 4 ur updates...lov u loadzzz... cn u plz pm me??...😛


Thanks dear

Originally posted by: Evyyy

Heey. I really loove this FF,and most important,i can understant it.Thanks for your written in english,thx thx thx,and keep going like that.The story is really different,i like to thing how Piya and Abhay look when they are kids.Well,PM me when you update,PLEASE.


Thanks alot dear!
these kind of appreciation makes me more confident

Originally posted by: ilove99

lovely update...plz update it soon


Thanks meera this update is for u

Originally posted by: abhiya07

loved it!!!!!!

plz pm me 2


Thanks dear

Originally posted by: anji99

awesome story. Really took my breath away. Please add me to ur PM list. Eagerly waiting 4 ur update


Thanks alot dear
hope u like the next update!

Originally posted by: pkyekrox

pls pm me wen u upd8!!


Thanks alot dear hope u like the next update!
Edited by M2NZ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
Chapter 4

Hey piya ,

How are you? I hope you are fine dear! I miss you a lot, yahan sab hai but tum nahi ho sachi. Tum meri fikar mat karna yahan sab thek hai , mom bhuat achi hai who mera bhuaat khayal rakhti hai , everytime she is with me, dad be ache hain but woh zyadatar office aur business meetings me hote hain. Yahan sba black hai , Raichands ka favourite color lagta hai mujhey toh , me yahan kisi se bat nahi karta pata nahi kyun awkward sa lagta hai, tum batao sab kaise hain wahan? Aunt Mary? Woh room mates? Koi tumhe pareshan toh nahi karta na? I feel coming to you everytime , I wish I had wings so I could fly and come daily to you , yahan hum ne bhuaat sari jaga dekhein , next month hum Disney world ja rahe hain aur mom ne kaha hai tum humare saath chalo gi, chalo gi na piya? Bhuaat maza ahye ga aur tumhe mom dad bhi bhuaat pasand ahyein ge , saath me maze hoga piya , icant wait to have you with me piya' me roz yehi sochta hun hum kab milein ge sachi! U me togetter! Ok I have to go school time bubye !

Urs obidently Abhay

As piya read it with swollen eyes , she came to know abhay is happy but missing her. She doesn't want to be part of his life, she should stay away from him Aunt Mary told her. Abhay should remain happy in his own new life shouldn't look back again and again that would make him even sadder. Before he could come here she should go away from here. Piya went to her room took out picture of her mother and cried a lot hugging it , then she took out Abhay and Piya's picture traced fingers on Abhay's picture and kept in her school bag , placing all important things in the bag she made her mind to go away from all.

Jeh Khurrana was reading all the details about Piya Jeswal , ,"Hmmm, I found you . As I thought you the decent of Mathili , powerful witch . I just want to make sure do you have the same powers like her or null like your mother."

"What are you wasting time on Jeh?" Dipanita Khurrana entered tensed.

"Mom I have my own ways!" Jeh looked up to his mother.

"Yeah right, you know that Abhiyendra , in which age he is? In which part of this globe? Jeh I am fed up of u" slamming her hand on the table.

"Mom I told u, I will do it myself, That Abhiyendra, I wont leave him , I will find him out." Stepped out from cabin leaving frustrated Dippanita behind.

"MOM!!!!!!!!!" Abhay screamed jumping on the bed.

"Yes Abhay? And Good Morning" Hassena entered in Abhay's room with glass of milk

"Good morning to you too, Postman came?" Abhay getting excited more.

Hassena knew abhay is waiting for Piya's letter but she didn't reply , its been three days since he is waiting for piya's reply. Every day she used to make any excuse so doesn't get sad.

"Umm Abhay, you know na post service kitni slow hai, Piya ko letter mila hoga ke nae aur agar piya ko mil gaya hoga aur us ne send kiya hoga tau abhi yahan tak paunchne me kitni dair lagaye ge" saying this she sat on the bed giving confused look to Abhay.

Abhay circled his hands in Hassena's neck , resting his chin on her shoulder.

"Mom kya pata , piya mujh se abhi tak naraz hogi" getting sad.

"Nahi beta, ap jese dost se who kese naraz reh sakti hai." Hassena caressing abhay's cheeks.

"Ok chalo Abhay hum racing karte he stairs tak, I hope aj me jeet jaun, I know you are very fast" trying to run out from room.

"No ways, mom no need of cheating" Abhay ran out following Hassena.

"Ok, Aunt Mary, thank you for information , if u find her do let us know." Hassena hung up the phone, facing towards chand.

"Chand , piya ran away from orphanage . What would I answer Abhay now?"

"Hassena time will change everything, Abhay will forget her , let the time change everything " sipping his favorite drink.

"Muma? Abhay" A girl laying unconscious on a bed kept on mumbling two names , Mr & Mrs. Dobriyal found her when she accidently came infront of their car and fainted. Its been one day she is in this state. Mrs. Dobriyal was already adoring the child , they didn't have kids and always wanted one and according to her now she thinks this child is now blessing to them.

"Arnab yeh bachi me me khud se khabi dur nae karun gi , please hum isey apne saath le jate he"

Arnab couldn't look madhu like this so he nodded and went out for doctor.

Precap :

"Hello Mr.Raichand! ap yahan?"

"oh hi , Mr.dobriyal . I am on vacations with my son and my wife".

"Acha acha! Me going for business trip with family madhu and my daughter" .

Edited by M2NZ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
ausum update...raichands and dobriyals are frnds...and pia will be with dobriyals...wow...nice...hope they meet soon...update soon...thanks for pm...
Edited by peehu24 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
great update. ohh abhay is missing her so much and pia is now adopted by dobriyals and they know raichands. I just hope abhay pia meet again real soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
awsm wrk dear...lvd it cmpltly...⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
loved your FF. Abhay and piya's relationship is soo cute. Poor piya, she is missing abhay.
Do continue soon. Will look forward to the next update😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
aww..beautifull...i was reading ure ff when pm arrived...
my username has been changed..from dolma.rose
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
and please add me to your PM list. And do continue soon
Edited by piyabhay4ever - 13 years ago

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