Musical FF : Rhythm of Love: 4Oct Pg 74/ Part 16

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-Sangs-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Aussiebabe
Awesome job Sangs 👍🏼
Loved it !!

Thanks a lot for loving it...😛

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-Sangs-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: MaaneetLuverr
Jus caught up wiv ur FF
Saw you advertising it in ur VM thread...wow luving it
Haaye dream girl
Ooof luv the selection of songs you put in the updates
Du add me to ur Pm list x
Cont soon Xx..

Hey..i met you in DD Appreciation thread na...i think you are Sara na?? Well yeah i bit of advertisinf is no harm na 😆 Thanks a lot for loving this...will surely Pm you the updates...

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Sabmeratu.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

Lol yep that's me...Is this your first tym writing? I'm so amazed by your writing style👏😳

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-Sangs-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: MaaneetLuverr
Lol yep that's me...Is this your first tym writing? I'm so amazed by your writing style👏😳

Yeah this is the first time i am writing...will be updating today...acha did u read both the updates...

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-Sangs-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

Recap: He was becoming restless day by day. Adi and Tej helped him to find her out but in vain. Without knowing her name, or the place where she stays, it was really difficult in this city.

Part 3:

Itni shiddat se maine tumhe paane ki koshish ki hai ki har zarre ne mujhe tumse milane ki koshish ki hai...kehte hai agar kisi cheez ko dil se chaaho toh poori kaynath tumhein usse milane ki koshish mein lag jaati hai...

Days flew by.

Maan got an invitation to attend a charity event as a chief guest conducted by a prestigious club. He couldn't decline it. Maan asked Adi and Tej to accompany him. They were received with great respect and were escorted inside.The President of the club, asked him to join on the stage to speak a few words. Reluctantly he started going towards the stage. The President passed on the mike to him, moving his eyes all over the audience; he saw her sitting in the front row, with her eyes all set on him. He was feeling dizzy; his heart skipped a beat.Wearing a black jeans and red embellished sleeveless kurti. she looked heavenly beautiful . Maan actually couldn't believe what he was seeing.He stood there still.

He wanted to speak something, but he started singing. Looking at her with a smile.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mv-29gq3AsE[/YOUTUBE]

Dard-E-Dil Dard-E-Jigar

Dil Mein Jagaya Aapne

Pehle to Main Shaayar Tha ..

Aashiq Banaya Aapne

Everyone present there, started applauding. She too started clapping...with a smile...

He felt as if he has got his energy back...a naughtiness in his eyes...all the time gazing at her.

he started.

Aapki Madhosh Nazrein

Kar Rahi Hain Shaayari

Yeh Ghazal Meri Nahin

Yeh Ghazal Hai Aapki

Maine To Bas Woh Likha

Jo Kuchh Likhaaya Aapne

Dard-E-Dil Dard-E-Jigar

Dil Mein Jagaya Aapne...

He descended the steps, went past her, towards Adi and Tej, who were sitting few seats from her, all of a sudden he started walking backwards and stopped right before her, taking her completely by surprise,

Aur Thodi Der Mein Bas Hum Judaa Ho Jayenge

Aapko Dhoondunga Kaise Raaste Kho Jayenge

Looking straight into her eyes, with a slight smirk..he winked at her,

Naam Tak Bhi To Nahin

Apna Bataaya Aapne..

Dard-E-Dil Dard-E-Jigar

Dil Mein Jagaya Aapne

He ended with a bow. Full of energy, full of life. She stood up clapping. All eyes set on him, she took few steps towards him, and suddenly people gathered around them. Maan's eyes set on her and only her, paying no heed to who is saying what. He just said thank you and nodded his head. She was gone in a fraction of second. Maan was frustrated, no girl has ever made him so crazy and never ever has any girl been out of reach for Maan Singh Khurrana.

The life of Maan singh khurana was an open book to all. He was a carefree person, takes on things as it comes, and never ever takes chances when it comes to his work. He is damn serious about his Khurrana Constructions. After completing his MBA, he wanted to shift base to the US, but due to his Dadi, whom he adores and loves more than anyone, he stayed back in Dehradoon and took charge of the KC Empire in India.

"Maan", called out his Dadi who was seated on a couch. Maan came down the stairs and placed himself next to dadi.

" haan dadi, kya baat hai"

Woh bte, mujhe apne ek friend ke liye gift lena hai..toh zara mujhe mall tak le jaye..driver pata nahi kahaan chala gaya hai

After some pondering over some thought, he said Ok.

Aap aayiye , me gadi nikalta hoon.

City Junction Mall, the first mall in Dehradoon was inaugurated by the Khurranas. Maan dropped Dadi near the entrance and asked to carry on. Maan parked the car, and started walking towards the entrance.

He was busy playing with his keys, that he did not see someone coming straight in front of him , neither did the person who was busy managing the shopping bags see him. They both bumped, and SHE dropped her bags, was about to fall, when he pulled her with his left hand towards him, and right hand around her waist.She in the fear of falling, closed her eyes with the hand.

"Aap theek toh hain? "

She just nodded her head

"Waise aap ghiri nahi hai" He said with a slight caution and concern.

She slowly, lifted her fingers off her face.And opened her eyes.Maan stood there speechless, totally frozen.

"Thanks a lot", she said and tried herself to free from his clutches.

"Excuse me, Can you just leave me?"

Maan came back to his senses, and released her. She lifted her bags and started moving ahead.Maan composed himself, and slowly started following her.

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Ok...so i wanted to give a long update, but couldnt ..😆 Sorry..next short update tomorrow 🥳 Till then, keep commenting and keep waiting 😉

Previous update : Part 2

Next update: Part 4

Edited by sangi1588 - 14 years ago

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jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

A song instead of a speech!! 😆

But tell me, despite giving her his famous gazes and smirks she was not at all affected?? Maan you need to work real hard!!

Bump and fall...they meet in a mall!! *what a rhyme* Yeah yeah!!

Sangs...you choose such lovely songs!! For me your songs are the real hero of this story...😍

Edited by jazzerette - 14 years ago

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@DrashtiDhamiNo1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

nice update

loved it

im glad maan found her

looking forward to the next part

LOL stalker maan is on the loose 😆

cont soon please

cant wait

thanks for the pm!! :D

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soumi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#88

update soonn...

add me to ur pm list...

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Sabmeratu.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#89

Awesome update
Awww luvd how he winked at her
Lol geet was telling him to leave her as he was so lost in her...
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

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LuvScooby

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Posted: 14 years ago

#90

So, instead of giving a speech, he sang 😆 😆 I like this kinda dorky Maan...he is too cute.
Ah, but it seems like the dream girl has some temper or maybe it was her reaction to a stranger holding her.

I wonder what is this Maan going to do next, he amuses me so much 😃