FF: The Collision...my first ever ff =)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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As u all know that what happened when khushi tells Arnav's nani about ms.kashyap,but now I have changed the story n characters from here that I m afraid u all will like or not.so the story -is

CHARACTERS-

Khushi

Arnav

Shyam

Anjali

Nani

STORY SCENE 1:

AFTER ARNAV'S NANI KNOWS THE TRUTH ABT MS.KASHYAP,SHE WANTS ARNAV TO LEAVE HER……….

And she,s kinda started liking khushi coz she,s also from lucknow and she,s kinda nice too.khushi on the other hand likes arnav too but don't wanna admit it coz she,s scared that she,s not arnav,s type;she,s not a girl of his status.and most importantly that both of them cant even stand each other.but circumstances force them to do something they don't want and now here they r going to b married bcoz of nani n Anjali.coz anjali always knew that khushi is the perfect girl for arnav.

Arnav gives khushi a necklace so that she can wear it for the ceremony,when forced by nani n Anjali.he doesn,t like khushi but is forced to marry her.so here goes the engagement scene where arnav gives her a pendent .

Everybody is busy in preprations for the ceremony n after everything is ready,everyone assembles in a hall.khushi is looking very pretty n arnav is as usual serious…………coz he don't want this.while khushi n arnav r sitting there together n everybody,s waiting,Anjali brought the gift n handed to arnav.arnav is quite surprised seeing the gift coz he didn,t bought it.n then;

Nani says; arnav "put this pendent on khushi".arnav is very angry at this but he has to do this coz he cant disobey his nani,s n anjali,s words.so,arnav(angry but doesn,t show)says ,yes nani.while on the other side khushi is also disappointed coz she knows that arnav does not love her but she hides her sadness with a smile on her face.after the gift giving thing n the engagement everybody enjoys the party but arnav is still serious.anjali enters in the scene n says arnav,I know u r sad but u,ll never find a nice girl like khushi.arnav says;di, I don't love her n I don't wanna marry her too…………Anjali says that I told u once that when the girl u love will enter ur life,ur life will b totally changed but u,ll not b able to find her soon………………N THAT GIRL IS KHUSHI………….arnav.

Arnav says, ya I remember but that girl is not khushi….then Anjali says-me n nani like khushi n if u r trying to make a scene then remember ur family will not b on ur side.arnav –di ,this is my life………….anjali-thats why u don't know how to live it like a normal person without ur anger n pride.n after this Anjali goes somewhere else n arnav is standing there alone.meanwhile khushi n nani rtalking with each other n r very happy……..

2 WEEKS LATER:

Nani says to Anjali that today I m very happy that arnav,s getting married.khushi was the girl who deserved to be our daughter in law not that so called MISS KASHYAP.

On the other hand,arnav is getting ready n he is planning that he will make khushi,s life worse than she she has thought of after their marriage but fate has some other plans for him…….

Arnav says with a wicked smile-khushi kumari gupta ,welcome to my world now n v will see how long u can stay here.whereas on the other side khushi is thinking of changing arnav,s heart with her love.

Khushi-I will do anything to change u n I totally believe that I,ll b able to change u n make u fall in love with me n on the other side;arnav is like:n I,ll make sure u never do the mistake of falling in love with me ever………………

AND SO EVERYONE KNOWS WHATS GONNA HAPPEN NOW……………………….RIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks for the pm :) Nice start
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome part my lil sis!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but many grammatical errors lol but i will help u with that later lol well ur part was a little short compared to what i saw u write for 2 and a half days on paper lol good bye sweety =) 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I liked it! I always like stories where one person tries to hurt the person they will love, and the other one tries to change them, and ultimately wins. Keep writing : )
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it was really good; continue soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the pm dear😊 a nice start with ur ff 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome...
the start was brilliant..
thank u for inviting me to read ur ff...
continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awsum dr... gr8 start... cont.. soon n thanks 4 pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was very nice, would love to read more. Continue it soon 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very good start, enjoyed it very much .thanks for pm

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