^THE JADED PRINCE^-sk (ch-78,pg-149) - Page 5

Originally posted by: -purnima-

nice update 👏👏...
first things 😛😛... happy that SK married 😛😛... initially itself 😆😆... so no worries abt how , when they wud meet 😆😆😆...tht is true😉, but hey... the marriage is as good as a first meeting only.. espicially by the way sujal is behaving

Sujal seems to be emotionless & stone hearted with no feelings 😔 ... i swera he will have valid reasons for being so...😲

will wait to see how their relation will progress 😛😛and we'll wait for u comments..

continue soon 😳

Originally posted by: Pumpkinn

That was amazing ...thanks😊

I was soo loving reading ...

Their " Suhag Raat " which locked more like some business meeting hehehee lol...😆, I mean Sujal setting rules for his Client oh sorry Wife was the most interesting part ...it was wasnt it?poor kashish...

Kashishs thought process from 11:55 till Sujal arrived was the best part ... we are glad u liked it

I guess we are yet to witness a huge lot of twist like Kashisha past , Sujal reason to marry her ...

It would be fun reading this ff ...the story is so full of twists, tht u'll nver guesswht nexr may happen...we hope u enjoy the whole story

Plzz update soon ...

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

gosh...he's so mechanical and so methodical...its just the begining.. u havent seen how robotic he can be...

i want to drown in his oh-so-dark-charcoal like-cold-and-cynical-eyes...oh u liked tht did u?😆😉

bechari kashish...

what happened in her past...read on...

why did he marry her...tht too will be revealed..

mamaji ke kya motives hain???gande...thts all i can say for now

update sooon

vidushi.

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is up is good

so kashish is married to suajl that great but yaar this sujal he is treats his wife like his client putting all those condition on her he has his reasons.. u'll found out chapter by chapter

like kashish me too wan to know why suajl wan her back home before 7 what will happen after that will saujal turn into a vampire ...HEHEHEEE😆😆😆😆 nawww he doesnt... dear he comes home at night too... u'll find out about it in the next UD or two...
btw if u want vampire stuff.. try storywriter's "vampire and angel" ... or mine "my demonic boss"

plz cont soon and pm me

Originally posted by: sania_58

superbthanks😃 and pehle he keh doon.. commnet bhi superb hai😃😃😃

mujhe intro padhke ki laga tha iss story ka concept different hai,yes, very unique concept & interesting alsowe are glad our intentions got through.

So Shaadi se shuru,Sujal oh my god, yeh kaisa character hai???handsome?😆😉

Sujal ka character completely mysterious hai.First update padh kar main uss ke character ke baare main bilkul andaza nahin laga paayi.His attitude & commandable personality,puntuality, my goodnessheheeeheee bechari kashish ke bhi iam sure kuch aise hi thoughts hai...😆😆.1 baje shaadi ek baje hi andar aaya.Phir aapne newly wife ko ghar main ghusa kar bola 11:15 tak uske aane se pehle bahar naa aaye.phir 11:15 ko hi andar aaya.andar stop watch fit hai.. spinal cord se.. saare working aise hi hoti hai... aur bahi to kuch nai.. just keep reading for more of his watchkeeper attitude..😆Phir chair par beth kar rules batane lag gaaya.Jab usne Kashish se kaha "This is my house" to itna serious update padhte waqt bhi mujhe thora hassi aayi, kyun bhai tujhe yeh particularly mention karne ki kya zarurat????tere personality ke hisab se tu aapne biwi ko podosi ke ghar to nahin le jayega????HAHAHAAAHAAAHAA ROFL...we didnt even realise tht while writing the part ourselves... thanks for pointing out the pun..😃😃😃😆😆😃.Phir to rules ki barsaat,jisme kashish bura bhheeg gai...Ladkio par Sujal ko zaara sa bhi bhorosa nahin hai.warna usse Shaadi ki pehli raat hi aisa kyun laga Kashish aur se affair karega???yeh bhi bata diya agar usne pakra to usse alimony nahin dega.yah he doesnt trust giirls.. and the extent of this mistrust... u wont be able to imagine tht...Kashish was right, agar usse koi bhi galti hui to Sujal usse marr hi dalega.heheee wht do u know. he is an utterly unpredictable wildcard...😃

loved this storylove this comment😃

just brillaintThaknyou so much😃😃

FATAFATI ekdum

great going

waiting for the next update

Originally posted by: sensitivesheela

ohhh sujal is weird character always for me but this itme its 200% weird thts the aim... nobody shud understand his char completly in this ff.. he shud remain mysterious and hence have the attraction of mytry to be solved..lol i mean i can't even explqain how i felt about his character na he is cold very cold but i want to know what's kashish's past?and why he don't like women??all will be revealed in due timeits all full of suspense but i would love to read it its some thing different something different is wht we'll absolutly promise u😊

Originally posted by: spvd

part 1
wow interesting...
Sujal is a pakka business man...
ghar par bhi...maybe thts why he's sooo successful😆😆😆😉
twas like he was reciting the rules to be followed...yup he was...and any mistake wud be... HAHAHAA😆😉
cont soon...

Originally posted by: HhAaNnAa

ouuuccchhh sujal is such a rule boook...poor kashish i wonder hw they'll get along wid eachoda...it seems like punctuality ka bhooot is in sujal for good loleither its tht or he has stop watch fitted to his spinal cord which timingly controls all his movemnets...lol

p.s: megs n neelu awesme intro m strting to luv the storyline :)thanku😊😊😊😊

continue soon

Update was very good.

Sujal and Kashish are married but it seem like a business deal. where Sujal has laid out a number of rules for Kashish.

Kashish is intimidated by Sujal's personality, she relaises that he is Extremely punctual and authoritative

Even I am curious as to why Sujal wants Kashish to come back at 7.30pm even though he will be working till late.

please continue soon

CHAPTER 2

Sinful Seven Thirty.

It was next morning, when Kashish opened her eyes. She looks besides her to see her husband but the place was vacant. She looked around to find Sujal, but he was not in the room. She also checks the washroom, but it is also vacant. She wonders when he had left. She remembers that he said that he leaves at 8 am. She glances at the clock to see that it was 7.50. That means there were 10 minutes left and so that meant he hadn't left. She quickly goes down the stairs to reach the dining area.

He is sitting on a chair and quietly having his breakfast that the male servant has served. She walks towards the dining table and stands near him but maintaining a distance.

He didn't react in any way to her presence, as if she didn't even exist. She waited for some moments for him to say something, or even look up at her but he didn't. She didn't understand what kind of man she was married to? How can a person be so unaffected? Why was he so silent?

When he didn't utter even a word or didn't even look up then she clears her throat to gain his attention. She musters all her courage to start a conversation.

k-Good morning !

Kashish greets him with a smile.

He rolls his eyes up without moving his head and looks up at her. His pitch black eyes were so dark and deep that they could penetrate through the soul. He just nods.

He gets up picking his briefcase. But before leaving he again reminds the rules with his emotionless voice.

s-I am leaving, will be late. After 7.30, stay in. Lock the door properly.

k-but….

He stops his steps and waits for her to complete.

k-but…how would you get in the room, if I lock it.

s-I have the keys.

He walks out of the house without another word.

As he goes, Kashish looks around the house. The drawing room had a huge bar in it. It had all class, quality and type of liquor she could even think of. But to Kashish they were just some colorful liquids. But the drawing room was in a mess, she looked around to see the liquor bottle lying here and there. The room was in a complete mess, with things lying everywhere. She frowns with astonishment as she glances around.

The servant, Ramsingh gauges her dilemma and quickly starts to clear up the mess.

Rs-madam, wo..hum kar dete hain.

k-par, ye itna ganda? Kaise?

Rs-wo to ma…mam…wo to raat ko roz

k-raat ko roz kya?

Rs-wo..wo kuch nahi madam…wo hum mamaji ko uthake aate hain

The servant quickly leaves leaving Kashish with numerous questions in her mind.

~*~

Its afternoon, Kashish decides to prepare the lunch herself as it's the first day of her new beginning. She wants to start the new life with new hopes and wishes and wants to forget the scars of her past.

Kashish is working in the kitchen and the servant is helping her.

k-Sujal luch nahi le jaate

Rs-nahi wo bahar khaa lete hain

k-aur raat ka khana?

Rs-wo kabhi khate hain , kabhi nahi khaate. Marzi hai.

k-hmm, thik hai to dinner aaj main hi bana lungi, sab saath khaa lenge.

RS-nhai madam, aapka khana sir ne kaha hai 7.30 se pehle room mein rakhwane ko. Aap khaa lena. Aur mamaji aur sir ka khana dhak ke rakh dena, wo kha lenge

She doesn't reply to him, as again the same question arises in her mind that what happens after 7.30?

k-acha, mamaji ko utha diya tha? Naashta nahi kiya unhone?

RS-nahi nahi, wo abhi kahan uthenge

k-matlab? 12 bajne wale hain

Rs-wo uth jayenge madam, chodo aap.

The servant leaves the vicinity as he is ordered not to open his mouth much.

~*~

The evening approaches and as instructed she goes back to her room and locks herself inside. She looks at the clock as it ticks 7.30. She sits back on the bed, wondering what will happen now, what is the mystery behind the 7.30. She could hear the cars being parked and people approaching downstairs. There are voices, voices of people talking, all are men she guesses. But why are so many men in the house. Who were they? Were they her husband's friends? If even they are Sujal's friend then why isn't Sujal introducing her to them. After all, she was his wife. Doesn't he consider her as his wife? Why has he asked her to lock herself up, when his friends were downstairs. More Kashish would think about the matter more drowned she would get in her confusion.

It was late and Kashish drifted into sleep, when Sujal open the door of the room and entered.

His steps were noiseless, but Kashish wasn't fully asleep, she was just in a slumber. She slightly opens her eyes to take a look at her husband. She could smell the alcohol in the air but he didn't look drunk, but just slightly less sober. He enters the washroom like the previous day, takes a shower and lays down besides her without even uttering a word to her.

She also doesn't dare to ask him about his whereabouts and the happenings downstairs.

~*~

A week passes with same routine consisting of her getting up in the morning (she decided to whole heartedly give the wedding a try, so made it a point so get up before him), preparing tea, he getting up with a buzz of the alarm, she handing over him with a cup of tea, she preparing breakfast, he going to washroom for shower and getting ready in 10 minutes, he getting down, having the breakfast silently and leaving. She sometimes thinks of calling him, but then decides against him as she remembers his words.

This is my mobile number, call me when it is Very necessary.

And the last thing she wants to do is annoy him and further spoil his perennial grumpy mood.

She always wishes while preparing breakfast and dinner for him that he will at least compliment her once as every time she tries to do her best, even if they don't have the their meals together. But he never says anything. Actually, he seldom talks. She wonders how a person can live without talking. His answers and replies just consist of single word or single sentences. Neither had she ever seen him smile, laugh was beyond expectation.

He never seems to notice my presence

She would think, then she would argue with herself that why would he notice her, she is not good enough for him. At least he seems to not hate her, that should be enough.

~*~

Kashish was hurrying with her work as it would be 7.30 soon. She quickly turns off the gas as the clock ticks 7.30 and retrieves to her room. Shutting and locking it properly.

Some hours pass like usual, but suddenly she remembers that she had forgotten to put the dinner on their plates, as she did a daily chore of pitting the dinner for Sujal and mamaji and covering it with a lid.

It was already 10 pm and she thought they would go to the kitchen to have dinner. She gets up quickly to finish her unfinished task.

She walks down the stairs. As she reaches down she witnessed a dozen men stationed at every corner of the drawing room, with drinks in their hand. Some were half-drunk and some can't-even-stand drunk. Among the unknown faces she locates mamaji who is blabbering something in his drunken stupor and sitting at the corner on the bar stool is Sujal, who is aloof from all the commotion and is silently sipping his drink.

She decides to ignore these men and make her way to the kitchen, but she easily gets noticed. She could feel the eyes of those lecherous men travelling from the tip of her hair to her toe nail. She decides to fasten her pace, but before that she hears the familiar deep voice calling her name.

'Kashish !'

She freezes as she recognizes the voice. She swallows and turns to look at Sujal. His deep black eyes are dangerously penetrating her through his stare.

s-Go inside !

He commands her firmly in a low and controlled tone.

k-emm….but…[his looks are making her tongue tied]

s-GO INSIDE ! NOW !

She shivers as he roars at her. She goes inside without wasting a moment. She runs to her room and shuts the door, locking it properly. She was still in that daze of his shouting, he never spoke to her much nor raised his voice ever, but she knows now that when he does it has so much effect.

Sujal was still looking at the path she went, his heart churning with mixed emotions.

Why did she come out? Why wouldn't she listen to me?

He asked himself, then he thought that she was a woman, woman are willful, disloyal and disobedient, that's their nature. Even this girl can't help it.

His eyes falls on a man who was still dreamily gazing at the path she came from, his lecher filled face and vulgarity in eyes mirrored his thoughts.

Sujal's eyes were murderously staring at him. His hand as if automatically working and having a mind of its own grabs the nearest bottle and bangs it on the man's head, making a huge crackling sound and breaking the glass bottle into thousand pieces. Every one around was stunned as the man started bleeding.

Everybody quickly leaves seeing Sujal in murderous rage. Nobody has seen him so angry ever.

Even Sujal was surprised at his reaction. He wondered what made him become so violent when he had decided not to go back into the path of violence again.