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Posted: 14 years ago



for thread 2 of "Immoral World"
It seems Maan is only physically attracted to her
Hope he realizes her worth

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Posted: 14 years ago
Immoral WORLD
Part 20





Observing her husband seems to become harder day by day. Reading unusual expression, it's not easy. She must admit. Her mind always wonder what lingers in his brain. The thought was not enough. She must think deep. Well, her small mind couldn't. She love the idea of drooling when he is not angry then why think about unnecessary concept he may give his thought to.
"why are you not eating?" a rough voice came out. She really wondered, can't he speak normal, with love and sweetness. Maybe some hunny. She mocked under her breath.

Maan looked at her playing with food. He felt frustrated. Somewhere he was looking for some excuse to argue... And he found some. He smashed his hand on the table, leaving shivering geet. She looks at his eyes in fear. Half sad smiled. Barely could breath. "o-oh- m-me!"
"yes, I am waiting!" he anticipated. She sat there like a child. Her big fearful eyes could not move it's gaze. Looking at him with tears. "why are you crying?" he asks roughly. "have I told you anything?" geet slowly nodes a no.
She closed her mouth wimping with his fear full voice. Maan closed his eyes in frustration. Just dreading this moment. Dreading every second with her. What mess he have pit him self in to? Attraction. Just because of a very strong list full desire he could not control, where he have led him self in to? This wasn't planned. He not suppose to use her like this, but this natural occurrence of his immense desire of ripped this girl apart and left him with confusion.
"I am so confused, I- I don't understand you." she shivered with her question. She did think twice before asking but she had to put it in place.
"don't you dare ask me question!" his word became more bitter. Geet stood up in her shaky leg. Petrified with her husbands attitude. Rough Attitude. "what you don't understand? , no tell me- what you really don't understand?" he rushes round the table. Holding her hand firmly. She holds his in order to free her self but in vain no. His grip just became stronger. Geet cried.
"I -I am sorry." she pleads. "I- I won't ask any question. I-I am really sorry." she cries louder. Begging maan to stop pressing her hand.
"what do you think of your self? Some beuty? Fairy?" geet nodes a no. Trying to move back but found the big wall behind her. She pressed her self hard against trying to be far way as possible. Maan charged forward. Holding her both arm roughly. Geet did not stop crying. She was not sure what really have tigress his anger. She just couldn't understand him. SHe cried louder. "I am sorry!" she unknowingly screamed sorry, even though she knew well it's not her fault.
"why are you saying sorry?" he shouts in anger. He quickly brings her close and then pushes her back against the wall. Her back made a sudden plop noise. She smacked her head against the wall. Her reflex instantly held her stomach. Maan observed the gesture very well.
"are you pregnant?" he asked. Maans breathing became heavy. Some weird reason he like the sound yet he did not want to here the words. Geet nodes a no. Indicating she really does not know. Her hand gently messaged her head. Soothing the minor pain he just given her. He gently touches her stomach. "are you pregnant?" he asked again. She still nodes a no.
"when you had your last period?" geet looks at him in sudden surprise. Then she slowly whispers out "I can't remember!"
"we will go for checkup 2moro!" maan takes a jacket from the side and walks out in the heavy rain. Just adding up his mind. They have slept together mostly every night, and nun night he have noticed anything! She must be... She probably became pregnant on there first night. He dropped the thought and went to his camp. He rang the hospital and made a appointment for her checkup. If she is pregnant, then of course he needs to move on. He really needs to take her back to deli. And inform his family. Maybe forget his mission for few days, leave her safe with his family then he can come back and carry on with his stuff! And if she is not, then, just carry on anyway. He needs to find dev soon as possible.

Geet stood there stroking her stomach. Was she really pregnant? Maans question starts to to play trick in her brain. She like the idea of being a mother, maybe after that he can control his anger. Seeing his child. She forgot the pain that maan just given her & concentrated on the urge of having pickle...

Early morning. A huge knock woke both maan and geet. It's to early to call them. 5:00 am. Maan sits up. Rubbing his eyes. He lazily picked the watch from the side and observed the time. It's 5:00 am. Geet slowly picks her self up as well. There cloths scattered everywhere. Maan noticed she is too week to get up. He stops her. "I will open the door!" maan quickly slides his trouser on and puts a vest to cover his strong muscular body and then makes his way towards the door. Slowly opening. It's brij.
"sir ap?" he tried to sound convincing. Like happy to see him.
Brij "come with me quick."
Geet sat on the bed, trying to listen to the conversation.
Maan nodes, taking a dirty shirt from the side and leaves...

One by one geet puts her cloths on and takes her self to the bathroom. Feeling a bit sick. She wasn't far off when the vomits comes out covering the sink.

After approximately 3 hours maan comes back. She looks at him. Not asking a single question, where he went? Where he go? "shall I bring you coffee"
Maan "no! Umm... I am going to sleep for while!" geet half smiles, closing the curtain. It's raining and dark anyway... So...
"wake me up! We have hospital appointment at 10!" geet nodes. She touched her stomach again and smiled. Weird enough he did not shout.. She slowly closes the door and slips out.

Rano sat there telling geet what to cook. She was super nice. Very nice. Chamily eyes up and down. Se indeed was to nice. Who would belive a person can change this much without a reason! And this mad geet, believes everything. Someone needs to bring some commonsense in her otherwise this will later on come out as tears. And her so all husband, ... Chamily went in deep thought. She will lose everything if she is like this, and in no time she will be on the road...

Rano walks off... Leaving chamily and geet.
Chamily "she is being to nice!"
Geet "she have always been nice."
Chamily "are you really that dum or blind?"
Geet "enough!"
Chamily "first your husband and now her!" geet did not like a word against her husband, and she snaps instantly.


next- Hospital appointment...
sorry did not PM any of you.. will do now.. very busy lately .. thats why its taking
time for me to update..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome dear...but why is maan behaving like this...???
Now m scared...how will he react, when he gets to know abt her pregnancy...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update!!!
waitng 4 d next 1 !!!👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow its really awesome.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update...😃
I am really confused with Maan's behaviour, he is nice one minute and then next minute he turns nasty -- what's going on in his head 😕...btw
is Geet pregnant with Dev or Maan's child??..
Plz cont soon !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
really nice update i really wonder wat will happen next
bhanu_rekhag thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Put some brains in geets head

She is being soo dumb

She may not rebel as per her current situation but atleast she can understand tht some thing is wrong with her mother n so called husband...


Poor girl from curtain raiser part to roll she is always crying n being sad...
No one are treating her as human...except chamaily


Do something make her happy n strong n fight for herself against her stupid family n husband

N worst part is maan is treating her as a mere *** object, body pleasure material or rather pros*****e arghhh I hate him too much...
Edited by bhanu_rekhag - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part...

that was so mean ...he unnecessarily hurting her...
please let it be maan's child...

thanks for pm..

count soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb , Mind blowing , Awesome , I hope maan come to know he is going to be a father and he took all care for geet

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