Thread 2: Surrogate Relations part 19 (17/8)

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Anu

@anuandavi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#751

Awesome update. Good that Dadi cleared her insecurities.

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reni

@leverne

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Posted: 14 years ago

#752

loved the dadi geet bonding very much,...new guy is geets old childhood friend????????

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hopehot

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Posted: 14 years ago

#753

OMG >>i can just imagine jelous maan ,...😍 loved it cont soon ..and a longer update plzzz 😳...if u dont mind...😃

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#754

lovely part.

it was very smoothly done.

geet must b relieved from a huge burden.

though i wish that the reassurance came from maan himself. since so far u've been building this ff on building their relation slowly and gradually...sigh...i wish it was maan that told her all this.

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Mehek25

@Mehek25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#755

Awesome update. Brought tears to my eyes as I read the pat about Geet missing her mom. i too lost my mom when i was just in my teens and even today I miss her. So whenever I read or see such stuff i invariably miss her loads and often cry. But thats life. Brilliantly written. Now wonder who that handsome hunk is!!!! Let us know soon pls.

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Tamanna_TJ

@Tamanna_TJ

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Posted: 14 years ago

#756

Hey dear,
Tht was a very nice one...
Daadi is so sweet... M loving her more n more nw...
Continue soon dear...
Waiting for the next part...
Keep writing...
Thnkx n love u...!!!

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Mirela

@Myra.nelly

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Posted: 14 years ago

#757

Superb part!u are very good describing these kind of emotions...in pain and fear she told everything to dadi and dadi was brilliant...so happy 4 geet! Hmm,the last scene is very interesting...continue soon! Thanks for this part!

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mandymore

@mandymore

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Posted: 14 years ago

#758

Nice prrt,its gud dat geet told dadi abt her fears n insecurities
no guesses abt new guy bt I want maan to be jealous n realize his feelngs 4 geet like geet do.

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 14 years ago

#759

Originally posted by: basicquestion1
lovely part.
it was very smoothly done.
geet must b relieved from a huge burden.

though i wish that the reassurance came from maan himself. since so far u've been building this ff on building their relation slowly and gradually...sigh...i wish it was maan that told her all this.

actually when i first thought abt the reassurance part, i thought it with Maan...but then with desire for her already there and seeing her in such a devastated state won't Maan propose to marry her? that wud interfere with a couple of scenes i've thought abt in the story...so i changed Maan to dadi...nd what better way for them to show their bonding!