.::Dil Dosti Hatred NEW FF!!UPDATE PRT 3::.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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heyy guys this is my first FF on this forum hope you like it 😃 but i just wanna say that i build the characters as i go along so i cant write character profiles. sorry.


promo type thingy😆

sharon, vicky,simi, vikasha and kria were the best of friends and were the most popular in high school together but then kria had to move to a different country because of some problems between her parents and her friends parents and so her father had to get a new job elsewher...

but now that kria is back she hopes that they can be friends again but that's not quite what sharon has in mind. high school has changed and now there is an even bigger divide between the dazzlers (popular) and the unpopular weaklings and sharon isn't going to let kria come back in again...

New boy reyansh moved into kria's house when she left and now he's replaced kria as the dazzlers most popular but what happens when Rey, the guy who every girl lusts after and himself does not commit to any one girl, falls for kria?

well your going to have to like if you want to find out...


😆LOL jk just tell me if you like it please and if you would like a PM??


I will try to update as often as possible (or maybe more, depends on the amount of work i am given😭)
xxx
simran

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Posted: 14 years ago
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so guys here goes the dil dosti hatred part 1 please comment and like thanks 😃

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kria opened the door to her new apartment and smiled. a fresh new start she thought i hope everything goes well anyways i know a lot of people here already like sharon, simmi, Vicky and i can't wait to see them again, its been such a long time. i just hope they won't blame me for what my dad did. I cant believe it's already been One year since my dad left me and mum. my father had got together with the father of my friends and invested in some shares in a company but all my life came tumbling down when we lost the money and so did my friends. we had to move house and live somewhere else and i had to leave all my best friends.

But now i am back and their is no use dwelling on the past, somebody else lives in our old house and so now this apartment is where im going to have to live from now on. 'kria darling move out the way the removal people are coming in' my mom's voice came from behind me and i jumped.
'sorry mom, which one is my room?'
'the one on the far left'
'Okk mum im just gonna go out for a while then ill be back to unpack'

i took out my back from the back of the moving van and set it on the ground. i loved to cycle it was a good way to clear your thoughts and also exercise. i cycled down the hill towards my old school st louis high then further and a row of houses came up on both sides of the lane. i remembered what it was like to live here knowing everyone and being part of one big family.

finally down the end came a big house with a small garden in the front and then a big black gate which i had once held onto when getting the post. my old house. old. as in i would never be able to come back to it. i turned my back to return before the tears would start to run when suddenly-
'heyy are you lost?' i was about to turn and bike away as quickly as possible but when i turned i forgot what i was about to say. the guy was standing at the window of my room with a amused but frowning face.
'no i was just... erm going' i said mumbling suddenly. this guy was cute i mean capable of being on television hot. snap out of it kria what are you doing? he's just a guy who lives in my room now and who happens to be really really cute.

'well i can show you the way if you want' he replied
'im not lost, i used to live here, your room was my room. and now i live somewhere else.' it was. and now i should go before i get into any more trouble.
'If you used to live here you must know the dazzlers right?' he asked. she was so beautiful and somehow so innocent it was sweet.
'the dazzlers? they still call themselves that?, yeh i do i was one of them'
she couldnt help staring at him, it was impossible to not look into his eyes, they were like a pool of grey or green or in between. and now she looked like an idiot as soon as she realized she was staring she looked away and blushed.
'well then, erm... sharon is having a party tonight you should come' he said as soon as their eye contact broke. Rey, you idiot why did you invite her to the party? you don't even know her. and stop staring.
'yeh maybe i'll think about it' kria be careful these type of guys are all over one girl in one minute and then another girl in another minute. she turned to go when he said one last thing:
'heyy im Reyansh by the way and you?' he hoped she would come even thought she said maybe. maybe could mean yes too right?
'Kria' she said before she could stop again to stare at him again she set off again cycling.
kria. he thought. nice name. he couldnt wait to see her again for some unknown reason.
Reyansh. Rey-ansh. Reyansh. kria why are you saying his name again and again. stop it and stop thinking about him. you are going to see your old friends again today. Sharon was her best friend in the group, they were practically like sisters. she couldnt wait to see her again. i wonder if she has changed or still the same. hard from the outside and soft on the inside.

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soo sorry guys but itne passey mein itna hi milenga 😆
hope you guys like it i'll proberbly do more later today as im going swimming ryt now so i have to go 😉
bye
simran xxx❤️
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heyy guys part 2

Kria shivered involuntarily she couldn't help it, how was sharon and the rest going to react when they saw her? she hoped they haven't changed much. she was wearing a black Cross Back Cami and a short denim skirt which was hopefully not too dressy but good enough for a party with her friends. she pushed the door with her right hand and hoped for the best. maybe everything was going to be alright. she thought of this morning and Reyansh she smiled remembering the way he was staring at her like there was a smile playing on his lips but wouldn't come. she had never been too happy about the divide in school about dazzlers and weaklings and had never really paid much attention to it but all her friends wanted the divide and would give her a hard time if she would even talk to a nerd but sharon would always forgive her after.

As soon as she had walked in there was whispering and everyone in the pool had also stopped to stare at her. she took a few steps before she saw sharon, vicky, nilesh, simmi, vishaka, and amar, they were all sitting in a group on a large leather couch. sharon stood up and came towards kria.She was wearing a short black halter dress with a silver barrette in her hair. she looked amazing and kria couldnt wait to talk to her. 'what are you doing here?' OH MY GOD what was kria doing here? one year ago Sharon had been completely depressed when kria had left when they had promised to be best friends forever. But that was no longer going to happen this time. No ways was she going to let kria walk all over her again. this time Kria was going to stay on the outside.
'Reyansh invited me come on Sharon it's me kria. gawd i missed you so much' kria moved forward to hug Sharon but sharon moved back and in turn shot daggers at Reyansh. when did they meet? she thought.kria couldnt believe her own best friend had moved away from her i guess she really had changed.
'go away kria you are not wanted here, not now, not ever' she said coldly. 'but sharon at least listen to what i have to say' kria pleaded on the edge of tears.
she looked at Vicky 'you guys at least listen to me' vicky was always the funny one. once he replaced my maths notebook with his and without even looking i did the homework in his book. next day when he swapped the books back, mine had no homework in it. all lunch time I tried to convince myself and the teacher that i had done my homework. we had all laughed about it afterwards but now i felt like crying as he turned his face away.
'please dont give me that emotional drama, and from now on you were never and will never be a dazzler so don't even try getting close to us again' she motioned for the rest of her group and they all moved away from kria and towards the bar.

Rey looked back at kria and saw her innocent face full of despair. his heart urged him to talk to her and stop those tears which were close to falling. at that moment he would do anything for her. what was this feeling coming over him? he didn't even know her! how could he feel this way for a girl he didn't know? he was about to go to her when he heard a voice behind him.'coming Rey?' it was vicky. 'dude you don't want to get in that mess. your new here and your lucky enough to be a dazzler so don't ruin it by mixing with a weakling.' he said motioning towards Kria. Reyansh was new but he didnt even want to get sucked into this dazzler/weakling hatred. deep down he really didnt care.we were all people but this was a tradition at st louis so he tried not to interfere too much. But now He was so stuck in between he didn't know what to do. 'yeh dont worry im coming just need to get something from outside...' he replied while staring at Kria-she was leaving and he didnt want her to go.

He ran and caught up with her in the lobby of the hotel they had booked. 'heyy kria wait please, are you okay?' he wanted to make sure she was okay for some reason. Kria stopped but didnt turn around to face him. she was so ashamed. Sharon who had shared every secret, every experience with her now no longer needed her. that Sharon had embarrassed her And she had done it in front of some one who didn't even know her. Reyansh proberbly thought she was a b****.'yeh im fine just fine. it wasnt your fault, you didnt know about what happened between us so i guess im sorry cuz i never should have came here.' and she walked out into the street. she wasnt a b**** but she wished she had a chance to prove it but she didn't because she was a weakling now and he, he was a dazzler. the street was mostly quiet with a few cars passing by every now and then. it was peacefull and gave her a chance to refresh her mind. So now i have to keep away from the dazzlers in any case. which was ironic since she missed them all so much.

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okay thanks guys hope you enjoyed 😉and please do comment love to know what you guys think.
Edited by mayurlover4eva - 14 years ago
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heyy guys time for... update no. 3 i want to say thanks to all the people who have commented so far as it really helps to know that it people are interested and want me to continue thanks🤗

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The sun peeped through a set of window curtains setting it's first ray on Kira's face. she opened one eye slowly and smiled. A new day. A new start without any dazzlers getting in the way. she would stay away from all dazzlers especially Reyansh. she didn't want to get into any fights or her mom to find out that she was no longer accepted with the friends she had known for so long. she never thought she would be coming back here so she never tried to contact Sharon but now she realized she had made a mistake. But since Sharon didn't want to listen there was nothing she could do about it. today was her first day in st louis and she was going to make new friends and live a new different life. she got up and went to the bathroom, 'lekin agar mein naye dost nahi bana paye toh?' she thought 'nahi kria think positive' she got dressed and headed out. 'kria' her mother called
'what happend mom?' she was getting late and didnt want to risk getting in trouble. 'breakfast beta, remember a healthy breakfast is key to a healthy body and brain.'
'yeh i know mom' she said and sat down on the dining table. she picked up her sandwich and stated eating.
'mom im going now' she called to her mother in the kitchen. 'okay good luck beta, and say hi to your friend sharon from me' Kria walked out and closed the door behind her. she didn't have the heart to tell her mom that she was no longer friends with them.
kria reached school just in the nick of time and went to the reception desk. 'hi ma'am, im new here. do you have my timetable?. my name is kria mohan'
she looked at the lady behind the desk with a smile on her face but the lady just looked annoyed. guess someones having a bad day she thought. 'wait'. kria walked around the room when suddenly she walked straight into a girl.
'oh um sorry, i wasn't looking' she explained.
'no no, it okay, neha knows, very difficult first day is' she said smiling. 'waise neha yeh reception teacher hamesha aise karos hai?'
Neha laughed quietly 'yes, she divorce with husband her'.
Kria laughed too. 'neha remember, kria you? kria ask help homework to me 1 year back, you only dazzler who talk to me' she smiled. 'well im no longer a dazzler so wanna be friends?' Kria moved her hand forwards to shake neha's hand. neha took it and a guy came up towards Kria with a timetable in his hand.
'thanks' she said smiling ok so maybe life was not so bad she had made 1 friend at least. she looked at her timetable. double maths? oh no! kria hated maths so much she wished she could delete it from ever becoming a subject.
'hey neha whats your first period? mine is maths'. she said with a sulk.
'literature english, sorry, by the way which room you are in?'
'2nd floor ill see you later okay? at break bye' kria started to walk up the stairs. when she reached her lesson room she realized there was nobody there. 'huh? why there is nobody here maybe i am early she sat down and waited. and waited. when nobody came she decided to check what was going on in the other class rooms. in the class next door another maths class was going on. she knocked in the door and the sir said come in.
'sir there is meant to be a maths class next door but there is no one there, the class is with,' she checked her timetable. 'prof patel'
'you are the new student kria?, where have you been! you are very late the class is about to finish! how dare you be so late to my class. you have to stay in after school now to complete the full notes, now sit down.'
god kria thought this is so embarrassing! how could this happen? i read the room name very correctly what is going on? everyone was staring at her laughing or giggling. she looked vicky and simmi, who were also laughing. damn these dazzlers. she was feeling so self conscious she didn't realize where she was sitting and when she turned to see her gaze met. Reyansh. Thats just great the guy she was trying to get away from she had to go and sit next to him.

Rey looked at Kria. he was so happy when she sat down next to him, he didn't even know why? at least now he would get to talk to her. she seemed different than yesterday night. she was... angry. Rey hoped that she wouldnt think this room switch was his fault. He didn't even know about it. it was probably vicky -he was always up to something. he smiled at Kria.

why is he smiling at me she thought? but she couldnt help smiling back. He was so cute and sweet yesterday and now the way he was smiling at her made her heart beat so fast. it was going at 100 miles per hour. kria, what if this prank was his idea? she immediately stopped smiling and turned to face the teacher. Rey looked at Kria's face but she wouldn't turn and she had stopped smiling. god Rey your such an idiot you should have stopped this happening.

For the rest of the double period kria made notes but made sure she didn't make the mistake to look at him otherwise she would just continue staring and that doesnt send a im-angry-at-you message. The buzzer went for end of lesson and Kria grabbed her papers but one of the papers had gone on Rey's side of the table.

she put out her hand but Rey had also grabbed the paper and was about to hand it to her when her hand landed on his. they looked at each other. kria's heart skipped a beat. she was touching his hand. kria lift your hand! but she felt like she could no longer feel or control her hand. Kria's hand felt so soft, it made him want to hold her hand. he looked into her eyes. she looked into his eyes. god she could just here all day next to him. they moved closer to each other without knowing. the paper fell out of his hand and instead he held her hand. he moved clos- 'Hey Rey, you coming?' Rey turned around to see vicky. argh. Kria let go of his hand and Rey let go of hers. kria? how could she be so stupid? hes probably laughing at her right now. kria took the paper off the floor and stuffed it into her bag and then she ran/walked out. 'Yh, im coming vicky' he was such an idiot he should have said something. he had wanted to talk to her since yesterday. he couldn't sleep because he was thinking of what to say to her but when it came the time to say something he just kept looking at her eyes. ahh. those eyes. Rey, stop it. he walked out of class side by side with vicky and simmi.
'what did kria do that was so big? dude why did you lot do that to her?' he was so confused about what the big fuss was.
'dude it's better if you don't get in between sharon and kria their dosti or whatever it is that they have now...' vicky was actually quite confused about sharon and kria but if sharon hated her then so did the rest of the dazzlers. after all kria had left us and sharon had said to play a prank which would ensure that kria got the message to stay away from us. to him though it was just a harmful joke. he was the prankstar of the group and he had to keep up his image.

he was walking across the corridor when he saw her. Neha. god she was so pretty like an angel. she was so sweet the way she talked. she was the only reason he sometimes wished that he was a weakling. he would go into a day dream every time he saw her. but he couldnt even tell anyone. that was the only problem.
neha looked at vicky. why is he staring at me? neha no understand she is very confused

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heyy guys hoped you enjoyed that. i enjoyed writing it.esp the neha vicky scene 😆 i dont know if i have mentioned this before but this is a multi couple FF so it will include sharon, swayum,neha, vicky,rey-kria. and maybe others... 😆 okay so i hope this is long enough cos it took me all day and now by brain has officially gone into hibernation
please do comment i love to hear what you guys think ❤️ even if it is negative. it might help me to bring the motivation back in me so plzzz okay byee

simran ❤️

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