its time to fall in love again(ARSH) - Page 3

Part 4-

Sid enters his room and goes to turn the light on. The light is on automatically and all the boys are there except Armaan. Sid was surprise and Yuvi was also there. Sid asks him how u came here den he replies that m came here to attend my friend marriage and I can do that for you. Sid hugs Yuvi. Then he says there is one more surprise for you "JP calls her". JP calls Munni and the Munni with her two friends. Then there is song sequence on Munni Badnaam. In the middle of the songs Riddhima think that Sid might be hungry so she decided to go to his house and give him food. And when the songs end Riddhima rings the bell. The door bell rings and SID and other boys get scared and tries to hide her inside the house in the mean while SID opens the door and gets shocked to see Riddhima standing there and then tries to behave normal
RIDDHIMA - why did u take so long to open the door
SID - I was taking a shower so...
RIDDHIMA - oh
SID - what brings you here at this time of night?
RIDDHIMA - I thought that u would be hungry as u haven't had anything today due to your hectic duties and there is no one here to cook for u so I thought of bringing food for u by myself (after saying this she tries to enter the house and SID tries to stop him from entering)
SID - ok ok thank u so sweet of u I will have it by myself and I think u should go now as it is too late
RIDDHIMA - no its ok I can stay here for sometime I want u to have it in front of me
(while this conversation is going on the Munni sees a cockroach and shouts loudly and comes out and hugs SID very tightly in front of RIDDHIMA)
RIDDHIMA - SID who is she?
MUNNI - who is she darling?
RIDDHIMA - (angrily) darling.
SID - she is my wife RIDDHIMA and she is ...
MUNNI - I m MUNNI
RIDDHIMA - what are u doing here?
MUNNI- I m here to dance for the bachelors party
RIDDHIMA - so this is what u were doing behind me... I was tensed about u and u r enjoying here doing parties with friends that to a bachelors party
SID - RIDDHIMA listen to me it not like that actually let me explain all this (RIDDHIMA stops him)
RIDDHIMA - I don't want to listen to anything u enjoy ur party with ur friends and this MUNNI I m going bye
(RIDDHIMA goes out of the house shutting the door hard and SID is standing with his friends alone and sad)

Tomorrow-

Shilpa come up with an idea for doing something on riddhima's marriage and that is performing dance. Shilpa says to Armaan because I L…. Armaan-I am happy

Originally posted by: amaniM

why such a short update? it was over before i knew it but overall good. Just a suggestion plz next time elaborate a bit more especially a part which you are picking from the actual play to give it you own interpretation it is necessary you go a bit further. Don't mind just my POV, actually trying to get a lengthy part from you

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Originally posted by: Parishay_91

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Armaan this is going good, 😊

but yes you are writing very short parts,

try to write more, then it'll be a great Fic, 😉

update regularly please 😃

thanks for this fic 😊