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Posted: 13 years ago
niceee update😊😊😊 i just loved it...plzz add me too to ur pm list😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
ASR against la šŸ˜†
wating for nxt update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_60107

lovely part but can u plz try to write in story telly manner and not as a play style b/c it gave me a headache reading khushi ----arnav---and khushi ----arnav---khushi ----arnav--- even if they were just saying a single monologue

hop u don't mind me pointing that out b/c so far it was fine but just this part it was too much
thanks >3

šŸ˜› it is my style as you can see my all old ff like premeer love story at kis desh mein ha meradil forum. simply love (maaneet) love hamasha(maaneet) despair (maanmeet) alone in paradise (maaneet) darkness (maaneet) and many more all written in same manner no one ever pointed on that... as my readers find it east to read in a play style ... it will be hard for me to change as i am use to of it ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
now lavanya is surely gone
continue soon
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am so happy that I read this!
Simply fantabulous!
Their cute convo at the restaurant was awesome
And Lavanya! I will kill her one day for sure
Loved it
Now please do a favor and update this quickly!
Thanks for the pm



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Edited by murphy369 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

wooow

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wonderful
waiting eagerly for the next amazing part
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Posted: 13 years ago

naddiya one more pls

story turning interesting
superb update
omg God their pic in news paper
LA she so dead now
i hope when khushi find out can understand
& dont live arnav
waiting for more
thank yu so much
bless yu
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey brilliant updates dear...
i loved it...
LV devil😔...am waiting for arnav's reaction...
looking fwd...

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Arnav: called his men & ask them to stop the distribution of the news paper. he drive to La place he just kept his hand on door bell.

Buaji: open " kya h koi tameeze nahi ha ,pagal ho kya"

Arnav : aap

Buaji :ha hum koi prob ha kya

Arnav Lavanya kahan ha?

Buaji: woh sorahi ha

Arnav: try to walk in

Buaji: kya tum sub ka ghar mein iss tarah andar jata ho

La : kon ha

Buaji : Ashiq

La : who was drank " aao aao ASR "

Arnav: Lavanya i want to talk to you

La: bolo

Arnav: yeh pictures kis na lee

Buaji: why you are asking her ask me ?

Arnav: turn to wards her

Buaji: tum kya smajhta ho khud ko , tum humari bahu ko humara ghar se lajo ga aur hum tum ko Maaf karda ga"

Arnav: she does not want to stay there

buaji:you asked her

Arnav: why i will ask her ?she herself call me to help her

Buaji:had a laughter ..Paka Ashiq ha

LA: ASR hold his collar what is in that married woman which is not in me

Arnav: Lavanya you just tell me who took pic

buaji: pic kya video bhi ha dekho ga

Arnav:video

LA played he & khushi appear on her huge Tv screen his hand was on her stomach khushi placed her over his

buaji: chee chee shadi shuda ho kar yeh sub aur bhi kya huwa ho ga

LA: & she had a laughter

Arnav: stop this non sense he just take out the video.broken it

LA: i have plenty

Arnav: grab LA arm what you want ?i know you are not relative of this lady , nor you know Khushi ? why you are doing all this cheap act?

LA: looked in his eyes " you dont know what i want ha ASR?

Arnav: no

LA: i liked you and you are giving my place to her

Arnav: Lavanya what are you saying?

LA: telling you the truth ASR you are so over protective in her case ,you never being like that with me , when you see at her your eyes have a spark ,it never had for me.

Arnva: what are you talking about i am not at all getting you? you have your own place and she has her own,why you are comparing your self with her. he left her arm

LA: why i should not?

Arnav: you are crazy , you are ruin an innocent life nothing else like this lady had already.he pointed at buaji

LA: what she did she made her married to her son

Arnav : yes a abnormal son.

LA: what was that Khushi a ordinary girl whose parents

Arnav: stop it or i will he raised his hand

Buaji: her parents had sold her , waisa bhi they are not her parents she was adopted

Arnav: what you both want come to the point

Buaji: kushi ko ghar wapis bajo abhi warna yeh news mien

Aranv: Over my dead body karna ha jo karlo ...you are fired from my office

LA: soch lo ASR

Arnav: soch leya as i think it is useless to talk to you both my lawyer will talk to you now. he just walk out . "where to go who to take in confidence" he just had a self talk..

AT home

Khushi: kya kar rahi ha aap

Mami ji: yeh TV ko pata nahi kya hogaya ha ..try to tune tv

Khushi: give me i will do it ..she took remote from her and starting tuning it .

Mami ji: jai parkash phone karo cable wal ko

Jai Parkash : kardiya ..he lie.

Mami ji: mera fav movie aarahi thi

Khushi: "oh yeh dekha iss ka tou wire he toota ha hum bahi thek kar data ha"(see this its wire is broken i will fix it )

Nani Manhor aaiya nahi

Mami ji :6 baja kia flight ha ..

Nani Manorama aap yahan bethi movie dekh rahi ha kuch khana bhi pakaya ha aap na ya nhi

Mami ji"jai parkash ko bola tha hum na"

Nani: Manorama aap jai...

Khushi " yeh dekaha hogaya.."

Arnav: enter he was in really bad mood ..he heard Khushi ...he shouted "Jai parkash kya bola tha mein na"

JAi Parkash: sir mein na

Nani: kya huwa beta

Arnav: kuch nahi he throw his coat on sofa

Mami : kya huwa

Khushi raised her shoulder " mera saath tha to thek tha "

Arnav: remote do

Khushi gave him

Arnav: switch to sport channel and started watching tennis

Mami ji :gaya ab hum chalo Khushi hum kitchen mein chala

Khushi: looked at him and walk behind mami

Arnav: jai parkash coffee

jai parkash: abhi laya

Khushi: aap mami ki help kara i will make .she made a cup and walk to the hall

Arnav knew it was she as he felt her presence .

Khushi: coffee

Arnav: why you make ?

Khushi: kya baat ha?

Arnav: kuch nahi

Khushi: jhoot

Arnav: stared at her ..give me my coat

Khushi: gave him

Arnav: yahan per sign kardo lawyer will file the case

Khushi: pen

Arnav: taken out from his pocket he gave her

Khushi sign ... ab tou ghusa na kara

Arnav: smiled

Khushi good pull his cheeks she saw thumb up to mami ..

Arnav: bit surprise

Nani: looked at them and smiled ...

Khushi mein aap ka plants ko water kar do please bore horahi hoon

Arnav ok come with me i will introduce you with my plants

Khushi: naam ha aap ka plants ka

Arnav: ya they are my babies .

Khushi: chala ... gave him her hand he hold it and she pull her up

Nani just hide behind the pillar as she does not want them to see her

Arnav: hi plants

Khushi: hi plants

Arnav: you know khushi if you dont pay attention to them they dry just like human being. he pluck dry leave from one.

Khushi: naam do batai aapna bacho ka

Arnav: smiled yeh honey , yeh romeo , yeh snoopy ,,

Khushi: hi she very softly toughed them .

Arnav: smiled

Khushi hum in se kuch baatine karla aur pani bhi da

Arnav: ha she took the jug from him "mein change kar ka aata hoon"

Khushi :ok she started taking out grass and dry leaves and watering them ... your dad is cute ... smiled at her own thought.. dont take laugh at me he said that you all are his babies ..

Arnav: meri buri karrhi ho as he saw her talking to plants

Khushi: lo daddy aagai

Arnav: daddy

Khushi as you said your kids .

Arnav: tum bhi khushi he walk to other plants

Khushi : Arnav

Arnav Kya

Khushi pointed at a lizard

Arnav oh aik choti se cute se lizard he tou ha

Khushi yuck yuck ... how i come on the other side

Arnav aik min he walk to her pick her up

Khushi yuck that why i dont do gardening

Arnav: smiled pagal... open eyes

Khushi was still folding her legs and her arm was around his neck "nahi khulo gi "

Arnav: ok mein iss tarah pic lelo ga

Khushi: open eyes

Arnav: dari kyun ho he tickle and smile

Khushi: smiled and he click


Arnav: cute lets go in

Khushi : chala .. per aap hum ko neecha uttar da

Arnav hall se pehla utar do ga .

Khushi : please na

Arnav : smiled and let her down

As they enter hall

Nani chota Yeh kya ha she showed them the paper ...

Mami and mama ji was standing looking at them


to be cont .. dont forget to comment

Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i m second one to comntšŸ˜†šŸ˜†...i like dis part very much...continue soon

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