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Selinapiya thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank u Everyone...
Cool divya:We don't need u advice...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ilove99



thanks shi!so when r u planning to update plz do before 2 na!

oye M...sorry yr..can't Update...mere test chal rahe hai coaching classes mein...i hope you understand!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: CIDMaaneetNaksh

oye M...sorry yr..can't Update...mere test chal rahe hai coaching classes mein...i hope you understand!


damn yr!i'll be not be able to read ur ff for a month then
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ilove99


damn yr!i'll be not be able to read ur ff for a month then

I am shoo sowwie😭😭 but promise to give you a long update and will PM you all the parts as soon as you return with a BANG!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: CIDMaaneetNaksh

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I am shoo sowwie😭😭 but promise to give you a long update and will PM you all the parts as soon as you return with a BANG!!!!!!!!


but i will be not able to read anything for a month😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome
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plz continue soon
plz pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter 5

ORPHANAGE

''ughs**mishu get up we r getting late''
the girl was gathering her things and packing her bag in hurry...
''mishaaa ''she was yelling again and again but no reply.

"wait i know how to treat you"she brings a bucket full of water and ** SPLASH**

"Piyaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"screams the sleeping beauty with a jerk.

"what problem did u have with my sleep u always keep yelling mish u wake up wake up wake upi!!!!!!!tum kya abhi abhi wake up sid dekh kar aayi ho jo mujhpe experiment kar rahi ho!?????"

the girl keeps fingers on her ears -"o god mish!!!!my ears will burst out!just take a look at the clock it has been more than 9 we will miss the last day of our class."

Misha-"class?""o shit**** class tumne mujhe jagaya kyun nahi pia! look we are late now"

Piya-"what i didn't wake you up!!huh madam i was trying that from last half an hour at last water worked"

Misha-water!u should have used grenade ...now common jaldi ready ho..

Mish-oh god where my shoes my jeans ...god pia mera bag kahan hai!!!!

Piya-madam zara yahan dekhiye(points to misha's bag and other things kept behind her)and don't i seem to be ready to you.

Misha-"oh!sorry...waise aaj tumne apna bhootiya makeup nahi kiya na toh confusion ho gaya..."saying this she runs and pia runs behind her

Piya-"u meanie i hate u...i don't use make up ok" but she was already gone...
"omg mish toh gayi now who will drop me...misha wait...

After the class

" yeh padhai kitni boring hai i am so tierd"* head-desk *
Piya was lost in her thoughts.misha shakes her"piya piya wake up "in a dramatic way "aree nahi meri bff coma mein chali gayi!"

Piya"mish just stop it na i was thinking that what will happen when we will go to our dream land...the place where we always wanted to go!

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(flash back)

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"hey!"said 7 year old misha who was playing with her favorite toy car which bumped into piya was sitting on a rock at the back part of the orphanage.
mish-"hey!my car broke now how will i go home?"and saw tears falling from piya's eyes.
"why r u crying?pia-"no i am not"yes u r my car broke and u r cring?why who r u? "turned her and shaking .

piya couldn't handle herself anymore " i hate everyone i hate everyone..first my parents left me then my friends*sobbing*...i am new here.sister sent me here from my old orphanage now i don't have any friends i am alone again"

Mish-no you r not!!wanna be my friend?a shocked and confused piya walks away from there.

(flashback ends)

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everyone was asking about abhiya so here comes piya abhay and the others will be entering soon.
as selina was not online i wrote this part by myself plz do tell me how is it!this is the first time i wrote alone.if it is short then sorry i can write only this much alone😆

(selina's picture page 30)


Edited by ilove99 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nyc meera it was really gr8...
i loved it...
n u r a gr8 writer...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Akshi0019

nyc meera it was really gr8...

i loved it...
n u r a gr8 writer...


thanks i am so reviled that i did my job well...luv ya!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice work Meera...
For a first try you have done pretty well...
So Mish and Pia are both orphans...
Jaldhi Abhay ki entry karwaana...

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