MG FF - Fairy...Tail???!!! THREAD 4

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: ritzy09
very nice update and thanks a lot for not making Geet loose...

So Maan is falling for Geet...it will be a real anti climax when they find out that Maan is MK and Geet is Sweetu...

One req...like you showed Geet's current felings for MK, I am not very sure about if Maan even remembers Sweetu...so maybe few lines like a convo with Dadi, self thought or something similar to clear his POV

hmm i thot of writing abt maan's pov

as i had planned to write a bit more

but couldn't since i was tired of typing...😆

and yes...i will be revealing sum things in the next update

which were actually supposed to be done in this update itself!!!😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#292

amazinggg

plz continue soon

i love ur ff

its wonderful

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

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Posted: 13 years ago

#293

loved da update

i want maan to know dat geet is sweetu and want geet to kno dat maan is mk

but i want her to hate him

and ignore him ]and i want him to suffer

wat he did to geet

called himself a friend

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Hima

@Ramhari

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#294

Beautiful part.
Loved their match.
Maan was so getting lost in all her antics.
Geet was annoyed and surprised at his behavior.
Her instigation to continue the match was superb.
Both of them complement each other so well.
No wonder the match was a tie.
She was enjoying so much but her haunting past never leaves her i guess.
The thought of MK triggered gloominess in her.
So even her mom doesnt know that they broke up.
She covered up pretty well with her mom.
Wonder what really happened in her past 5 yrs ago
Waiting for the next part.

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Mirela

@Myra.nelly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#295

Very nice,if possible add me to ur pm list

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#296

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

i really love d inputs u add as kawaii thinks ... they r real fun ... n witty ...

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kooliio

@kooliio

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#297

Awesome update!

It was a cute update!

Lets see what will happen next...

When they will meet in college!

Cant wait for the next part!

Please continue soon!

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Amina

@KreyaArshiLover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#298

I loved the part, i really want to know if Maan rember Sweetu or not. And what happend five years ago

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Sanchari

@.hea.

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#299

Yippee Are you going to update another part today, plz do, this one was fab, it was emotional in the last part, and I could really visualize the match, it was very funny😆👏

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Minz aka Minnie

@*Dakoo_Minzy*

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Posted: 13 years ago

#300

that was a real sweet update kawai 😃 liked it really... 😳

Maan for sure knows Sweetu if we make him remember...he hasn't forgotten her...😆 but that distance brought in sme distance...well,he does miss his sweetu though he doesn't know it yet...he was so happy observing his witch... 🤣

now now me too eager to know what happens next...wat really happened those 5 years back just after her phone call... 😳 update today...kk

pleasee...sweetu style please... 😆

you write well...i am enjoying every scene.. 😳 i adore Geet and Maan's not that bad either...i wanna see Maan's friends smelling there's somethng cooking up btween Geet and Maan..haha

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