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Posted: 14 years ago
👏very nice ff
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wow. . Lovely nice update. . . .
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hey awesome update... Loved the jealousy part... Do pm me next time :-) and plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update! Poor Abhay! He just can't get Tina off his back! And the friction between Abhay and Piya just makes their story so much more passionate! It was super cute to see Abhay worried about Piya! Eagerly waiting for the next update and please PM me whenever you update next! Thanks! 😊
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hey i loved it... pm me next tyn u update plzz...
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completely awesome dear
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Umm those who wants Pm i can't missglam is updateing so i won't b visitng i-f i'll opne it just a day to only edit it ! :)
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wow awesome update.I loved it.Nxt time do PM me.Yay I love last line of Abhay sunny is a boy & u need a real man & tht is Abhay.Yipee Loved tht kiss scene.Plzzc continue😳
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Hey!! Loved it a lot.. Please PM me next time.. Loved the jealous games between them :)
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PART 11 :

He moved so quickly she didn't even see it happen. He walked her back until she hit the wall and he was pressed against her. "I would rather save my crazy fiance sorry "Business partner." With that he leaned down and gave her a hard kiss on the lips and turned around and left the room. But before he left he delivered one last parting shot. "Stop trying to make me jealous with that tool Sunny. It's not working. " "He's a boy and you and I both know you need a real man. " And then he winked at her. Leaving Piya once again at a loss for words.

Piya watched Abhay leave and shook her head. What was happening here she thought. It seemed that since Abhay had come into her life she no longer had control of her emotions or actions. Either they were fighting or kissing! She was totally losing control. When she first agreed to go along with this "business partnership/engagement" she thought she would have the upper hand. But lately it seemed that Abhay was the one making the decisions, laying down the law. If things continued this way how was she ever going to work with him. He'd be bullying her and walking all over her. That would not do Piya thought to herself determinedly. No more nice girl she thought. It was time to show Abhay who was boss.

About 7:00 am the next morning.

Piya didn't want to wake up. She felt so warm and cozy She burrowed deeper into her pillow trying to fall back asleep, except her pillow felt so hard. Was her pillow always so rock hard she thought drowsily. She was so warm, what was wrong wit her AC? She almost felt like the sun was shining down on her. But ouch, what was that thumping in her head. Piya again tried to bury her face into her pillow trying to make the thumping stop but the pillow just wasn't giving. She slowly opened her eyes and then quickly shut them. Why was it so bright in her room? Then she listened, she thought she could hear something around the intense drums beating in her head. She thought she could hear water, and were those birds chirping in the background. What was going on here? Piya tried opening her eyes again. This time slower. Once she'd focused, she found herself staring face first into a very naked male chest! A very large and defined male chest. Piya gasped as she quickly pulled herself away from this chest. That was no pillow she thought miserably. The sudden movement made her dizzy. I think I'm going to be sick she thought as she closed her eyes again. Her mind was racing, and her heart was beating so fast it felt like it was going to come out of her chest. What have I done, What have I done she was thinking. Forcing herself to open her eyes she looked down and saw that she was wearing her bikini top and her skirt. She was on a very large chaise and oh my god...she was on the beach!!!!! How did this happen Piya thought as she closed her eyes again. Taking deep breaths, she couldn't bring herself to open her eyes to see "who" the chest belonged to that she had been so cosily snuggling up to.

Then she heard the words "hello sunshine" and her eyes flew open. There on the chaise lying in front of her with just his shorts on and a cocky smile was Abhay Malhotra!

Flashback to the previous night around 8:00 pm

Piya came into the living room and saw that everyone was ready. Abhay was sitting out on the deck with his laptop and his phone to his ear. This was her chance she thought. "Let's go everyone" she whispered. Riya and Sanchit gave her an odd look. "Di why are you whispering?" Riya questioned. "I'm not whispering" Piya said in a whisper. "Let's go, come on stop wasting time we have a party to get to." The group looked at eachother, some shrugging their shoulders at Piya's absurd behaviour. "Tina is still getting ready" Raj pointed out. Piya gave him a glare. " We can't wait for her and besides she'll have her boyfriend Abhay to keep her company.

"Di aren't you forgetting something?" Priya asked as Piya pushed everyone to the door glancing back at Abhay who seemed to be in a heated conversation with someone on the phone. Good she thought, now she could make her get away. "Di?!"Priya said again. "What?" Piya asked impatiently glancing in Abhay's direction again. Priya pointed down at Piya's feet." Piya looked down past her white fitted tank top which she wore on top of a blue and white polka dot bikini, past her short flirty tourqoise blue skirt to her feet. "Oh" Piya said, looking down at her feet. In her hurry she'd forgotten her flip flips. "Okay everyone go downstairs and be quiet I'll be down in 2 mins." she said. Piya ran upstairs and grabbed her flip flops. and just as she was running out the front door she heard "where do you think you're going by yourself." Piya looked back and saw Abhay standing there with his arms folded across his chest. "Nowhere, I mean somewhere...I mean...none of your business." Piya said angrily. Abhay chucked to himself. "Are we really going to do this again Piya?" he asked. "Fine" Piya said almost stomping her foot. " Fine I'm going to a party and you're not invited." "Are you invited?" Abhay asked. "Ofcourse I'm invited." she said to him with a "are you an idiot" expression on her face. "Well then I'm invited." he said with a shrug. "Let's go." he said grabbing her elbow. "What, like this? Aren't you going to change?" she asked grabbing at straws. Abhay looked down at his khaki cargo shorts and royal blue Abercrombie and Fitch t-shirt. What's wrong with what I'm wearing he asked. Piya frowned, nothing damnit she thought in her head as she glared at him. He looked perfect!

"Oh wait a minute" Piya said with a slow smile. "What about Tina?" "You can't leave without her, why don't you wait for her and you two can come later." Like I'm going to give you the right directions Piya thought evily to herself. Abhay gave Piya a hard look and then yelled "Tina we're leaving in 1 minute, with or without you." 30 seconds later Tina came running down the stairs. " I'm ready, I'm ready" she said out of breath. "Let's go." Piya glared at Abhay and stormed out the door.

The party was two beaches over so they walked. You could hear the music well before you got there. The party was in full swing with lots of people already dancing. Alcohol was flowing freely. Music pumping loudly. Piya saw Issac Silva, the artist she met earlier in the day through the crowd. He was the one that invited them to the party which was being thrown by a rich friend of a friend. Piya waved at Issac and he motioned for her to come over.

Piya turned to Abhay and said "since you're here I'll introduce you to an artist I met this afternoon. His work is brilliant and I think his work would look great in our hotel." Abhay nodded and agreed to come and meet him.

Piya introduced Abhay and Issac and the three talked business for a few minutes. Abhay seemed to be impressed with Issac's work and knowledge. Piya in turn was impressed by the questions Abhay asked. The three agreed that this wasn't the place to talk business and that they would meet the next afternoon to go over details of the project and contract. Issac excused himself for a minute when Abhay turned to Piya. "Good eye" he said, "his work is really good and looks original too. Hopefully we can work through details and have him work with us. " Piya looked up at Abhay surprised. "Thanks" she said pleasantly surprised by the compliment. Isaac reappeared but not empty handed. He handed both Piya and Abhay a drink in a shot glass. This drink is a local favourite, and then he made a toast to the 3 of them working together. Piya happily toasted and took back the shot. Whoa that was strong she thought shaking her head and making a face. "Good huh?" Issac said as he handed her another before she could say anything. She looked at Abhay and he was staring at her. She stared at him and drank back the drink. Strong but this time she didn't mind it as much.

Piya looked behind her and saw her cousins dancing, she excused herself and ran over to them. The waitress passed by with a tray of drinks and Sanchit grabbed one and passed another too her and Piya took yet another shot. By this time she was starting to feel more relaxed. There were more people dancing and the music was getting louder. Piya grabbed another drink and shot it back.. By this time she was well on her way to being drunk. She was in her own little world as she danced to the music.

Aa.aa a..aw..
Aa..aaa..aa aww...
Hey..!!
Phir Dekh Raha Hai
Aaj Aankh Sek raha hai
Kal haath Seekega
Aaj Dheel Choda Raha hai
Kal Khud hi tokega
Aaj Mere liye Chair kheench raha hai
Kal Meri Skirt Kheenchega
Kheeche ga ki nahin ? hmm... ?
Aakkad bakkad Bambay bo
Aassi Nabbe Poore Sau
Sau rupaye ka Dum jo lun
Do sau gum ho udan Chhu
Phir kyun main tu
kar rahe Tain Tu...
Unche se uncha banda,
potty pe baithe nanga..
Phir kaahey ki society,
saali kaahey ka paakhanda..
Bheje se kaleje se, kaleje ke khaleje se
Mit jaaye hum, maroge toh jiyo bhi dum maaro dum.
Dum Maaro Dum
Mit Jaaye Ghum
Bolo Subha Shaam
Hare Krishna Hare Krishna
Hare Krishnaa
Hare Ram
Dum Maro Dum
Mit Jaye Gham
Bolo Subha Shaam
Hare Krishna..Hare Krishna
Hare Krishnaa
Hare Krishna..Hare Krishna
Hare Krishnaa
Hare Ram
Movie: Dum Maro dum


Abhay watched Piya dance. The way she was moving to the music she looked extremely sexy. The beach was getting really crowded and people were dancing quite close to eachother. He saw Sunny come over to Piya and put his hands on her hips from the back. She startled and them when she saw him, she laughed and threw her arms around him giving him a big hug. Pulling away she started dancing with her. Abhay watched from afar, not happy with how close they were dancing. Abhay noticed Sunny pull Piya close to him and whisper something in her ear. Piya shook her head and pulled back a little from Sunny. Sunny again pulled her closer and even in her drunk state pulled back, tripping a little at the same time.

Abhay had seen enough. He walked over and cut in. Sunny looked into Abhay's face and saw the anger in his eyes and stepped back and let Abhay cut in. Piya at that moment tripped again and Abhay caught her. Seeing Abhay she smiled, a tipsy smile. She threw her hands around Abhay's neck surprising Abhay. "Hi" she said in a slurred bubbly voice! "Hi" Abhay said looking down at her. "Here's your drink Di," Raj said coming up to them. Just as Piya grabbed the drink Abhay said softly into her ear, "don't you think you've had enough Piya?" Piya pulled back giving him a glare with her glazed over eyes. "You're not the boss of me" she said as she drank back her drink. Then she giggled and hiccuped and then giggled again. Oh yeah you're fine Abhay thought to himself. Get away from me Abhay, I want to dance" she slurred. Abhay didn't move and within a minute of her "dancing" she tripped and almost fell but Abhay caught her. "Oops she giggled." Then she threw her arms around Abhay's neck and started swaying to the music. Abhay put his hands on her hips to keep her from falling again. Abhay looked down at her and stated the obvious. "Your'e drunk" he said with a small smile on his face. "No I'm not." she said with a hiccup. "Oops," and then more giggles. Then she looked up into Abhay's eyes and said "Abhay you're so cute, cho cute and then she pinched his cheeks giggling the whole time. "Okay Piya, I get it.. I'm cute" he said smiling,

"No you're not cute she said with a pout, puppies are cute." "You're...HOT" she said matter of factly. "Why are you so hot Abhay?" she asked with her face tilted up at him like she was asking the most important question in the world. "You think I'm hot Piya' Abhay chuckled. Nope she said at the same time nodding yes "Do you think I'm hot Abhay?" Piya asked suddenly. "I think, you're amazing Piya," Abhay answered softly. Piya paused and then impatiently questioned "I know I'm amazing but do you think I'm hot Abhay" Abhay bust out laughing. He liked drunk Piya. "Yes Piya I think you're very hot." "You better believe it" she said confidently. "Hotter then that Tina of yours" she said with another hiccup. "She's not my Tina, Piya" he said patiently. Looking over to at Tina he saw that she was thankfully busy with Piya's cousin Raj.

Suddenlly Piya pulled away from him. "I want to go for a walk." she said and then she tripped again. Abhay caught her again. "Why don't we just sit instead We'll go for a walk later" he said trying to pacify her. "NO! I want to go for a walk now." With that she pushed away from him and started weaving through people, pushing and tripping as she went. Abhay caught up with her and grabbed her hand steading her and pulling her out of the sea of people. Once away from so many people Piya let go of Abhay's hand and ran a few steps ahead, catching herself as she almost fell. She twirled and then turned around and looked at Abhay. He had been right behind her ready to catch her if she fell. Seeing him she gave him a big smile and grabbed his hand and for a seond leaned into him again smiling up at him. Abhay felt his breath catch as he looked down at her. They walked some more, at one point Piya decided that Abhay needed to give her a piggy back ride which he did without too much hesitation. She giggled throughout the ride and Abhay couldn't help smiling. "WAIT!' Piya suddenly cried. "Let me down." she said to Abhay. They had come upon a beach house and Piya ran up to the side of it. " Look Abhay a swimming pool she squealed. Abhay I want to go for a swim." she said excitedly. " No Piya we can't" he answered back. Trying to pull her away from the gate. "No, Piya pouted stop being a bore. I'm going for a swim" she slurred looking at him with glassy eyes. With that she started climbing the gate. The gate was low but Abhay rushed to help her. What was he going to do with her he thought. He helped her over before she fell and broke something praying that they wouldn't end up in jail for trespassing! Abhay quickly climbed over too and then quickly looked around for a guard dog to come around the corner and attack them. But nope, nothing and no one looked like they were home either.

Looking over he saw Piya who had already taken her skirt off and was now struggling with getting her tank top over her bikini top and head. Looking at that gorgeous body, Abhay thought this girl is going to be the death of me. "Abhay help me." he heard her mumble from behind her top. He walked over and helped her take it off, painfully trying not to look at her. Give me strength god he prayed as he tried not to touch her. Piya stumbled over to the pool and was just about to topple over when Abhay caught her. "Oops" she gigled. Yeah oops he thought as he steadied her and quickly stop touching her trying not to think about how soft her skin was. Abhay took off his shirt and then slowly sat Piya down so that she could gently slide into the water. Doing the same thing himself. Piya went underwater and Abhay pulled her back up. She looped her arms around his neck and pressed herself against him smiling up at him. Abhay unwrapped her arms and moved away from her. Piya frowned and pouted. Oh god the pout Abhay thought. Piya moved away from him and her head went underwater again. Alcohol and swimming pools don't really mix Abhay thought. Piya caught his arm and tugged it so that he was now hugging her. She looped her arms around him again.

"Abhay tell me something" she slurred. "What do you want to know?" he asked taking deep breaths. "Ummm tell me something about me" she said. "About you? What do you want to know about you that you don't already know...you're stubborn, and arrogant and bull headed and you have a very short temper and you think you're always right." Piya hit him on the chest. "You're mean she pouted and tried pushing him away." "Okay fine, fine. Along with all those fine qualities you're also very caring, your loyal to a fault and protective of anyone that's yours. Your intelligent and caring and funny, and beautiful, extremely beautiful. You're confident and not bothered by what others may think of you, making you a true individual. You have a short temper but you don't hold grudges. "What you see is what you get with you, you don't know how to be fake, infact that might be one of your best and worst qualities, you wear your heart on your sleeve." You love fiercely and can hate fiercely...believe me I know about the hate. Piya looked up at him and said in a slurred voice "I don't hate you Abhay." Abhay looked deep into her eyes knowing that she probably wouldn't remember any of this tomorrow.

Abhay you're so sweet she said with a drunken smile. "Abhay, kiss me she suddenly demanded closing her eyes. "What?"Abhay said loudly starting to back away from her. But Piya had wrapped her legs around his waist. " KISS ME RIGHT NOW, RIGHT NOW" she demanded closing her eyes and pursuing her lips. Abhay looked at her with horror "no Piya I'm not kissing you. That is a very bad idea, very bad. Piya if possible pulled herself closer to him and then suddenly Abhay found himself pushed against the pool wall. "Piya" he warned "get a grip." "You are going to regret this tomorrow and blame me! We can't do this. I can't trust myself to stop at just one kiss." he said. "FINE" she snapped and stared at him pouting. Then Abhay saw the glint in her droopy drunken eyes. " Fine Abhay, you don't have to kiss me. I'll kiss you!" And before Abhay could react Piya was kissing him.

Abhay paused for a split second but then with a groan kissed her right back. The kiss was hot and intense and they broke apart for a second before they grabbed eachother again. Piya pressed herself closer to Abhay, and Abhay broke the kiss and then kissed her neck groaning and telling himself to stop. But any chance of coherant thought ended when Piya reached over and kissed him right below his ear and then bit his earlobe. He turned Piya around so that she was the one pressed against the pool wall and kissed her again and again. He could hear Piya's little moans and feel her hands on the back of his neck pulling him closer. The kisses became deeper and more and more intense, they didn't know how long they stayed there kissing and holding eachother.

Finally Abhay pulled back. "Piya we have to get back everyone must be looking for us" he said as he leaned his forehead against hers. Both were breathing heavily. Okay she whispered. Abhay helped her get out of the pool and put on her skirt. He grabbed his shirt and her hand. "I'm so tired Abhay" Piya said stumbling as they got back over the gate and back onto the beach. "Piya don't worry we'll be back home soon." Abhay quickly texted Sanchit letting him know that Piya was with him. "Abhay I'm so tired can't we sit for a bit" she asked sleepily. "Yeah we can do that Abhay answered as he spotted the chaise. Abhay laid back against it and Piya laid down next to him snuggling into his chest. "We'll stop for 2 minutes he said and then we'll go." "Okay" Piya said yawning. Abhay smiled down at her and kissed her forehead. What am I going to do with you Piya he thought to himself. You're weren't in my plans but now I can't imagine any sort of plans without you. Looking down at Piya he saw that she was fast asleep against his chest. Abhay smiled and closed his eyes too.

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