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Posted: 13 years ago
HI PEOPS...
thanks for all ur love to this ff...
i am so elated the i a thinking to update the next part by today...
and i promise it to be a large one..
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Posted: 13 years ago
HI POEPS...
THIS IS PART 18:
Today all planned to go for shopping…
All were ready and they came down except geet…dev called 3 taxies…
In one dev,naintara,naina,devanshi and nilesh were ready to go…they had place for 1 more so they asked maan to call geet..he went and came after 2 min. saying that geet will come in another one😉…so they called him but he said that he would come after everyone….so the first one was gone….
Then in second one brij,lavi,karan,rano and mohinder were there…they asked maan about geet so he said that she had already gone in the first one itself….so they too went😉….
They maan had a victory smile😃😃 on his face…..then he saw geet coming he wiped off his smile and was with a straight face….geet came out and was locking the door….after locking maan saw her searching for the taxies….he saw her confusion and was trying to control her laughter….
Then he saw her going to the drivers standing and asking about the other…
G:suniye bhai sahib saari car kahan chali gayi?
TD:mam 2 car tho chali gayi hai…aab aap aur yeh bahi sahib reh gaye hai aur aap ko is ek taxi mein jana hai…
G:aacha bhai shab mein baithe thi hun aur mujhe mall chood dena…
TD:ji madam…
Maan's hope was shattered into pieces 😭😭 he thought that he and geet would go alone….but then too he didn't lost hope….he saw in the direction of the car…geet went and sat in the back seat and the driver was coming near the car………
Maan ran to the driver and asked him the keys….after getting the keys he went and sat in the driving seat and started to drive the car……after exiting the gate of the home maan adjusted the rear mirror in such a way that he can see geet…..
He wanted geet to talk to him but he didn't get any topic on how to start…..then suddenly an idea struck on his mind..
M:geet how is south India?(maan asked in English as he knew even if he ask in hindi geet's answer would surely be in eng. Only rarely would reply in hindi to maan….maan wanted to know why is it like that??)
G:gud…
M:u know tamil na??
G:ya…
M:(bas ek shabdh iaise tho mera pass tho topic hi nahi rahega geet se baat karne ke liye)is it easy???
G:no!!!
M:oh then how did u learn???
G:u know what if a person stays in a place for 18 years then that person is to surely leard that language…ok….
M:ok…(angry…meri bhalie isi mein hai ki mein aabhi aapna muh bandh kar kar baithe rahun….)
(meri bhi😆😆😆….sigh…………..)
They reached the mall……the shopped for everyone….
These are the things that they took……..
THAT'S ALL FOLKS FOR TODAY………..
PRECAP:WHAT THE BROUGHT😉😉………….
I AM EXTREMELY SORRY😃 IF MY UPDATE IS NOT LONG AS U EXPECTED……….
I WILL TRY TO UPDATE THE NEXT PART BY THE NEXT 2 DAYS😊😊……..
LOADS OF LOVE AG❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsome loved it
Superb cont soon
_Shabru_ thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow!!! luvly update.. waitng 4 nxt part..😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
I don't like geet's behavior towards maan.
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Posted: 13 years ago
love love love loveee th update!!!!!!!!!!

awesome part!!!!

sorry for not commenting yaar...but i was really busy ...u know exams and all!!!!

cont soon

love o tons

esha
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shabru098

Wow!!! luvly update.. waitng 4 nxt part..😛

thank u...
kingofme thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: seemamary

I don't like geet's behavior towards maan.

dont worry dear...
very soon u will know the secret for this behavior
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Posted: 13 years ago

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