FF. MAD ABOUT YOU' part 2 on pg 11. plz comment:) - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
hayee hayee pheli bar hi phisal gaya munda...
wo u have rocking writting skills pal😉
u r prolouge was so cool...
nice sketch too
and the story commence was really hillarious girl.😆.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
jaan...jus got one thing 2 sayy!

YOU R AWSUMMM<3




PS: plz do continue:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOW Mari...u r an awesome writer...😳😃
gr8 ff...great job...👏👏👏
continue soon...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
Great ff but parts r short. . .
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice dear. 😊
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I WOULD LIKE TO GO WITH YOUR STORY

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wow...it was just too good yaar...👏
U write really well...I loved reading ur ff...since from the intro part...
Good job sweety...👍🏼
waiting for the next pat now...
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amazing update...
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i like it..
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Part 2

Although Maan SINGH KHURANA was a business tycoon, his passion was street fighting. He went out to take a stroll in the park. As he was passing along a street he saw lightings on and he heard cheering. He went there and saw people fighting. Maan understood it is street fighting. One guy was winning every round. The crowd was saying that it is impossible to beat him up. A sudden smile crept on Maan's face and he raises his hand to fight.

Fighter: you won't be able to win.

Maan: we'll see about it.

Fighting starts. ( maan take off his shirt, girls were alredy swooning seeing his tattoos, his abs, biceps etc😳😳😳). maan was winning every single round. As the other party saw Maan winning , they cheated and put something in his eyes. Maan was not able to see because of that and eventually the fighter took advantage and beat Maan up.😡😡😡😡 As the fighting ends they took Maan to hospital and left him there. Luckily one doctor knew about khurana's, he called and inform dadima.

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Dr Kirti: you are incharge of MAAN SINGH KHURANA case.

Geet: but mam I have to go home''

Dr Kirti: doctor's first responsibility is their patients.

Geet: yes but its not my duty and'.

Dr Kirti: ENOUGH., get back to work

Geet : yes mam ( Geet was fuming in anger).

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Dr Kirti: don't worry, I put the best doctor of sanjeevani to take care of Maan.

Dadi: thanks kirti. I am so worried. Can I meet Maan?

Dr Kirti: sure he is in room 36.

( dadi was passing the hallway and bump into Geet.)

Geet : sorry

Dadi: its alright princess.

Geet looked so beautiful to dadi that dadi felt like taking her home and keep her there forever.

Geet: pata hai main bohat gussa hoon. Mujhe kisi kudoos ka case mila hai. Kya naam tha uska haan maan, maan

Dadi: Maan singh khurana.

Geet:haan wohi. App jotshi ( astrologer) hain kya? Main bhi na pagal hoon and she kept going on and on and on.

Dadi: ( wow she talks a lot)

Geet: I talk to you later. Bye sexy. ( she winks)

Dadi: bye princess.( she winks back).

Dadi met Maan and went back home.

Geet enters room 36 and saw a patient.

Geet: tumhari wajah se yeh sab hua.

Maan: excuse me

Geet: because of you I was not able to go to my friend's party. When u cant fight why u go in the ring.? Are u insane? I am your incharge doctor and I will make sure you get 4 injections.

Maan: SHUTUP. Tum doctor ho yah F.M. radio that goes on and on.

Geet: you know I know you guys. Try to flirt with girls by showing your body and all

( by now Maan was sure this girl is mad).

Maan: you are HOT.

Geet: what the !!!!!!

Maan: if u think I will say that you are wrong.

Even if I am flirt, let me tell you, you are not hot or attractive at all. ( maan knew this is just random but know he wanted to irk geet).

Geet: I am not hot. What you mean? ( try to show him her body, check her waist and legs and all.) geet control herself and see Maan smirking.

Geet: I HATE YOU.!!!

Maan: no problem; feelings are mutual.

PRECAP: you guys have a long way to go together.

please do comment😃😃😃😃
thank you😊😊

Edited by iampretty - 14 years ago

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