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-Sangs-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: shaliniastha
awesome part

Thanks Shalini

Originally posted by: todayzstar
Wonderful update sangs..❤️
luvd it..
cntnue soon..

Thanks Reema

Originally posted by: amzu32
Lovely update!!!

thanks a lot dear...

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-Sangs-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: --Shika--
WHAT!! Over?
Bas?
Itna chota!!
NOT FAIR!!
ME pouting!!
But...
It was 😍
The song he sang on stage..lolz why don't our principal do the same instead of giving his boring speeches🤣
Bump and Fall!! But she didn't recognize him!! THE CHIEF GUEST!!
WOW!! I Love Geet here!!
Totally clueless..And Maan totally clean bowled!

😆😆 you pouting..cho chweet...u look so cute Shikha😆

Anyways thanks, par i think u will hv to wait till you meet Geet 😉 and haan update coming up shortly...

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-Sangs-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: jazzerette
A song instead of a speech!! 😆

But tell me, despite giving her his famous gazes and smirks she was not at all affected?? Maan you need to work real hard!!

Bump and fall...they meet in a mall!! *what a rhyme* Yeah yeah!!

Sangs...you choose such lovely songs!! For me your songs are the real hero of this story...😍

Jazz you edited...

Well, Was she affected or not, Have to wait Jazz ji..😉 Thanks a lot... I love listening to songs..thats why i have such a great selection of songs😉

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Craziest_MG

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Posted: 14 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: sangi1588

<font color="#990000">I love u too Vidushi😆And thanks once again😛</font>

Oh you were talking abt my name...? i thought you are talking abt my towns name(dehra dun)...he he...silly me...
N i love you too dear...so when are we getting the next part...?

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-Sangs-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: Vidushi89

Oh you were talking abt my name...? i thought you are talking abt my towns name(dehra dun)...he he...silly me...
N i love you too dear...so when are we getting the next part...?

Silly you, i was talking abt ur name...😆 update coming up shortly...give me some time...

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Craziest_MG

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Posted: 14 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: sangi1588

<font color="#990000">Silly you, i was talking abt ur name...😆update coming up shortly...give me some time...</font>

Thank you so much...

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-Sangs-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#117

Recap:

Maan came back to his senses, and released her.

She lifted her bags and started moving ahead.

Maan composed himself, and slowly started following her.

Part 4:

Maan followed her. Went and stood right in front of he, making her to stop suddenly with a jerk.

" Hi , are you Sheena? " Asked Maan carefully.

She nodded NO.

"Then Meena?

She looked at him with one eyebrow raised.

O'.K'. Nita?

She stopped walking, looked at him taping her feet.

Hmm, let me think, is your name Pari?

" Haan haan aur bolo na, are you Sneha, Pooja, Priya'Naam yaad nahi aa rahe kya?" She said imitating him, with a tinge of anger and frustration.

"Look you Mr."

"Maan , Maan Singh Khurrana" interrupted Maan with a smile ,giving his hands for a shake.

She just dodged his hands. Went two steps towards him , straight at his face..

"Look you Mr. Maan Singh Khurrana, I am not the type of girl who you flirt or go around with. And this kind of tactics for knowing my name won't work either. So you just watch out. I noticed in the charity event itself, Naam Tak Bhi To Nahin Apna Bataaya Aapne.. What was that haan, tab toh me kuch nahi boli, better thank the people who surrounded you.

Maan thought, WOW!! She remembers me..

"See Miss, whoever you are, interrupted Maan"if you think I am that kind of a guy to run behind girls, mind you ,Miss whoever you are, you are wrong. Me ladkiyon ke peeche nahi..ladkiyan mere peeche aati hain,

Hearing this Geet made a irritated face.

"Get it. And one more thing, Miss whoever you are, I saved you from falling, try to be a bit polite and thankful. One more thing Miss Whoever you are.."

" Geet, My name is Miss Geet Handa." Interrupted Miss whoever you are, without being able to tolerate more of his calling her by that name.

Screen freezes on Geet's face'

Character sketch of Geet:

Papa Ki Pari Hoon Main

Aayi Main Aayi Neele Gagan Se

Laayi Main Laayi Taaron Ke Chun Ke

Mere Liye Jo Bana Hai

Sun Le Jahan Tu Chupa Hai

Paana Mujhe Mushkil Hai

Phoolon Jaisa Mera Dil Hai

Aakar Dekhle

Papa Ki Pari Hoon Main

Geet Handa, the only daughter of a well known industrialist, Mr. Chetan Handa and homemaker Pammi Handa. She runs the industries along with her dad, having completed her MBA from IIM, Delhi. She is fun loving girl, loves her parents the most and she does not do anything which her parents do not approve of.

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A smirk crawled on Maan's lips, "Well Miss Geet Handa, My tactics worked." He winked at her.

She was shocked- surprised, and couldn't hold back her smile.

He thought, Geet, mere dil ki meet.

She composed herself, "Well, Mr. Maan. Thanks a lot for saving me today. I really appreciate it. "

"Your most welcome Miss Geet, Miss na??"

"Haan Miss", she smiled and turned to leave , again.

"Coffee?"

"Well, aaj nahi I need to go, important business meeting hai. It was nice meeting you Mr. Maan." She wanted to leave right NOW.

"Toh kal? Please mana mat kariye. bahut mushkil se aapko dhoonda hai." Saying this he bit his lips.

She was taken aback .She just wanted to get out of there,

she said "Hmm. Well me Ajnabee ke saath bahar jana pasand nahi karti." She waved good bye and turned to leave.

He followed, "isliye agar aap ajnabee ko jaanegi nahi toh, phir hum ek doosre ko kaise jaanege", Maan said with a broad smile.

"Abhi toh mile hain, dosti toh door ki baat hai"

Dosti ki shuruaat tohho chuki hai, nahi aap itne der mujhse aise baat nahi karte.

Geet stood still. She didnt expect such replies from him.She was flabbergasted.

Ok, fine. If I say No, you wnt leave me from here, will you? Kal 5 baje ..CCD me milte hain..

Now Bye, Maan. She left, finally.

Maan stood there, seeing the figure disappear slowly.

Maan, haaye my name sounds so different when she calls me..I am just loving it.

He started humming

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=beqTRIpoos8[/YOUTUBE]

Deewaanaa Huaa Baadal Saawan Kee Ghataa Chhaayee

Ye Dekh Ke Dil Zoomaa, Liyee Pyaar Ne Angadayee

He started swinging, dancing with imaginary Geet. Luckily no one was present there.

Ayesee To Meree Takadeer Naa Thee

Tum Saa Jo Koee Mehaboob Mile

Dil Aaj Khushee Se Paagal Hai

Aye Jaana-ye-wafaa Tum Khub Mile

Dil Kyoo Naa Bane Paagal Kyaa Tumane Adaa Paayee

Deewana Huaa Baadal Saawan Kee Ghataa Chhaayee

Ye Dekh Ke Dil Zoomaa, Liyee Pyaar Ne Angadayee

Dadi's voice made him come back to reality. He composed himself.

"Maan"

Shit Dadi..

Shit Dadi nahi, Sirf Dadi..kahaan the aap..aur woh kaun thi..

Dadi..woh koi nahi, bas aise hi, takara gaya tha unse..Geet se

Geet? Hmm..kuch toh gadbad hai bte, aapka dhyaan kahin aur hi hai..

Jabse me aayi hoon, aap usi direction me dekh rahe hain.

Chaliye humse kuch mat chupaiye.

He turned to face Dadi..

Dadi..aap bhi na..Me gadi nikalta hoon .

She caught him by the shirt..And pulled him back..

Acha batata hoon, He thought for a while and started..

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BEypRpnQBDQ[/YOUTUBE]

Aati hain woh aaise chal ke jaise jannat mein rehti hain

dekhti hain sabko aaise jaise sabko woh sehti hain

He tries to imitate Geet.. by showing Dadi big eyes, and angry face..

Par gusse mein jo aaye aur ankhein woh dikhlaye

ladte ladte galti se muskaaye

my dil goes mmm...

Dadi couldn't stop herself from a broad smile, Maan asks his dadi's for a dance..she obliges..

They move slowly..

ha thoda alag si hain

ha thoda galat si hain

aaisi bhi hogi woh aaisa na socha tha

aaisi bhi hogi woh aaisa hi socha tha

kyo lagta hain yeh apna

yeh sach hain ya hain sapna

dar lagta hain kahi ho na jaaye jhuth

my dil goes mmm...

The people in the parking lot start gathering around, and Dadi suddenly stops him and says lets leave. He too starts feeling embarrassed. Runs his hands through his hair..and leaves to get the car.

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I met him today, jiska darr tha wohi hua, he asked me out for a coffee, I had to give in."

Are you crazy, how can you do this. Kya tu bhool gayi jo kuch kiya usne" , Pinky ,Geet's best friend said.

How can I forget what he has done to me? But he doesn't even recognize me, Pinky. I dnt think hume is baat ko aur aage badana chahiye, Isliye I said Ok for coffee.,bas coffee pee longi aur nikal jaongi.

Haan , do that. Geet tu bahut badal gayi. Pinky, said carefully . Pehle kaisi chup chup rehti thi..aur ab dekho..You are trying to forgive him.

Hmm.. You have to move on babes. Forgive him, toh pata nahi..par haan use achi tarah sabak toh zaroor sikhongi. Dwelling on past will do no good to anyone. Yeh maine jaan liya hai..Now let's see what Life has in store for me..

Mujhe apni kismat par poora bharosa hai..She cut the call, and started to pull the car out from the car park.

Geet's thoughts...I have no regrets in my life. I think that everything happens to you for a reason. The hard times that you go through build character, making you a much stronger person.

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So how was the update? It is a very long update..so i need big comments too😆 Acha , stay tuned for more. Keep commenting and Keep waiting.. Loads of love...Your comments mean a lot to me...

Previous update: Part 3

Next Update: Part 5

Edited by sangi1588 - 14 years ago

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Kesha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#118

1) you used one of my favz... Deewana hua badal.. one melodious number from Kashmir ki Kali picturized on 2 of my fav actors and the combination of Rafi saab's voice and OP Nayarji's music. Man they dont create melodies like these anymore... what a shame..

2) humm.. so there is something in the past... an intrigue factor added... Kesha wonders what has Maan done to hurt Geet... He seems like a guy who could never hurt anyone... I m so curious... and so.. Geethu... u better update soon...

Kesha wonders which haunting melody Geethu is going to use next...

Edit:... I just noticed... me first to comment... yipeee

Edited by kesha2412 - 14 years ago

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Alamelu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#119

starting to get real interesting...wondering what history they had together and why does maan not remember anything????/

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-Sangs-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: kesha2412
1) you used one of my favz... Deewana hua badal.. one melodious number from Kashmir ki Kali picturized on 2 of my fav actors and the combination of Rafi saab's voice and OP Nayarji's music. Man they dont create melodies like these anymore... what a shame..

2) humm.. so there is something in the past... an intrigue factor added... Kesha wonders what has Maan done to hurt Geet... He seems like a guy who could never hurt anyone... I m so curious... and so.. Geethu... u better update soon...

Kesha wonders which haunting melody Geethu is going to use next...

Edit:... I just noticed... me first to comment... yipeee

See again, we think so alike...that is one of my fav too..i seriously think the same, why dnt they make such melodious songs with awesome lyrics..

Wonder wonder, what Maan has done to geet...

Thats the same thing ...Geetu is wondering, next melody...😆

And one more thing..Go check ur FB inbox...i need the answer..