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Posted: 13 years ago
RAB NE BANA DI JODI
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its evening,sushant back home,from office with full anger,vasudha notices that,when she takes tea for him,sushant changes tv channals vasudha comes beside to him,'sushant kya hua?

sushant:kuch nai ha ,jab hona tha woh phele ho chuka hai.

vasudha:meine phone se teek nai baat kiya isliyeh naraz ho?

sushant:phone baat karo sab kuch pata chalgay kiya?

vasudha:matlab..sushant meine tumse...(sushant interferes)

sushant:kya khene wali thi tum,jathe hu aaj meri patni parishan mein hai,isko mein kisi aur ke mo se janliya,kitne ajeeb baat...(feels discusting)

vasudha:kise jane liya tume?

sushant:aur koun,hamesh ki tara is baar bhi mein tumari bare mein unse jane liya..

vasudha:mein tumse khene wali thi,likin...,

sushant :bas vasudha.kehenwalithi aur fir inform kar ne wali thi...vikram ko sab kuch pata hai,likn muje...

vasudha:kya tum shak kar rahi ho muj par?


sushant:shak nai kar raha hu,tumko ek baar bhi muje khene ka maan nai tha...


vasudha:sushant baat itna bada nai hai,aur vikram isliyeh pata yeh ki meine unse madat mangliya,

sushant:tho bada hone ne tak intazar karo na...

vasudha:sushant aisa koi intension nai hai mein apni pariwar ke liyeh tumse parishan nai kar ne chati hi...

sushant :kya tumra pariwar,hamra pariwar nai hai?muje lagta tha ki shadi ke baat tum kuch bhi nai chupaogi muje likn mein galat..sach hai ki tum hamesha akela rehe na chati hu,to fir shadi ka matlab kya hai...

vasudha:sushat tum kyun sabko galat samj rahi ho?aisa kasi baat kar sakthe tum...

sushant:nai vasudha aisi hai,jathe ho jab tumari parishani ki bare mein vikram se pata chalgaya,tab muje kitne dhhok hua,tum hamesha akele rehe na chati hu na.tho aaj se tum akeli raho...(with much anger fight with vasudha).

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vasudha:sushant aisa kyun baat kar rahi ho,aisa kuch bhi nai (she compeletly breakdown,but sushant leaves that place with emotional tears...)..

sushant also says:aaj ke baat mujse tum kuch bhi kehene ki zaroort nai vasudha,jaise tum chati ho waise hi raho...bas mujboor nai karongi tume,

vasudha cries much,she cant speak even a word infornt of sushant anger...everything went wrong for her...

vasudha feels it does nt big issue then why sushant react like this,but as for sushant he cant bear that vasudha in worries,also small problem can become big sometimes...also both does not talk to each other!



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Posted: 13 years ago
very interesting chapter!! i must say the story is getting very interesting.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SushantVasudha

very interesting chapter!! i must say the story is getting very interesting.


thanx,but i was wait to update this step by step...
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Posted: 13 years ago
jeena tho aisi


THE story revolves youngsters,sometimes they want to enjoy thier life but circumtances changed their life,
they forced to to take responsblity for their family,they have to meet challenges ,chaze someone,struggles ,stranges
difficulties .also blossoms loves in their life with someone but everytime destiny decides everything for their life!

Rajeev sharma,a millioner anand sharma and meenakshi sharma's son.who jus finished his project in UK
for their AM industries and jus arrive india,he felt so happy to be india...then he goes to home,he hugs his
mother like child,his mother says,go and gets ready to eat breakfast,he feels so happy,when his mother serves
his fav dishes,but while eating,he thought now he can enjoy his life..,but his father says now he should take
incharge AM industries..

rejeev refuses,says yeh kya hai papa muje apni zidagi thodasa enjoy i jus want to need
enjoy my life..aur bhut din hochuke kuch din apni dosti ke saat wqt bitha chati huin...

his father: mein manthe hu,koun rok tha hai,likn ek baat samaj lo,dost se saat bhat jaana ya fir gumana ,ek limit
ho the hai..aur dost hamesha hamare saat nai ayenge,aur tum ab AM industries ko smal na hai,aur mein bhi
unke umar mein aisa nai hota tha tho ab yeh dost ke saat mast kerne keliyeh kase milegha paise(his mother interferes
arre cum se cum kathe wqt par kuch kahe yeh unse...)
(so now he left after he says all these...

reejev: slilently,itne din project kaam tenson thi,aur yahan agayi tho,tumra pati ka lecutre shru hogayi,ise
bether waha hota,

his mother:beta tumra papa bhi teek kar rahi hai,tum unko zimadari uttalo na...jathe hu yahan kaffe dino woh
bhut kaam kar diya.isliyeh ke rahi hu beta.,(rajeev interferes,ok pls ab tum shru mat karo,mein AM
constructions..samalgha,likn sirf tumreliyeh...


Rajeev enters his cabin,he he gets knw about current project ,also have to work for it,due to his work.he need one of staff's
files he calls that staff his cabin for somework in due, he sees a girl infornt of him,standing widh simple dressin
long hair wid fresh face,he starts scold her.,but few seconds after he knew that she is nt cabin's real staff,
he gets calmdown,but meera looks cool,and then goes,after that office's one worker said soemthing wrong about
her rajeev goes to check his cabin,see meera talks with her four friends,name priya,riya,priya comes to her asks.
why did she done all this for her friend raj...

meera says.,priya,jane do na.

priya:un dono ki waje tumne daat sunna padegha na...(dev n raj)

riya:haa aur woh bhi kaam chod ke film dekne key liyeh gaye yeh...

meera"arre priya yeh umar hai ki sab kuch bhula ke kuch mazzaq rehe sakthe hai.muje dko muje moka nai mila
aisi rehene ki cum se cum apni dost ko kushi ko dek sakthi hu na...

(rajeev jus starts to impress of her thought,gets wonder)





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RAB NE BANA DI JODI
( VaSu)
sushant wakeup in the morning,vasudha in sad mood preparing for arti,sushant starts reading paper in the sofa,vasudha take tea for him to try to convince him,sushant suddenly stands when vasudha sit,he goes to take bath,without see her face ,vasudha gets hurt,few seconds after sushant gets to ready to go office,he jus stand for arti,vasudha,does tilak,but he does nt fills sindhoor for his anger on her,😡vasudha thought atlleast he could do that.vasudha stops him,sushant aisa kya kiya meine ki tum meri maangpar sidhoor bhi nai laga...

sushant:woh sirf pati patni kar the hain,likin muje nai laga hum pati patni hai,

vasudha:aisa kya hogaya hamre beech ,istarase baat kar rahi hu,mein manthi hu,meine kuch galat kia,likn is ka matlab yeh naisab kuch galt hogaya aur tum,humre rishte mein itna gussa tum kar rahi hu?(she asks him wih anger)

sushant:(holds her tightly and says 'mein jaisa pati nai hu,ki raat bisthar par saat reha kar sube sab kuch bhula kar sirf apni kaam karke ,patni ki seva mein aram hone ka,muje apni patni ke haar dard ,assom sab kuch saat milkar ek dusre ko baat na hai,(vasudha finds his uncontrol love for her ,even on this situation) but sushant says...,😭

likin tum nai chati hu mujse yeh sab baat ne ki tho kya is sinddor lagane matlab kya ho saktha hai.😒

vasudha:sushant ,agar aisa hai tho mein kyu tumko shadi karthi.😕

sushant:woh sirf sab kuch ek sympathy hai,kyunki tum muje sirf seva kar ne chati hu ,aur woh bhi sif isliyeh shadi se phle meine tumko kuch madat kiya .aur yeh sab muje kaal samaj gaya.😲

vasudha breakdown...kya tum is tara se baat kar rahi hu sushant,muje ekin nai hota,meri pyar ko smypathy ke rahi hu..kyu sushant?😭

sushant:kyunki tumne muje is haal par dal diya,jaana hu mein bhut bura baat kar rahi hu,likin iska karan sirf tum(wid teary eyes he takes his bag.he leaves office...,meanwhile vasudha decides to leave this home after this incident,she starts to pack her bags,coz she cant digest 💔that sushant feels she has nt true love on him...😭

while packing,she sees their photos and cries much.but few seconds after her diary lays down she takes that she notices that paper which sushant's poetry about her she reads, again she feels his true love on her,she changes her mind that she wont let him alone anytime,she needs to be here whatever his love or hate on her,'says in herself'jab tumari pyar keliyeh yahan thi,wase bhi tumari nafafrat key liyeh bhi mein yahan rehe gha...kyunk mein samj thi hu,tumri gusaa ya nafrat sab muj par, tumra pyar ka haq sushant..😭

ON THE other side in office,sushant sadly in his cabin thinks like what kind of situations is this that he forced to behave like this!😔


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RAB NE BANA DI JODI
( VaSu)

In the evening sushant back home,he did nt talk with vasudha,both sees eachother,sushant turns vasudha hold his arms.

vasudha:sushant itne bhi gussa ho,pls .kuch nai khaya tum,pls chai to piao na.

sushant:muje tumre haat se kuch bhi nai chaiya,he goes and make tea himself,

vasudha:sushant,deko,meri baat suno...

sushant:bas vasudha ab kya kene chati ho?tum hamesha akela rehene ki adat padgayi ho,tho aisi raho...
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vasudha:sushant itna gussa aaj tak phle tum ne kabhi nai kithi muje..

sushant:bas vasudha jab tum apni parishani baat ne ki thayar nai hai tho,hum aisi hi rahenge...

vasudha gets sad ,she lets him on his way!, few mins he goes to make dinner himself,vasudha try to help him,sushant grabs nife he cutts vegetables with anger ,his cuts his finger slitly vasudha shocked..:sushant yeh chot chalo na...
(with her teary eyes.,sushant sees her with some feelings but he grabs his hand from her,he takes band aide and tide his fingers himself..vasudha cant bear that,but she control herself for about his anger...

then sushant goes to bed for his tiredness,he sleeps,vasudha now sits beside him.looks him with emotional eyes,meanwhile she takes food for him,when he is in halfsleep for in hungry,she feeds him slowly,sushant have that for his hungry ,he cant ignore that,now only vasudha can also have food after sushant have food,

few seconds before she takes pilow for herself to sleep in sofa,she sees sushant's finger's band aid seems lose,she removes that slowly and tied his finger with another band aid...

she cant sleep due to pain in heart,she rounds all the part of the house,finally comes to sushant,she feels jus put her head on sushant for emotional,she suddenly slept om him after few mins...but ..in a deep sleep sushant also holds her with his hand...

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RAB NE BANA DI JODI
(VaSu)


IN the morning sushant wakeup but he sees vasudha still sleeping on him,but his soft corner cant disturb her,he stays silent for few mins..loooks her hair starts to put his hand on her but within mins vasudha wakeup,he stops..vasudha looks wid scare,and says 'woh.mein..,pata nai...kaise..

sushant:looks her with anger,he goes to read paper,then vasudha goes to take bath..few mins after she makes breakfast,while sushant takes bath,sushant drys his hair with towel,he goes to kitchen to make tea himself,vasudha
gives him tea jar,he goes to take instant coffe mix,then vasudha gives sugar,he looks her anger,vasudha put that near gas,then makes coffe himself.

vasudha :ab haat tho teek ho na,(she jus touch his hand,sushant looks her,)

sushant:kyun nai,woh dil ke daard se bhethar hai,(vasudha turns due to her upset,)

few seconds after,sushant gets ready to go office,he wears hsi shoes try to step out fastly,vasudha stops him' itna gussa tho ho,likn nasta kar ke jao na..aisa soch kar ki agar nokar babaya hai tho,..
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sushant:koi bhi banaya hai tho,muje kuch bhi nai chaiyeh.(then vasudha goes to fastly to dialup the phone..sushant cuts,kisii phone kar rahi hu?

vasudha:maa ko,shayd woh yahan ayi tho cum se cum tum unke haat se khayenge na...

sushant:kyun?hamre beech jo kuch bhi chal ra hai unko pata chal na hai kiya?mein nai chati hu unko parishan kar na...is liyeh amma ki phone kar ne ki zarorat nai

vasudha:gar tum itna selfish ho, tho mein selfish hu,mera matlab kaal woh yahan tumari halad dekar muje kuch pocha tho kya jawb degi mein unko,isliyeh kehe rahi hu,tum jakar kalo warna mein maa ko yahan bhula padegha,(wid anger tone),then sushant had breakfast...after that he goes to office,now vasudha wears churidar for a change,she alsothen goes DD..

in the evening ,vasudha in meeting wid pandegi and nirmohi to publish report against one MLA ,in DD,she says if reports are true then they should pubilsh that for sure!,meanwhile she calls her home to knw about the situations.sherya attends...and starts cries vasudha worries and goes to home,sherya hugs her like child and says vedant slaped her and scold her,then vasudha goes to vedant room.looks him with anger but she control this time,

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(VaSu)

vasudha goes to vednat room,she sees he looks ab normal,she understands him and control her anger,vedant asks,kyu abhi muje haat utta ne ayi hai tho,maro na.,

vasudha:nai vedant,woh haq mein kab kol chuki hu,ab mein yaahan sirf isliyeh aya hu ki,agar tumko rudraksh pasan ani ayi tho mein unse kehe thuon ga humari pariwar se dhorr raho,ab pls itna gussa itna tension mat raho vedant ,to fir kaise jeeyugi tu.. ha?😭

vedant:tumko muje zyadha rudraksh pasand ayi aaj kaal,isliyeh unke samne muje thapad marana..(he cant speak infornt of her face,he stands and leaves that place,this time vasudha feels his loneliness,now she goes to shereya,says:meri baat manogi,deko na,muje kaho vedant kabhi bhi humse istarase behave kiya?nai na...😔

woh bas bhut akela ehsaas kar raha hai,kass kar ke sandhya ko,aur mein bhi shadi karke chaligayi,tho woh aur bhi bhut akela hogaya,😭isliyeh hum unse in sab chezzon se bhar nikal na hai,,,,,,akir woh hamra bhai haina...tho is wqt unko kilafe na honi chaiyha tho bethar hai,👏

sherya:haa di app bhilkul teek kar rahi hai.😊

vasudha:tho meri baat mano,jo baat unko gussa aarahi hai tho woh baat ke bare mien unse baat mat karo,aur do din ke baad unse maffi mang na,aur ek behan tara unse behave karna,is wqt yeh teek rahe hai,kyunki unki pyar ke zarrorat hai,kisi share ki zarrorat hai,hamari galat yeh ki jo baat unko pasand na agy tho hum sab ,unse baar baar baat ke unko parishan diya..isliyeh kehe rahi hu sherya..wada karo muje aaj se tum vedant ko khayal rakenge.⭐️

sherya:(back normal),wada di...naina naani and shalini enters,'hum sab bhi apko mis kari hu di,likin app fikar mat kijiyeh,hum sab samalenge,😊

muje pata hai naina.baat kya hai ki hald jo bhi,ho likn sirf pyar jeetegha,yekin karthi hu vedant jalse jal unka gussa chodegha...ab wqt hogaya mein apni ghar chalna hai,she gets blessings from naani and her mother,she leaves,

one hour after,she enter her home,door's lock opened,vasuda gets suprise,he steps inside,sees sushant sleeping in the sofa with tiredness,she shocked and goes beside him,his face swetting,without fan,then she switch the fan, breaks his shirt button,and removes his shoes and sox,and then takes pilow and lays him in the sofa slowly,but sunddely sushant turns when she removes his watch from his wrist, her, dupatta stuk under his inbetween his arms and head,😛vasudha shocked and try to pull that,but sushant covers that with his whole body while in sleeping!😍



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RAB NE BANA DI JODI
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vasudha shocked for her dupatta stuked by sushant,she very slowly pull that but sushant lays on that tightly,vasudha feels hard to get,so she lose her dupatta from her neck,she left that to sushant,..few mins after sushant's amma calls vasudha attened the call,and vasudha asks her come home,but amma says she when she ll come here,she says jus calls for that she need some money for her mandhir trip.vasudha says that she tell sushant...also amma asked about sushant vasudha says her sleeping,then amma says dnt need to disturb him...

few seconds after sushant wakeup while vasudha writes something in her diary,he sees her dupatta,,both looks eachother,sushant takes that dupatta and stands infornt of her,vasudha looks towards him uncomfortably,sushant js about gives her that dupatta to her hand but he put that in sofa for tease her..and goes vasudha gets upset,but she sees sushant's wallet falls down,she takes that and jus check that anything miss in that,she opens and sees her pic in that,gets relax by heart and goes to make dinner for him...

sushant gets freshup,wears a shirt which has some design made by vasudha,vasudha notices that,but sushant says'woh meri share tea shirt kaha gayi pata nai,yeh tea shirt muje pasan nai hai...vasudha gets annoyed and goes to take sizazar to lose the design...she gives him and says lose that

sushant"mere pass wqt nai hai,yeh nikal ne ki kya karo,he sits sofa to watch
the tv,vasudha puts dinner in the dinning table,she calls him ,sushant starts to have food,vasudha says about his mother's call,

sushant:vasudha bas,puri baat kehene ki zarorat nai,bas informations kaho ki amma ne kuch managa aur nai...(vasudha looks him with teary anger eyes,sushant notices that,says'mera matlab muje kaam hai isliyeh aur kuch nai) ab tum kalo,

then its sleeping time,sushant goes to sleep sofa,vasudha forcehim to sleep in bed,sushant"teeke akir teri marzi,but vasudha sits beside him,takes sizazar to remove the design:sushant asks yeh kya khe rahi hu tum?

vasudha:tumre pass wqt nai hai tho kya,mere pass wqt hai,yeh jaise tumari na pasand cheez nikalne keyliyeh...she try to remove that with upset,sushant stops...

sushant:muje neened aarahi hai.tho yeh sab mat karo...(he grabs sizar from her hand,vasudha feels good,few mins after sushant sleeps...vasudha still near with him,jus kneels her head on him for few seconds with emotions and thinks about all...


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Next day morning,sushant cant find his wallet and wrist watch,but he wont ask vasudha,but she notices that and takes both things from wardrobe shelf,gives to him by her hand,sushant says,'waha rako mein lelonga,

vasudha:itna kuch karna hai tho karo na...likn(with her anger tone)😲

sushant:likin kya?,meine kuch nai kar raha hu,yeh sab kuch tum chati thi,

vasudha:baat karthe jao,chaho tho mein bhi kuch baat kar saktha hu,tumse likn ab mein nai karogi,ek wqt ayegha,tab mein baat karonga...😔

sushant:kya faraq padatha,aur muje ai laga hum dono ke beech yeh sab baat hoga,chaltha hoon...😡

then he leaves office,vasudha sadly sits in sofa,gets emotions by heart,...😒

IN rai singania house,sherya,goes to vedant but vedant feels sorry for her when she stands infornt of her,but before she asks him sorry vedant gets wonder and looks her with emotional eyes..nothing speaks to her just heals her with love..naani and shalini gets happy to see this..😊meanwhile in DD.as for news about MLA checking proves,that MLA gets knew that before,she meets vasudha and balckmails that DD ll face trouble if that news publish...vasudha has war of words with him...finally he goes after he warns vasudha..few seconds after vedant calls vasudha try to speak with her...

vasudha suprised and says:hello vedant(but vedant cuts the phone for his emotion of anger,also gets confusion in heart)😭

vasudha gets upset,and also thinks about him for while...😕

ITS in the evening,sushant changes tv,while vasudha makes dinner,sushant notices her tiredness...goes near with her:suno muje bhuk nai hai,isliyeh kuch bhi karne zaroorat nai...but vasudha makes dinner as usual...😉

after had dinner vasudha gets to sofa for sleep now she nothing expect from him...🤔jus goes to sleep...but sushant feels bad for her.he cant sleep himself..but try to sleep,,he cant,jus stands from there, goes to see vasudha, she is sleeping with tired but sushant notices that she is edge of the sofa,goes to beside her,sees her face ,his eyes turns tears,feels sad for her,and wakeup her..."vasudha utto..😛she wakeup with sleepy,again she lays in sofa...

sushant:are vasudha chalo utto,he force her and gets her into bed,vasudha's hair in her face,sushant jus moves that with care😉 and covers bed spread on her,he sleeps then!!👏


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