I can't tell u that I LOVE U # 2

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anusha arja

@anushaarja

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Posted: 14 years ago

#321

deeps gud one... and nice precap...

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sldeeps

@sldeeps

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: deniac
@deeps.. haila... i got the crux of ur story???? 😲😲... u r gonna use my explanation to tell others bout y mohinder came to airport... 😲😛😃

yipeee... ur FF now is the 5th FF i cracked the crux of... 😆

waise i think Geet's mom is right... her dad is being selfish in love for his daughter... he isnt seeing his daughter's happiness... all he is concerned is that he shud remain the most imp person in his daughter's life... but somewhere i feel that Rano will not let that happen as she will see Geet's love and Rano will help maan get geet... 😃

ok if i hv cracked the story part then please PM me to edit n delete this part... 😆😆😆

actually i am typing the same explanation which u gave then i thought of pasting ur analysis instead of typing all the stuff again😆

ut somewhere i feel that Rano will not let that happen as she will see Geet's love and Rano will help maan get geet... 😃 - u will come to know later😉

please PM me to edit n delete this part... - yaro what do u want to delete from this part, which thing u didn't like in it😆

Edited by sldeeps - 14 years ago

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allibr

@allibr

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#323

👏👏awesome update👏👏

continue soon

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sldeeps

@sldeeps

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#324

Originally posted by: nishha
😭 😭 😭again pari love her entire part...
this whole part is all about pari how much she cares for her friend at the same time she cant express in words bechari 😭 😭 😭

geet remains bold beautiful childish and sweet 😊 😊
pari misses geet why??????????

again jealous maan not allowing geet to call rohan😊
"Both Pari and Maan smiled looking at Geet, she is sleeping just a kid with a smile on her face. Maan placed his hand and Geet's shoulder just to comfort her. Geet took Maan's hand and placed under her cheek. Maan is feeling uncomfortable as Pari is also there. Pari understood the discomfort in Maan's face. Geet is in deep sleep completely unaware of what she is doing. Maan moved a bit then Geet holded him by his hand and whispered with her husky voice

"Maan please don't move... u r disturbing my dream" and again went into deep sleep."

Both Maan and Pari smiled at Geet's words.----------😍 😍 😍

"pari : maan u stole my friend never ever leave her"

😭 😭its very touchy put very nice words together and form this sentence its too emotional👏 👏

next would be maan carrying geet in his hand😳???????
as usual waiting for next part😊

Pari is struggling in between them how to help them? whether to help them or not?should i help them there or not? so many questions r running in her mind

Edited by sldeeps - 14 years ago

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Simran Kaur

@DDbiggestfan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#325

NICE udate dear. Enjoyed every word while reading ur post. Eagerly waiting 4 d nxt part. Update d nxt part soon. Thnx 4 pm.

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Mehek25

@Mehek25

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#326

Awesome update Deeps. plz continue soon. i love the tenderness which Geet's innocence brings out in the arrogant MK. And Pari is a superb friend. One that every girl should have. Love the way ur characters and story are developing. Waiting for next part. thanx for the pm

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thabassum

@Thabassum19

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#327

hay deeps thanks for sloving my probs ji...😉...

and literally thanks to

@denaic...for the solution😉

and deeps pls i love this story 😳plz dont make this story as typical hindi flim u know ."with this dad"😆

and

plz make my kids realize tat thay love each other...😳

eagerly waiting...for next update😎

keep rocking👏with ur great work😊

taka care😳

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sldeeps

@sldeeps

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: aziza_ahmed
hay deeps thanks for sloving my probs ji...😉...

and literally thanks to

@denaic...for the solution😉

and deeps pls i love this story 😳plz dont make this story as typical hindi flim u know ."with this dad"😆

and

plz make my kids realize tat thay love each other...😳

eagerly waiting...for next update😎

keep rocking👏with ur great work😊

taka care😳