Fallacy Mayur FF- Prt 8, pg 46

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Hey guys, hope you havn't forgotten me.

I know everyone will scold me for writing another Mayur FF, since I know that I never EVER continue,
par please please do read it na.
And when you comment, you can always throw your
andas, chappals, ect...
And yes, I will be writing this FF with Maria di.
*Drum rolls everyone*
😆
So we'll take turns updating this.
Concept- Umm, common story girl guy meet, guy rich, thinks about himself. Girl just like humari crazzy Nupur *And her follower ME* They meet, love? Not so much.
I have no clue what else to say,
just scared to know what you all will say😆
and P.S
love you all
🤗
Part 1- Pg 1
Part 2- Pg 12
Part 3- Pg 21
Part 4- Pg 25
Part 5- Pg 31
Part 6- Pg 37
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Charcter Sketch

Nupur- 18 years old, in collage, talks a lot, open minded, everyone who gets to know her loves her, acts just like a kid at times, know how to make people say yes to what she wants, love her brother and sister-in-law, since they are always with her, and the only ones in her family, and she respects them a lot. Her parents died when she was only a child, but with Samrat she never her miss their presence. She hates love, because she thinks it's stupid, but she did have many crush, since she found that person cute looking. She's simple, cute, yet crazzy, enjoying rain, loves little kids, and acts like them when she's around them.
Mayank- 22 years old, bussinessman, very rich, hates love, hates when his mother tell him to marry, has no interest in marriage or girl, since he thinks they are a waste of time. Mostly out of country, since he works mostly all his time, hates rain, kids annoy him, reserved person, never shares what he is feeling inside, even inside many people don't know that he is totally a different person. But he never shows that side of him to anyone.
Samrat- Nupur's brother. Loves her a lot, and is always overpossessive about her. He loves her and his dear wife Gunjan, is strict, but he always tries his best to give them both whatever they need. He is the bestest brother anyone would want, just a little strict, but he has reasons to what he said no to, he wants to protect Nupur, since he knows his sister habbits of doing crazzy things.
Gunjan- Nupur's bhabhi, Samrats dear wifey. She always obeys what her husbends wishes, and is the nicest person ever. She loves Nupur like her sister, and always gets her everything she wants even if it means going against her husbend at times. Sometimes they just hide from him, like the times when Nupur was sick, and they were eating ice cream hiding from Samrat in the night.
Adhiraj- Nupur's best friend from childhood, he has always loved her, but never told her that, since he didn't know how she would respond to that. He always do what she wants, and could do anything for her.
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Chapter 1
She went inside the room, and shaked her head only to find it so disorganized. Thinking where she placed her book that she forgot to take yesterday with her, she looked around the room. Suddenly her eyes layed upon a piece of paper on the bed. Wondering what it was, she walked up to it, removed the pink net curtains that surrounded the bed, and picked it up. It was an invatation card. She read it. "NUPURRR!!!!" she shouted.
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Holding the eyelinear pencil, she slowly filled the corner of her eyes. After she was down with that, she applied light pink lipstick, and placed a little brown bindi in the center of her forehead. She looked in the mirror, making poses, and admiring herself, until she heard her sister-in-law call her name. She rushed from the washroom to her room. She entered her room, and realized that she was holding the invatation card in her hands. She knews she was in trouble, but she had to try. At least she was happy that it wasn't her brother who had found it. Tricking her sister-in-law was easy.

Gunjan- Nupur what's this? Is this the educational collage function you were going to?

Nupur- *Smiles innocently* Bhabhi, I was going to tell you, I swear.
She got no answer, since Gunjan was very irratated with her.
Nupur- You are going to tell bhaiyya right?
Gunjan-Of course, I can't believe you lied to us!
She was about to go.
Nupur- I had so much hopes for this party. Havn't you ever wanted to go to a party? I know you are married to my boring brother, but I don't blame you for being so boring like him. I swear. Infact I always thank god for giving me such a wonderful bhabhi, I am so lucky to have you. That's why I am always in your side whenever you and bhaiyya fight.
Gunjan- Nup-
Nupur- You are just like my sister, I even love you more than bhaiyya.
Gunjan- Nupur stop with the emotional blackmailing. You know how much trouble I would be in when he finds out that you are lieing to him, and going to a party after evening. Do you have any idea how much he would scream at me for knowing this and not telling him.
Nupur- Ok so you'll get a little scolded by him. But on the bright side, I'll have the time of my life, and then I'll be grounded. But next time, I promise I would do anything you ask me to do. I promise.
Gunjan looked at her in disbelieve and gave her a glare.
Nupur- Ok then, I won't go. Only because I love you. By the way, did I tell you how beautiful you look in that red sari? Bhaiyya is going to go all fida over you.
Gunjan blushed at that thought.
Nupur- Wowow, and now you blushing!
Gunjan- How badly?
Nupur- I want to go very badly.
Gunjan- Ok fine, I'll see that your brother doesn't find out about it. But if anything wrong happens, then I am not responsible for it.
Nupur- *Excitely hugging her* Thank you, thank you so much. I told you that you are the world's best bhabhi.
Gunjan- Ok, now stop with all the drama, and remember one thing, I wasn't here.
Nupur- Got it.
Gunjan smiled and left, while Nupur continued getting
ready. She changed into a teal and brown churidaar dress, and went
downstair to find her brother waiting for her. She did tell him that she could drive by herself,
but he insisted dropping and picking her up, since he was so overpossessive about his little sister.
Samrat- Ready?
Nupur- Ji bhaiyya.
He drove her to the collage.
Samrat- Why is it so dark here?
Nupur- Actually, no one is here yet, but don't worry they'll come in some minutes.
Samrat-Are you sure? *He didn't want to leave her there alone in the dark*
Nupur- Bhaiyya you don't trust me?
Samrat- There's nothing like that.
She got out of the car.
Nupur- Thank you bhaiyya.
Samrat- Acha, when this event finishes, then call me directly, I'll pick you up.
Nupur- Ok bye, love you bhaiyya.
He smiled and drove off. After she saw him out of her sight, she called her best friend Adhiraj to pick her up and drop her to the party. She waited for about ten to fifteen minutes, before he finally arrived.
Nupur- Thank god you came, I was thinking I'll have to wait more.
Adhiraj - I had to come, or else I wouldn't get to see you.
Nupur- *Confused* What?
Adhiraj - Oh nothing, I was just joking, come sit.
She smiled and sat in his car.
Adhiraj - So you didn't tell your brother about this party, and you think it's right?
Nupur - Please Adhiraj don't start with lectures. You know bhaiyya, he would of never let me go, and you know how much I waited to go in this party.
He drove her to a huge bangalow, which she has never seen in her life. She got out.
Nupur- *From the window* Are'nt you coming?
Adhiraj - I don't want to, plus I have got no invatation card.
Nupur- Are you sure? You could take mines, I'll just sneak in.
Adhiraj - Nupur you go have fun. And just call me when you want me to pick up.
Nupur- Ok, but if I don't call you, it means that bhaiyya had already found out I am here.
He said ok, and left. Nupur looked at the bangalow,
and walked towards it. It wasn't that her own house was not as beautiful as this, it was just that this was bigger, and perhaps a little better looking from outside, since she loves glass windows, and this bangalow was not lacking any place that didn't have them.
She went inside, after giving the people standing outside her invatation card.
Nupur- *thinking to herself* By god, havn't seen a place like this before.
The party looked less like a party and more like a disco. The lights were hardly on, despite the party lights that seems to be bothering Nupur. She had never been to a
party like this. And plus, what annoyed Nupur even more than the
atmosphere of the party, was the way she was dress.
She was looking so different, in comparison to all the girls,
that were wearing such small dresses.
She wishes that she had picked a dress, which she would of had to look for a long time,
since she hardly had any, because she mostly wears churidaar dresses.
Nupur- *thinking to herself* Where is he?? He was the one who invited me here.

Part 1 updated, please do comment🤗

-Maria + Linu
Edited by .PINK. - 14 years ago
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interesting. pls pm me when you update.
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nice start dear...pls continue soon...

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heyy Linuuu🤗🤗 congratsss sis for ur new FF🤗🤗
first part is just awesom...
u rock girlll🤗🤗
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Lina and maria writing this gr8
interesting story
do pm me
and lina i am afraid coz u have never finished any ff till now 😕 🤣
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sry douale post 🤣
Edited by .rumki. - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: .rumki.

Lina and maria writing this gr8
interesting story
do pm me
and lina i am afraid coz u have never finished any ff till now 😕 🤣

aww Thanksss dear for liking it🤗🤗 dont worry this time i m here with LInu...😳we ll finish it😆
keep reading it😳🤗
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Oh God mouse click kharab ho gayi
wrong post ho rahi hai
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