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Ur update was damn good...
I just love arnav in ur ff, not tht i dont love him in show, but he is soo just so good in ur ff...
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OMG...i love it.. love it... love it..
i actually love it more then chocolate...which is not normal for me..!!😆
well done yaar...lovely FF...m in love with it!!😳
update soon..!!
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Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya

Well written! I really love the way the story's shaping up!

cont soon

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Originally posted by: Sabina_Ansari

Ur update was damn good...

I just love arnav in ur ff, not tht i dont love him in show, but he is soo just so good in ur ff...
thnx for pm...
Update soon...

Thanks and i'll surely update by the end of today or early tommorow
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Originally posted by: -Ammie-

OMG...i love it.. love it... love it..

i actually love it more then chocolate...which is not normal for me..!!😆
well done yaar...lovely FF...m in love with it!!😳
update soon..!!

Thanks that is one of the biggest compliments I got. I'll updat e by today evening or tommorow morning
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Just read thru the whole FF, simply irrestible are the right words to describe it. You are a talented writer, thats for sure. Can't wait for the next update
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Ok well I had already finished editing this chapter so I figured I might as well put it up.

Thank you so much for all the reviews. I love all of you.

Enjoy!

Khushi woke up Sunday morning at the sound of house's doorbell ringing. It was the mailman and he had a package and a letter in his hands. She opened the door and took the letter and package from him.

She looked at the letter. There was no writing on it. She opened it and a small ring fell out. It was made of yellow gold ring that with Marquis-shaped sapphire stones that were set at the ends of two beautiful pure white pearls. It was the ring that she had stared at when Raizada no wait Arnaav (they were now going by first names as it wouldn't be as believable if they dated and still called each other by their last names) had taken her to a store. A woman had been trying it on when Khushi saw it and fell in love with it.

Pearls had always been her favorite out of all others as it had been her mother's favorite too. She used to love watching her mother putting on her pearl earrings and necklace. She used to dream of wearing pearls and look as sophisticated as her mother. Her father had even given her a cute pearl necklace when she was eight. She had cherished it but it had outgrown her years ago.

She checked once again at the envelope. She glimpsed some writing on the top of the inside of the envelope. On it said'

To match your nail polish.

-ASR

Khushi stared at it then laughed. Arnaav Singh Raizada had gotten it for her. She would've never seen that happening in a million of years. Heck if someone had told her yesterday he would have bought her the ring she would have stared at them nuts especially after what Arnaav said about it. She could quote his exact words.

"Should've known you'd like that cheap looking ring, Gup- err Khushi."

She slipped it on her finger. It fit perfectly.

She sat on her computer and wrote Raizada a thank-you email. She then stoop by her window and relished the sunlight on her face.

It was Sunday. She normally went to the shantivilla to join the Maliks for their annual brunch but things were different this time. She wasn't with Shyam anymore and she doubted that he wouldn't come. Just as she was thinking this, she heard the ding from her computer telling her of an incoming mail. One she recognized. It was Aakash's the other just was about some deal.

We need to talk. I tried calling you several times yesterday but you didn't answer. I'm so sorry about Shyam. If you need me, I'm just a phone-call away. Are you going to brunch today? Please do, you know you're always welcome even if you and Shyam are no longer together.

-Aakash

Khushi smiled sadly before writing a reply.

I can't sorry. I'm not ready yet. Tell them though that I'm sorry. I'm headed to the produce market today. Do you, Payal, or Teddy need anything?

-Khushi

Arnaav Singh Raizada sat on one of the plush seats as he read the e-mail Khushi had sent him.

He still wore his sleeping wear, a pair of silk black trousers and no shirt. He had an amused smile on as he read it.

Raizada

Really, it is unnecessary for you to keep spending money on me. I owe you so much already. Who would've thought? Anyway, I'm making dinner tonight. Can you join? I promise not to poison anything' yet. If not it's alright. Dinner will be at six.

Sincerely

Khushi

P.S.

Thank you for the beautiful ring. I love it. I know you must've been struggling with yourself to buy such a cheap looking ring. I do hope you'll recover.

Khushi was truly one of a kind. He mused to himself before getting into the shower.

Khuhsi got out of the shower and dressed in a long yellow free flow shirt and a white trimmed spaghetti strap shirt that Raizada had bought for her along with several other things.

When she walked into her kitchen She again heard the ding of her computer

Actually yes. Can you get me some homemade chocolate? Can you send it to me during work on tomorrow? Payal's on a miserable diet because she wants to fit into a dress she won't show me for the 5th anniversary of my fashion empire and is making me do it with her. Apparently diets work better when done as a couple. Must've been a woman who wrote that. No offense.

-Akash

Khushi laughed as she read the letter. And returned to the kitchen

Akshay, Payal and Teddy were the last to arrive at the annual Malik brunch. Instead of the loud welcome they were used to, they were met with smiles and hellos but there was an uncomfortable silence as they appraised the strange beautiful woman latched on the arm of the youngest male Malik.

"Good to see you dears." Mrs. Malik said as she kissed them both on the cheek. "Let me see my darling Grandson." She said as she picked up Teddy. "Guess who's here today." She said as she brought him over to Riddhima and her daughter Naiyya.

All the Malik's then began to take turns hugging the young couple until at last it was Shyam and Lavanya.

"Hello Akshay, Pay." Shyam said sheepishly. "Um I'd like you two to meet Lavanya."

Everyone there was silent even the two children as they watched how the Dogras would react.

"Uh, yeah, nice to meet you." Aakash said awkwardly.

Lavanya gave a devastatingly dazzling smile that she was famous for. "It's a pleasure to meet you at last. I've heard so much about you. All good of course."

Aakash gave a tight smile, fighting the urge to whack his best mate over the head for doing what he did to Hermione for this woman in front of him. He turned to look at his wife. Payal had a hard look on her face as did many others there.

"Well Lavanya Kashyap. You're most certainly as beautiful as the magazines exclaim." She said dryly. No one could figure out if she was complimenting Lavanya or insulting her. Not even Aakash. Then Payal walked into the kitchen completely ignoring her brother. An awkward silence occurred.

"The food's about ready. Let's all sit." Mr. Malik said. Everyone followed him to the table and began to sit at their usual spots. Armaan and Mr. Malik sat at the two heads. Their wives to their right. Payal sat by her mother, Teddy in between her and Aakash. But there was an awkward silence as the seat beside him was usually occupied by Khushi. But it was the only seat empty and was beside Shyam. Just as Lavanya was about to sit down, both Teddy and Naiyya exclaimed together.

"That's Aunty Khushi's seat!"

Lavanya flushed in embarrassment as did Shyam.

"Lavanya please sit." Mrs. Malik ushered as she tried to be the mediator in the family as always.

The two children's parents turned to hush their child but did so half- heartedly with grins on their faces.

Karan too grinned from behind his newspaper.

"Karan Malik. Honestly would you put that newspaper down."

"In a minute Mum. I don't usually get to read current Daily Prophets often because in Romania they always come a day late. I'm just enjoying it as long as I can and this is a really interesting article."

"Why what's it about?" Rahul asked.

"Raizada's latest squeeze." Karan said. "And boy does she have nice legs."

Lavanya's eyes were wide as she heard this. "What's her name?" She asked squeakily. Everybody turned to look at her.

"It doesn't say, they don't know. It just says Mystery Girl." Karan answered.

"Oh." Lavanya said.

"She's probably some kind of model." Siddarth said.

"I bet. She's gorgeous. Long wavy black hair, lovely figure, and legs for days."

"Let me see." Armaan asked.

"Armaan!" His wife Ridhimma exclaimed.

"I just want to see." Armaan defended.

Ridhimma sighed at her husband.

Armaan let out a whistle as he looked at her. "She definitely has to be a model. But she's still not anywhere as beautiful as you Mrs. Malik." Armaan said to his wife.

She just looked at him with a hard stare but then grabbed the magazine from him. She looked at the picture. It was a picture of two people. The man was definitely Arnaav Singh Raizada, was putting his blazer over one of the woman's shoulders. The woman was indeed gorgeous with her long Black hair that cascaded down her side. You could only see the side of her face as they caught the picture just as she turned to look at him by craning her neck, exposing a lovely swan like neck. Her dress fit her perfectly but still left a lot still to the imagination. It also exposed long shapely legs that many women would die for.

"I think I recognize her." Ridhimma said as she looked the magazine down.

Karan's eyes bugged out as did Armaan's.

Siddarth immediately grabbed the picture. He and Rahul both looked at the picture. They were both also impressed with it.

"How does the ferret always get them?" Siddarth asked as he looked at the picture.

Rahul made no comment on that. "Riddhima do you know her from Fashion school?" He asked.

"Maybe." Ridhimma said thinking. "I don't know for sure."

"When you remember, can you introduce her to me?" Karan joked but had an edge of seriousness.

The picture was passed to Rahul's Wife Muskaan then Mr. Malik then Mrs. Malik.

Payal looked at it over her mother's shoulders. Her eyes widened it disbelief. "Oh my god!" Payal exclaimed.

Cliff hanger!

Review please

Part 6: page 27
Edited by hieverybody - 14 years ago

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