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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#111

aww... payal!
awesum update!
so.. mayu gonna pick her up.😍.
but d dialogues u added wr just fab! , 👏
esp dis one "Thanks ...by the way tumhare mobile pe kya Nupur alert message aaya tha jo tum achanak yahaan mujhe...yun gyaan dene chale aaye?" 🤣
cont soon!
luv ya !🤗
Edit..
Happy Friendship day 2 u!😃

Edited by -SupriyaluvsMN- - 14 years ago

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dua

@dua22

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#112

Too good...enjoyed it totally...haye he is going to pick her up... 😍
continue soon

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.SA.

@.SA.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#113

wow!!!
Mayu apne dil ke haathon majboor hai.😉
he really is gonna carry her,is'nt he??

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#114

superb update dear.

awww...mayank gonna carry her

awesome.

continue soon

thanks for the pm.

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#115

How how how on earth do you manage to write their dialogues to perfection and so in sync with their characters,Payal?? Im in awe of this every time i read it:-)
great great chapter..their convo made me laugh and i could imagine them so clearly..hehe...and now it seems Mayank will carry her to the shoe shop..haha..i cant cant cant wait for the next chap..so kripya karke plz update soon:-) okay? :-D

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-Annu-

@-Annu-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#116

Palluuu...🤗🤗
Mayu vl carry her to the Shop...😳😆
Luvlyyy Update...👏
ur writing Style is So Much Gud...o it was gud before too...😳
BUT nw the way u r describing...Beautifullyyy Written...😳👏👏
i just luv the way mayank n Nupur r in This storryy...😳
Luv yaaa...Continuee soon...😳🤗
Annu😳

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dua

@dua22

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#117

Continue it dear plzzz...i am very eager to read more

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Ally

@.PINK.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#118

hey Payal firstly myself Lina, big hugee fan of MayUr berry berry nice to meet ya sachi mein sis I lubbbed reading da first part to diz FF na !!! sope Nupz in Mumbai n den both MayUr met each other in auto 😆 Nupz kept on staring @ him n den he too kept staring at her, n den decided not to since he waz getting late to work n Nupz waz already late of her first day of work !!

sachi mein sis I lubbed reading dizz part n amazinGG title na !!
kan't wait to read next part

-Linu

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Ally

@.PINK.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#119

part 2 awww kitna cute part hai !! sachi mein Shilpa aunty n Mayu best ma-bete jodi evaa na !!!
Mayu sed dat Shilpa aunty shouldn't drink tea with too much sugar in it, n den she sed it waz sugar free

n den he sed it wazn't

n she sed she put sugar in sugar free tea🤣

Shilpa aunty bhi na
sope Nupz working with Shilpa aunty

just love seeing Mayu irratated with her

she sed Nupz gr8 gal😳 n Mayu asked her waz she 1 he saw in auto n den he sed dat she waz late

n Shilpa aunty aww shezz soo understanding !

n den she as alwayzz discussing about hiz marriage

n da he'll neber get bahu for her

n he sed it waz good 😆 n he wouldn't b bothered like showzz saas-bahu 😆

kan't wait to read again na

Nupz late again 4 work

-Linu

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Ally

@.PINK.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#120

part 3 lol I couldn't imagine a better part dan diz !!😳 sachi mein MayUr I lubbb dem n Nupz irratating poor Mayu 4 4 dayzzz in Shilpa'z office 🤣 n den when he came home guess who he found

NUPURR TADAAA!!!🤣

he asked Nupz n she sed she waz shocked 2 but she sed dat she didn't knew hiz name n he did research on her 🤣 n den he asked her if he can come in hiz own house n den Shilpa aunty suggested to drop Nupz home but he sed nope

n Nupz sed it waz ok na !!
n Shilpa aunty asked him y he behaiving like dat n she made him realize dat Nupz waz only helping him
on other hand Nupz mad @ him 4 behaving like dat to her, but she doesn't care about him.

Kan't wait to read more na !!
🤗

love ya Payal

-Linu