FF:abhiya:ETERNALLY TOGETHER:ch30 pg81 04/01/12 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
plzzz plzzz add me in ur pm list,luv d character sketch...
luv u
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
wow reli nice update...
i enjoyed reading it!!
abhay-aleena ...as bro-sis...reli niice...
very well written
keep d good work on...n conntinue soon reli cn't wait for pia's entry


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heena
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
Awesome start! I'm really looking forward to when Piya enters the story and Abhiya meet! Eagerly looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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gr8 starting👏looking forword to pia entry, update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
hey awesome update.U have gud writing skills.Loved it.I m enjoyiny bro-sis relationship😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
Wow..
Amazing..
plzz update soon and plzz PM Me...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
woow nice intro and first part dear
loved aleena and abhay mish as usual joker of the pack
do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
New characters
Sugandh jaiswal: she is piya's mother. She died due to cancer when piya was just 8 yrs old. She never wanted that piya must stay in orphanage so she gave piya's responsibility to aunt Martha.
Jay khurana: he is also an orphan who lives with piya and Aunt Martha. He treats piya very well and is secretly in love with her. He is overprotective of piya and he has also got scholarship in Mount College like piya.
Aunt Martha: she is a very kind lady who loves children a lot. She is a widow of a rich army general and lives with piya and jay. She had taken their responsibility when they were very young and tender. She never let piya and jay feel lonely in this world and fulfilled all their demands and needs. She didn't have any biological child of her own so her whole world is concentrated around jay and piya. For her their happiness is her happiness and their sorrow is her sorrow.
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these new characters are not active in the story till now but will come up soon...
regards...
swati...!!!! 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter II
Before dying, sugandh had given all her belongings and her property to Aunt Martha whom she also gave the responsibility of her little princess. She very well knew that Aunt Martha was perfect for piya after she would leave piya forever. She had named her house to Aunt Martha so that piya may not leave her home after she would die. About 8 yrs had passed after sugandh's death. Now piya was an independent girl and she was one brave girl. She had learnt to live her life on her own terms but for her values was first of all.
Piya was busy in packing her luggage. She was going to dehradun for her further studies. Her best buddy, jay khurana was also awarded with scholarship in Mount College, dehradun. For her all this struggle for life was a habit but she didn't know that the further battle for life was much more thrilling, wonderful and difficult.
After packing all her luggage, she went downstairs and hugged Aunt Martha and jay. Jay wasn't accompanying piya right now as some of the paperwork in his college was left so he would come to dehradun after a month or so. They went with her to the railway station and bid her good bye. Soon the train departed and piya was set for her journey for new life. The prophecy had started to show its colors and fate was at its peak.
On the roads of dehradun, 11:15pm
Abhay was driving back to raichand mansion and Aleena was in her deep thought. There was deadly silence in the whole surrounding. Their car was passing through the ancient jungles of dehradun and moon was soothing Abhay a lot.
It was deep jungle and moonlight was only source of light in it… the sky was full of clouds and it was looking that whole natural surrounding was ready to welcome someone who was coming… it was going to rain and this rain was special and welcoming… nature was happy for someone who had been waiting for this rain… the mountains, jungle, river etc were all looking excited for someone's grand welcome…
A curly haired pixie like beauty was panicking in the deep jungle…. Her face wasn't visible due to her hairs that very covering her face due to the heavy wind… She had a lot of luggage and her delicate hands were pulling them altogether. She was looking for some path through the jungle but it was looking as if she had been lost…
Abhay saw Aleena in trance: Aleena… are you alright… what happened….
Aleena came out of trance and fumbled: vision… a future vision…
Abhay: Aleena…tell me fast…what have you seen?
Aleena: it was very weird…. I saw some stranger….
Abhay: what? what are you saying… stranger… explain me…
Aleena: the vision was so small…I saw a girl in jungle and she has lost her way to somewhere and she was carrying a lot of luggage but one thing I cannot understand that…. that whole surrounding was welcoming her to that jungle…that's all I could see…
Abhay: did you see her face…how she looks…
Aleena: no…bro…I couldn't see her face but I saw her back and she was so beautiful from her back…she had long curly hairs and she had a nice figure also….
Aleena again went in her thoughts. She never felt so attached to any of her vision. It was the first sometime when she got a vision about someone she never knew but she could feel some connection to that girl though she did not know what it was. It was as if she knew that girl from many centuries and she desperately wanted to help her in the place where she was stuck up.
Abhay was thinking about aleena's vision but he decided to leave everything to its fate though he didn't want to.
Abhay and Aleena went back to home and Abhay parked the car…
Abhay's room, 11:45pm
Then he raced to his room and rushed near the window and he starts staring at the moon with wry and desperation. Suddenly he feels that the wind outside started blowing fast as a minute before it was a sweet breeze blowing there.
He could feel that someone was calling for help in the woods…
He then decided to chase that sound and the person.
Dehradun, in the woods, 11:50pm
Piya had come to dehradun from Indore via train. She was a bright student and an independent girl so she struggled and always paved a path for herself without anyone's help or support. She had earned a scholarship for herself in the prestigious mount college.
Piya had traveled all the way from Indore to dehradun with excitement but now she was totally exhausted. Moreover, she was lost in the dark jungle just in hope to reach her destination as soon as possible. She had taken a shortcut through the jungle and now landed in a trouble. This was all not in piya's hands anymore. She had her fate working for her. Coming to dehradun, taking a shortcut, getting lost in jungle etc was just a starting of the game of her fate.
Piya (to herself in distress): you are such a stupid…piya…aunt had forbid you to step in the jungle. but then you had to use your wit and step into the danger… who had asked you to take a shortcut through the jungle…and now you have ended nowhere… there is not a single clue to step out of this jungle… what will you do now…piya…think piya…think…
Piya again starts screaming for help. She could see whole sky was full of clouds that were about to rain and in few minutes it started raining. It was raining heavily and whole jungle had become slippery.
Suddenly, piya slipped in the mud and started rolling down with her luggage. Her hands were bleeding due to scratches and she was all in mud. She stopped rolling and so she tried to stand and suddenly, she finds herself in the middle of the road. She turned back and saw a car that was about to crush her, but some mysterious person stopped it just by his hand…
It was Abhay who had saved her but before he or she could say anything, piya turned unconscious. She had faced lot of incidents for today and last one was the most frightening. Abhay took piya and her luggage to the side of the road and let the car go. Till now Abhay had not seen the face of the curly haired beauty. Her hairs were full of mud and water and were all over her face. He slowly removed her hairs from her face.
Abhay was shocked with the face piya had as it was just same as Maithili… for a moment he thought that it was a figment of his imagination… but he said the unexpected.
Abhay fumbled: zaara… zaara… you are back…
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finally piya entered in the scenario... i havent introduced jay in the story on a full swing but he has to wait till abhiya lovestory blooms...
hope you all like it...
please send your feedbacks and those who want pms may send me buddy requests... soon...
regards...
swati...!!!!! 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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👍🏼 Go on...would love to read this...i esp liked Aleena charachter wanted sum alice like in PKYEK...looking forward for abhiya first meeting ❤️
Luv,
Sups.!

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