YOU NEVER KNOW (MAANEET) # 2

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somia

@sstylishdoll

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Posted: 13 years ago

#611

Ab sasha ki bari and thanx

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Anubhuti

@tellyme

Sparkler

+ 18

Posted: 13 years ago

#612

Originally posted by: piya-
My Sheru bachha

Piggy knew it u can never harm maneet

that idiot stupid bas***d, ras**l Dev... teri ye himmat

Di u give me the address of that jerk i will kill him with my bare hands... geet ki taraf galat irado se bad raha tha

u jerk what do u feel sirf maan k aawaz se geet ko buddu bana sakthe the

maan toh geet k dil mein basse hai ...

Okay i coudn't recollect any song so this is a small poetry from my side... i hope u like it Di

" Har lamhe mein tumhe dekha har zarre mein tumhe paya... tum laakh dur sahi par maine tumhe inn dhadkano mein basaya... meri har saas mein teri khusboo mehekthi hai...seene ki har dhadkan bus terta naam lehti hai... ye duniya kya jaane k tum mere kaun ho bus aaj itna samaj lo k tum hi meri ruh ho... tumse na hi koi mujhe cheen paya hai aur na hi koi cheen paayega...tumhari amanaat ko bachaneke liye agar maut bhi aajaye tab bhi khushi se ussmein simat jaayungi par kabhi tumhare alawa kisi aur ki parchayi khud par padne nahi dungi..."

I really want that shasha to be in jail

continue soon Di

I hope u like my poetry

Do tell me k aapko meri poetry pasand aayi ya nahi

love-Piggy (Urs Piya)

Loved it Piggy dear...

I always say I love your dialouges and how well you manage it...

And here you are with a wonderful poem... very well said...

It completely said the heart of Geet... She gave her everything to save herself for maan and only maan...

It also shows your wonderful analysis Dear...

With your permission I am gonna post it in my next update...

Luv U

--Sheru

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Anubhuti

@tellyme

Sparkler

+ 18

Posted: 13 years ago

#613

Originally posted by: ritzy09
kya baat hai piggy...abhi tak toh dialogues he poetic the...u have started writing poem too...you are really good at it yaar...there are no two words about it

very nice poem...gives an essence of Maaneet and their love...their soul

Completely agree with you POOH...

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meena..

@meena..

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#614

awesome

but u ended in cliffhanger this is not good

cont soon

thanks for pm

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ana56

@ana56

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#615

wow awesome update dear

i love the way u showed geet as a brave girl
and the way she came to knw tht it was nt maan was awesome
loved it

now i want sasha to be fired by maan

continue soon dear

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Niharika

@Niharika.Nair

Rocker

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#616

Thank god!!! Maan reached on-time. Hope Maan will get to know who helped Dev soon...

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cloudflower

@cloudflower

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#617

awesome update dear

loved the way how geet understood it wasn't maan

how couldn't she afterall their souls know each other so well 😳

that moron dev 😡 how dare he tried to defame an innocent girl 😡

glad that his plan didn't succed due our brave geet 😊

maan came in right time and geet is safe now with him

hope that dev'll get much deserved punishment for his misdeeds

sasha was so worried 😲 hope maan willl get to know about her real face behind her mask of goodness soon

poor geet 😭 hope she''ll be fine with maan's support soon

geet really need maan at the moment

hope maaneet will surely pass this test of their unconditional love as '' love cures people , both the ones who receive it and the ones who give it ''

thanks for the pm

please continue soon