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Posted: 13 years ago
wow sameera got arrested she deserve it nice update can't see Maan in so much guilt sob sob, he'll find her.
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART:60
maan want one glance of her he dont no in what condition he is now he is compltely in bewildered condition today he had lost his love and best mate even dev said that geet is not like that but he belived me in the words of meera he is hurted his heart is in agony...he moved in to the mansion and went for tai_ chi no one knows that maan had came back he is completely out of his mind
his mind and heart is saying only one name that is geet ! geet ! geet !
where she is ?
he want to meet her? talk to her ?he should remorse himslef for what he did to her but how even now nikhil is also not there? they went somewhere why i did not give a chance to geet when she want to explain me but why i did not give why i did not trust her?
my love is the that weak that i did not give a chance to explain her do i really did not trust geet ?how can that be ! when she is my life why i cant say that those pics are fake when meera gave me ! why i should belive her words today my life is worse than anything i lost everything
i dont no but everything was happened only beocz of me and my anger if i gave a chance to her may be today she is able to with me and if i wont reach the house in correct time even now i m not able to know about geet !
she is pure hearted girl where i m nothing and i know i m possesseive for her but today what i did was a mistake
how could i?when geet cried before me i not even thought she is saying the truth but i thought that as crocodile tears and i compared her with sameera who is the cause of all this
i should kill her when i saw her first time or when she want to cheat me next time but i left her that is my wrong
why i did not think that sameera can do this but i never thought that meera can be in the part of this
i cant forgive meera but i should becoz dev loves her lot and i never cant forgive myself becoz i make my life to cry my smile to cry my heart to cry my soul to cry
he falls down and thinking about the moments when they spend eachother
he is just crying with loud voice at that moment dadimaa & dev came and they saw him doing that way they themselves for fear to go near maan but dadimaa thought she should
maan !
he just hugged her legs and crying i m bas**** that i hurted geet dadimaa
she is not like that but seeing those pics i thought something about her i thought she is not good she is a bi*** how can i say that word to her dadimaa when she is the smile of mine
how can i do this dadimaa?
i have no right to be the partner in her life now she is nowhere dadimaa
when i went meera house there i saw sam who is threatning meera and i heard there coversation
i was just fainted
he knew dev was there so only he saw meera did not do wantedly but did by saying sam becoz she threats her
i lost my life
when i want to ask forgive ness there is no geet dadimaa she left somewhere and nikhil is also not there
where i can get her dadimaa?
they dont no how to console him ...

from that day onwards daily he use to go to SM that he can see anyone of them one day he knew where is nilhil but he dont want to meet him and they been away he tried to know about geet but she is no where
after 6 months from MEHRA'S a inviatation came that is pari & nikhil's wedding
but there is no invitation from nikhil he felt bad but he thought may be geet can come so he went with whole family where he saw nikhil & karan but he cant see geet there
nikhil saw maan he want to make him out of the marriage but pari said dad called him dad dont no what had happened between u and him
he stopped becoz this is the marriage time and he dont want worng if geet knews she ll be sad again
he not even give shake hand to maan
he is so cold to whole khuran's
dadimaa went near nikhil but he turned hi face and says u had been with ur grand son and u left me ...
that hurted her but what he said is right !
they left from without seeing them again
while he is leaving karan came and hugged him and said u are also my son maan
but i m angry on u till today but in ur eyes i can see the agony and remorse so i ll say she is not here mann
where is maama?
that i wont say! becoz i promised her and more than u i love her maan!
seach for her u ll know if ur love is true then!


precap: 5 years after{leap dear}


dear as my collge started i want end soon this ff DHADKAN ll continue but this one
i ll make a happy ending where geet wont forgive mann that easily but ya fianlly she does how u should read
i m sad for ur likes and comments dear
sometimes u ll give more
i m sending 255 pms
pls do comments dear


pls do comments
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Edited by abisamratgunjan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Me first to comment on Maan's remorse!!!
It is indeed heart wrenching to see Maan in pain, but here he deserves it, he didn't trust Geet's love and when I see him in pain, mujhe yaad aathi hai ki agar yeh itna toot raha hai toh Geet ka ky ahaal hoga, uss bechari ki toh koi galati bhi nahi thi phir bhi hameesha dard hi dard mila hai...

I like the concept of 5 yr leap, but FF going to end??? now that's bit painful, but studies are always important!!!
Edited by maanhar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update so a leap of 5 years let see what is in store for maaneet
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsmmm update... as always...
loved it to the core...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
nyc update dear
poor maan bechara kya karega?
thnx for d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
loved it
feel sad for maan
but he deserve it
he didn't trust geet and their love, her love for him so he is repenting now
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maanhar

Me first to comment on Maan's remorse!!!

It is indeed heart wrenching to see Maan in pain, but here he deserves it, he didn't trust Geet's love and when I see him in pain, mujhe yaad aathi hai ki agar yeh itna toot raha hai toh Geet ka ky ahaal hoga, uss bechari ki toh koi galati bhi nahi thi phir bhi hameesha dard hi dard mila hai...

I like the concept of 5 yr leap, but FF going to end??? now that's bit painful, but studies are always important!!!




dear i said i ll end it soon
but not so soon
it takes sometime to wrap me
but pls be with me
i know even i m feeling bad for mann
but that doenst matter here
how much geet is taking
and maan is remorsing it

love,
abi
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome part
loved it
feel sad for maan
but he deserve it
he didn't trust geet and their love, her love for him so he is repenting now
continue soon



yes dear
he did not trust his love
so only he is in the pain today
let be him for somedays
becoz the pain which geet is taking is more than him

love,
abi
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Posted: 13 years ago
Don't be sad...
Aapke ke ff ki update keliye hum logh
har roz dekhthe hai...
Waise wonderful update...
Continue soon...

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