Originally posted by: Vidushi89
Wow...
Awesome part...
What preeti n aman killed...why...???
Updt soon.Thanks for the pm.
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Originally posted by: Vidushi89
Wow...
Awesome part...
What preeti n aman killed...why...???
Updt soon.Thanks for the pm.
Glad u like it... thnks 4 d cmnt...😊
Originally posted by: lil.mizz.smexii
Awww poor Preeti and Aman i wonder how Geet's gonna take it
oh the precap is kinda scary!
nice part
cont soon
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ur happy n on cloud 9 so now update 4 5 6 7... all :POriginally posted by: princess_mimi
Hey thanks for ur awsm comment...😉😆 i'm on cloud no 9... laaalllaaalllaaa😳
Sorry 4 late galz..Here is the 4th part of Jannat ... hope u like it... and let me remind u the terrorism I have depicted here is totally a work of fiction... no real issue or incident is connected with it
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part: 4
Maan could not see at them. He had seen them yesterday. How did it happen? They were killed brutally. It couldn't be Aasim Khan. Apurva told him they don't kill local people. It must be the other group.
"Sir, we got this note from the guy's pocket." A junior officer handed him a piece of paper.
He opened the paper and murmured what was written on it.
"Gaddaro ko saza milna hi chahiye. Aasim Khan."
He read the paper so many times. Aasim Khan?? But why they would kill local people?
After a few minutes a local people identified those bodies and sent them for post mortem.
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Maan was reading Aasim Khan's file carefully. He kills his victims brutally. Just like Aman and Preeti were killed. He looked Aasim Khan's picture very carefully. He called Apurva. After a few second Apurva picked up his phone.
Maan: What did you say? Aasim Khan don't kill local people. Today we found Aasim Khan killed a local girl and guy.
Apurva: We don't have any record of Aasim Khan doing that.
Maan: He just did it. Come back soon.
He cut the phone.
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Maan was at Preeti's furenal. He was standing at a corner and watching Geet. She was standing alone at a corner crying. Maan didn't want to talk to them on this now. But he had to interrogate. Maan walked towards her.
Maan: Geet
She turned at him.
Maan: mujhe tumse baat karni hain.
Geet: abhi?
Maan: main samajh sakta hu' par yeh zaroori hain'
Geet: thik hai. Chaliye ghar chalte hai. Mujhe yahanpe nahin rahena.
She wipped her tears and started to walk.
Maan: mujhe pata hai tum abhi baat nahin karna chahati'
Geet: nahin mujhe pata hain yeh zarroori hain. Aap kya kahena chahate hain?
Maan: mujhe kuch puchna hain.
Geet: Preeti aur Aman ke vare me?
Maan: hun. Akhri baar tumne usse kab'.
Geeet: bazaar me. aap bhi humare sath vaha the..
Maan looked at her eyes.
Maan: tumlog kiss vare me baat kar rahe the?
Geet: wo dono yaha se jaa rahe the. Wo shaadi bhi karne wale the' ab to sab kuch badal gaya'.
Maan: yaha se jaa rahe the kyun?
Geet: yahanpe koi rahena chate hai kya? Wo log ek nayi suruwat karna chahte the.
Everything was clear to him. They were killed cause they wanted to leave Kashmir, they were leaving Kashmir. Maan took a deep breath. They don't want 'their' men to leave 'their' place. That's why Aman and Preeti were traitor in their eyes.
They reached her house. Slowly they entered. The house was deadly silent. It's like every corner of the house is moaning. She entered her room and touched every thing gently which contains Preeti's memory.
She went to the table and found out a book with her hands. She hugged the book tightly and stood near a window.
Geet: pata hai hum dono ko kavita bahot pasand thi. Hum eksaath padtethe. Uss hadse ke baad Preeti mujhe sunatithi padke.. abb' abb'
Her voice broke' Maan went towards her and put a hand on her shoulder. She buried her face in his chest and started to cry loudly. Her temple touched his chin. He brushed her hair gently and put the book on a table.
He noticed a photo album on the table. Maan made her sit on a chair and started to see the photo. The first pic was Preeti's and Geet's. in their schooldays.
Geet: Aap humare photo dekhrahe hai?
Maan looked at her "hmm.."
Geet: paheli wali photo humari school ki dino ki hain'.
Maan turned the next photo.
Geet: yeh humari ghar ke samne'. Mujhe har ek picture yaad hain'
Maan kept looking every photos and Geet started to say which photo it was. She was right every time. There was only one page left of the album. Most of the photo was Geet's and Preeti's.
Geet: akhri tashveer Aasim Bhai ka hai.
She started to cry again. Maan turned the page to see the picture.
Geet: Aaj mujhe Aasim bhai ki bahot yaad arahi hai' aaj wo yaha hoti na..
Maan was shock to see the picture. No he was not wrong. He had seen the picture a few hours back in the office. He is the Aasim Khan. He, Preeti and Geet.. like one happy family. No. it could not be true. Whenever Geet's brother name crossed his mind he kept telling himself he can't be the Aasim Khan. He is a kind and gentle man. Geet told him he loved his family. He loved Preeti like his own sister. He loved Aman like his own brother. Aasim Khan is not like him. He is not a human. Maan was totally dumbstruck. He heard Geet's voice.
Geet: aaj wo yaha hoti na to Preeti ko koi chu bhi nahi sakta tha.
Maan didn't know what to say. He didn't know what he should do. Tell her the truth or just keep it a secret. He just left the house without saying anything.
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A middle aged man peeped from a 1st floor's window of a house. He saw a man came down from a car. He entered the house.
Middle aged man: wo agaya.
He smiled. The sound footsteps were growing. After a few seconds a man entered. He is over 6ft and has such a straight nose and strong chin.
"Salam Alkum chief." He spoke in husky voice.
Chief smiled.
Chief: Aasim mera baccha.
Aasim: kaam ho gaya.
Chief: mujhe pata hain tumhe kaisa'
Aasim Khan cut him.
Aasim: mara haat nahin kanpe. Gaddaro ko saza milna hi chahiye.. aaj maine Preeti ko mara kal agar Jannat ko bhi marna ho to main peeche nahin hatunga'
Aasim Khan bit his lips. May be there was a glimpse of sorrow in his eyes by he covered it by closing his eyes.
Chief: savas mera bacha'
Aasim Khan: par uss major to'.
Chief stopped him by raising his hand.
Chief: tum abhi unn dono ko kuch nahin karoge'
Aasim: lekin chief hum yuhi haat par haat rakhke baite rahenge?
Chief: Sahi waqt anne do' tab tak intezaar karo..
Aasim Khan kept silent and nodded.
Chief: ab jao. Aram karo.
He left the place silently.
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Two days later, 14th August
Maan was at his office talking with Apurva.
Maan: We have to be alert tomorrow.
Apurva: All station will be alerted.
Maan: Good.
Apurva was going to leave but Maan stopped him.
Maan: Apurva, I forgot to ask, how is your wife?
Apurva took a deep breath.
Apurva: She was alone. That's why I have sent her to her dad's home. At least she won't be alone there.
Suddenly a glass window broke. A man had thrown a stone at the window. The man was on a bike. Another man was driving the bike. They vanished from their sight in seconds.
Maan noticed a piece of paper was tied on the stone. He picked up the paper and read what was written on it.
"15th August, blast, local bus stand."
He crunched the paper in his hand and turned at Apurva.
Maan: Local bus stop'. Increase the security.
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Security of local bus stand was increased. None could do anything unnoticed by them. All were alerted. Maan himself was there to supervise everything.
A few hours later'. A junior officer came running toward Maan.
"The blust took place in a bus which was coming towards the bus stop." He said in a breath.
Maan went to the place. It was a pathetic sight. It was a tourist bus. Most of the people has died, whoever were alive, their condition were worse than the dead ones. He was totally devastated. He couldn't save those innocent lives from death. He came back to his office. The horrible sight continued to come back in his mind. He closed his eyes keeping leaning his head on the chair. Flash of the bloody sight, those scattered corpse, made him feel like vomit. He is a soldier. He is supposed to be indifferent by all this but he is not a cold blooded murderer damn it' he bang his hand on the table.He can't forget so many innocent people have died today.
A junior officer knocked his door.
Maan: come in.
Junior Officer: Sir. A girl is missing. She has been kidnapped from their own store in the market.
He handed him a photo.
Junior Officer: Her name is'.
Maan couldn't here what he was saying. He didn't want to. It was Geet. His Geet.
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Precap : First Kiss❤️
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