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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely story dear. Pls continue soon. Suspense seems gr8. Want to know who they are and what is their mission. Have a feeling it is something to do with the crash. Waiting eagerly for the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
I read all 5 parts together and now anxiously waiting for the next updates...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maanhar

I read all 5 parts together and now anxiously waiting for the next updates...

thankyou so much
will update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww boss ko bura laga ...
tho soory !!!
well jaldhi update karo!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aziza_ahmed

aww boss ko bura laga ...

tho soory !!!
well jaldhi update karo!!!!!!

kis cheez ka?
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Posted: 13 years ago
hmm bhulkad
sooch !!
u know wat ur indeed LCM😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi all
here is the update
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plz comment

Part 6:

Geet was sitting in her spacious lounge drinking tea and just looking outside the big glass wall.

She was extra gloomy today. Her friend cum sister pinky had her appointment with doctor. If Geet had not come in time a disaster wd have occurred.

Pinky because of her easy going and chirpy nature was always prominent in college.

She was an orhan at only the age of 16 her whole family died leaving her all alone and broke. But she never lost hope she continued to struggle. It was then when Geet met her for the first time she had come to geet to do her household works so that she cd pay her college dues. Geet could see the resemblance between them the only difference was she was deserted but with loads of money and pinkey with no money. They became friends and then sisters . geet took responsibility of all her payments. But pinkey refused so geet made the agreement that she can pay her back in installments when she is old enough to earn. And they started their special relation now they were the only family member of each other. Many boys had eye for her but she loved only one rahul arora .He was some kind of business man. Geet had never heared of him but then when had she ever paid any attention to the world. He was charming and when Pinky brought him to meet Geet . Geet approved as she cd see the love in their eyes. How much pinky wanted to be with him.

She cd not never bring her love back but she cd help pinky get her love. They got married but only a few months and problem started. Rahul wd remain absent for long periods of time without contacts.and then quarrels and fights started.

Today when geet went to met pinky to her house she found she had tried to commit suicide.cuz of rahul 's drugs and girlfriends She took her to hospital where they came to know she was pregnant.

What was the future of her child what was the future of pinky ? questions like that were roaming in her mind

Geet was still deep in these thoughts when the door bell rang

Who cd be here.? She never had many visitors.

Mam wo jin ki 5 pm ki appointment thi ap k sath wo aye hai.

Oh me to bhool hi gait hi

Make them sit in the office I will be back

This was geet's only hobby . to make wedding dresses so that the bride cd look like a princess on her wedding day. She wd only make one or two dress per year. For the girls she liked.looking at them in their bridal outfits having moment of their life wd fill her emptiness with a few faint hopes.

She entered the office and greeted the girl. She was preety and bubbly just like pinky. Geet liked her in the first instance.

I wd love to make your outfit what are the specifications.

Let him come first he just stepped out for a call

Oh sure and a few moments later he entered in blue denim white shirt with a few button open. Geet looked at him and forgot to blink.

He walked with full grace and sat in front of her. Piercing her with his deep chocolate eyes.and he smirked she still had his effect.which brought geet back to reality.

Geet meet my fiance Maan Singh Khurrana.

Probably you wd have heard about him.

No I haven't .

Maan smirked further his eyes scanning her from top to bottom making her uncomfortable.well he is a buisnees tycoon.

When did you guys met?

Now it was maan's turn to get puzzled he had not expected that?

Umm just a few wks ago.

Just then her cell rang . it was an urgent matter regarding a deal she started talking on phone.

Maan sent pari the msg with the story of how they had met.

Pari found it way too dramatic but controlled her laugh. Or maan wd kill here on the spot.

PRECAP

Ab kia problem hai tumhai mujh se. ab to me engaged ho I totally and irrevocably love my fiance. Now can we be friends

She smiled at his cute gestures.

yes

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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVED IT
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
ooh hooo feeling sad for pinky 😒!!!!!!
love the way geet treats her 😳...
why is this maan so deprerate to have frendship with geet😲??
hahaha so pari is acting as his fiance😆!!
why did she tell that thay havent meet before wen
they actually did 😲!!!
aahh very questioning update 🤔!!!
great going bossji⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update luvd it
cnt w8 2 read more plzz cont soon x
fanx 4 da pm x

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