Heeey Fozi (: LOL I realised I was commenting on the old thread so I shifted my comment here (;
Okaii I'm 15 Chapters behind =| Do not ask me how that happened because I have noo ideaa. Haha. But I am catching up todaaay! And I'm going to comment on all 14 Chapters right now right here as I read each chapter I'll juust comment here on it then move on to next (; So this is going to be one heck of a looong comment. I'm really sorry for missing so many chapters so muuch has beeen happenning na. But now everythings over I will keep up with this FF because it's my faveee (; Hehe soo hereee we gooo - eeeks am excited haha I know am a freaaak! =P
Chapter 8 - Silver LiningsEEEKS! First of all you dedicated this chapter to me for my birthday!? Awwwhh! I Love Youuu! I can juust say this to you this was the best present I got! Okaii I juust loved this chapter (: Awwhh loved the waaay at the beginning Maan wanting to protect Geet (; Awwhh feel sorry for Geet & Rajji not fair on them they're being separated :( This Tayyi-ji is very annoying LOL =P When will she get into her head thaaat Geet is juuust perfect (: Loved this chapter! I want some more Maan-Geet interactions hehe (; Really really well written! Your suuch a damn good writer! Eeeks going to read next chapter now haha this is whaat I love about being behind I get to read sooo many chapters at oncee I don't have to waaait for them (;
Chapter 9 - Lurking ShadowsAHHH. I asked for more Maan-Geet interactions and that's whaaat you did :O Freaaaky. You sooo read my mind =| LOL I hope you doon't readd my mind tooo muuuch (; Buuut eeeks this chapter was amazing! Hayeee Maaneet meeting uuufff! Thaaat scene was juuust perfect! Every description was juuust amazing! And you saaay you can't think!? WHAAAT!? I think I'm lonely in thaat field now :( Because you CAN think and I can't boohooo not fair! :( Haha =PUhh her family are soo horrible =/ Nasty people! They don't appreciate her! Nahiiin! Geet can't get married she's only made for Maaan! Buut yaaay atleast Maan kind of realised his feelings for Geeet! Eeeks can't wait for next chapter! Oh waaait I don't have to wait haha (;
Chapter 10 - SaviourAwwhh this chapter was just beautiful<3 I loved it! ARGHH! I'm starting to hate Darjee more and more =/ I want to kill thaaat guy. What is his problem!? =| Awwhh poor Geet that girl is going through so much! Awwhh I juust loved the conversation between Maan and Geet (: EEEKS. Geet went out in the middle of the night :O Whaaat if someone had caught her!? But phew no-one did or I think so haha got to read the next chapter to find out (; And OMG the scene at the hotel hayeee<3 I can just imagine that happening in the actual drama (: But just amazing updatee! I love the waay you describe it's just awesome! Haha anyways me going to go read the next chapter now!
Chapter 11 - RealisationsArghh so annoying I had wrote a whole comment on this chapter and my stupid computer decided to freeze! Anyways coming to this chapter - it was freakin awesome! Hayeee it had just Maan and Geet in it which made it even more perfect and awesome! You know I was literally in tears reading this chapter! See this is what your writing can do to people! But this was a really emotional chapter. You wrote it perfectly, the story was just told even more perfectly. Awwh yaaay Maan let out all his inside pain out to Geet - which is a really goood sign (; And awwh I'm going to have to read the next chapter to see if Geet gets in trouble or not - I hope she doesn't. Otherwise I'll kill youu (; But OH EM GEE! Maan Singh Khuranna is in love with Geet Handa :O YES! I just hope Geet realises her true feelings for Maan too sooon. Uff this chapter was juust awesome! I am soo in love with this FF Fozi (:
Chapter 12 - Unwanted GuestsGeeet does get in trouble :( Well not in trouble for sneaking out but still. Awhh poor Geet she got slapped by Tayyi-ji. Argh what is that womens problem!? Supid lazy thing. Haha. Poor Geet is treated like a slave :( Well they'll be sorry one day when they realise what they did was so damn wrong =P Geet should get revenge for that slap (; And OMG that guy comes to see her the one she bumped into :O AHHH. He best not tell everyone about Geet going out in the middle of the night. And I'm guessing that guy who calls out to Geet at the end of the chapter is Maan!? (: Love your writing style Fozi. Like I said I really think you should consider writing a book. Perfectly written. Lovee the waay you describe your really good at that - I can't describe to save my life haha. And by the way I totally agree with you about cliffhangers it makes you want to carry on reading na. Your cliffhangers are faaab! Haha but I understand everyone's complains you just can't manage to wait those few days well I don't have to because I get to read the next chapter straight away hehe. Amazing chapter!<3
Chapter 13 - A Way Out
EEEKS. This chapter was beyond amazing (; I just loved every single part of it! Yaaay I was right the guy talking behind Geet was Maaan (: Go meee! Haha. Uhh will Tayyi-ji ever change!? =| She is soo annoying! Stupid woman. Haha yes Maaan to the rescueee! Haha setting of the car alarm LOL nicee ideaa Fozi (; And OMG the little scene between them in the kitchen! Awhhh!! I really really hope Geet realises sooon about her feelings for Maan! I really want that to happen! (: Uhh ohh I hope Darjee isn't tooo angry! Loved this chapter - especially because Maan kinda told his feelings too Geet! Hehe awwwh that was so cutee when he took her towel (: Haha you were nice to us and didn't leave any cliffhangers? I want cliffhangers though because your cliffhangers are amazing! Why are you soo perfect at writing!? I am soo jealous =| Anyways lets move onto the next chapter.
Chapter 14 - Mind Over Matter
Awwhhh I feel soo sorry for poor Geet! They called her a curse :O How nasty! Uhh! Awhh nooo Geet can't give up hopeee. Hopefully Maan will make her alright again (; Awwhh I'm crying for pooor Geeet - not fair on her. Awhh it's good she escaped in the morning to get some time on her own - she needs thaat. Awwhh nooo why isn't she talking to Maan? :( Eeeks the precap! I bet it's Maan saying that to Geet na? Loved loved this chapter tooo! But it was horrible seeing Geet so hurt and upset she deserves much more than that :( As always I loved the waaay you wrote it. Everything was sooo damn perfect! I'm lonely I thought I had you with me but you can think and I can't so am lonely again (; Hehe anways awesomeee updateee!
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