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Posted: 14 years ago
Fantastic update! I loved the Abhay saving Piya scene and Abhay healing Piya scene! 😳 Precap also promises to be very interesting! Eagerly waiting for the next update! Continue soon 😊
Edited by Deepi20 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update yaar.. loved it.. continue soon.. thanx for d pm..lol.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter XVI
Part I
Piya was totally amazed with abhay's abrupt outburst. She could easily feel the anger and pain in his eyes which was only for her. It was evident that she was falling for him and the feeling was mutual. It was just time needed for both of them to realize it and confess it to each other.
Piya removed the blanket over her and ran outside her room to stop abhay without even wearing her slippers. Kabir tried to stop her but misha asked to let her go. Kabir understood that piya had already fallen for the guy but doesn't know about it. He also saw that abhay wasn't playing with piya's heart. Their quarrels, fights, desperation, friendship was just all out of pure love between them. It was better for all of them that Kabir should back off between abhay and piya.
Piya came out of her room and saw abhay going towards his room through the corridor. His back was facing her. No one was seen there in the corridor except abhay. She called abhay's name and abhay turned and stood there. Piya ran as fast as she could and hugged him with all her passion and desperation. Abhay melted like a scoop of chocolate mousse with her feminine hug. He also hugged her back as they stood there for a moment or two. Piya released herself to face abhay.
Piya: I know I was out of my mind…. But it was about somebody's life…. I won't do this again…. Promise…. I am really sorry…. Please forgive me….
Abhay: fine…. You are forgiven…. Think once before you do anything…. And now don't start crying again… ok…
Piya said as she turned unconscious again: yo...ou… lo…ve…me…. Na...H…
Abhay could sense that she was still weak and pale, so he lifted her and took her to the room where everyone was shocked to see piya unconscious again. Abhay asked everybody not to panic as she just needed rest and care.
Panchi: let her sleep and all you take dinner… its quite late… u all must be hungry.
Misha: yeah… this chica took my hunger away…. Abb toh bahut tez bukh lag rahi hai….
Kabir: haan-haan chalo.
Misha and Kabir left the room for dinner leaving panchi, aleena and abhay behind.
Abhay: you two go…. I will stay here only…
Panchi: okay…. I will send dinner for you and piya…. Make her eat it when she's up….
As aleena and panchi left, only abhay was there in the room with an unconscious piya. She was looking like an angel in her deep slumber….. Like abhay's SLEEPING BEAUTY.
Abhay caressed piya's hairs and kissed on her forehead.
Abhay: piya…. You were asking that I love you or not…. I really love you from the bottom of my dead hear, my each and every fiber has only loved you will ever do…. but look at our fate…. I can't confess it in front of you…. But I will always be with you… to guide you, to save you, to be your friend…. Your confidant…. I thought that I won't be able to accept you because of your face but see I have fallen for you…. More than anything in this world…. Your simplicity makes me love you even more than I do…. I really love you…. Will always do….
As soon as aleena and misha came back, abhay went back to his room leaving piya sleeping.
2 days later
Almost 2 days had passed; piya was now healthy as a horse. She was chirping and giggling with everyone to spread the light she had making laugh everyone with her. During the last 2 days, students were taken for rock climbing, trekking etc but piya wasn't allowed to do anything though she tried hard to persuade everyone. The bonding between piya and abhay had become stronger and Kabir had stopped interfering between them. He started behaving like a true friend.
On the last day of the trip, students had to attend the youth festival in Wellington College, mussorie. There were many competitions and workshops held for the students and Mount College had been invited for it. Workshops in the field of drama and literature were to be held. While there were art, sports, singing and dance competitions in which students had to participate.
Panchi had already selected students for different competitions in different fields. Piya and aleena were selected for the solo singing competition, Kabir, misha, t, Ruhi and aleena for drama workshop, misha, Kabir and Angad for sports and athletics while abhay and piya for art competition. There was a group/couple dance competition to be held and abhay-piya and Kabir-t were selected to represent Mount College.
Piya rehearsed her lyrics well and was confident over them but she was still confused that what she would paint in the art competition. She was excellent in painting but was still in a fix about what to draw.
Mussorie, Wellington College, 7:00am
Early morning, all the students left the resort for Wellington College. Everyone was there in their casual wears. Piya was looking cute in her baby pink chiffon top having lots of magnificent pink roses and pearls near the neck with a matching white th Capri. Abhay was wearing a navy blue cotton half shirt which was unbuttoned on top with white cargoes. Everyone else was also looking ready for some real competition.
As soon as they reached the college, everyone dispersed to the rooms allotted to them. Singing and dance competition was scheduled for evening while other things like art, drama and sports for the day.
Misha, Kabir and Angad raced to the tennis court for sports and athletics. While abhay and piya chose to walk together to the art hall for their competition and others went to the drama hall for drama workshop.
Abhay and piya were representing Mount College in different category according to the gender. Piya was getting nervous as she hadn't decided what to paint.
Abhay: hey…. Don't worry…. You will surely win…. Just have faith on yourself…. By the all the best….
Piya: thanks…. Best of luck to you too…. Let's see what happens….
They went inside the art hall and took their places there. All the girls were sitting on one side of the art hall while all the boys on the other. Abhay and piya were facing each other exactly. Everyone was provided with the things required for painting and soon they were asked to start. They were allotted 2 hours to complete their painting.
Piya finally decided to paint her nightmare. The scene in which the boy is crying taking the girl in his lap. She knew it was totally different which others would feel abstract but once she decided then she won't back off.
Abhay had already decided to paint piya's portrait. It was the easiest and the most difficult challenge for him but he wasn't afraid of challenges. He painted the portrait but it was more like zaara's. Abhay also painted the necklace which he bought for piya. He did every detailing from lips, jaw line, eyes, nose, and hairs to cheek lines etc. it was looking very realistic and divine just like piya.
As the hands of clock danced, all the participants completed and submitted their artworks. Nobody was allowed to see each other's paintings. Participants were asked to leave the hall to allow judges to judge the artworks. Results were to be announced in evening with dance and singing competition. Now students had time to take rest and do rehearsals for evening competitions. Mount college students were allotted several rooms in the hostel to stay and dance hall to rehearse for evening. All the students except abhay and piya had reached there. At last they also walked where misha came running to piya and hugged her.
Misha (showing her trophy and medals in one go): see…. I won them all….Nice nah… did you win your art competition…. What are the results, dude…?
Piya: breathe shatabdi…. Breathe… results will be announced in evening…. By the way congratulations….
Misha: thanks yaar….
Abhay also congratulated misha and she hugged him in return. Piya went for her singing rehearsals with aleena. She had asked aleena not to tell abhay that what she was going to sing, it was a surprise for her. Aleena being a good friend kept her promise.
After her singing rehearsals, piya took her lunch and went to the dance hall for her dance practice with abhay. They were doing couple dance on the song 'uff Teri adaa'. Kabir and t were also participating together in the competition on behalf of Mount College.
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Guys this is the 1st part, next part for tomorrow…. Hope you all liked it…. More abhiya coming on…. Stay tuned for more of them….
Please sends your feedback for this part soon….
Regards….
Swati….!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey swati😃

that was woww...awesome update dearšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘...loved abhiya moment...jst one hug n abhay melted...finally kabir back off...wow yaar abhiya in art,dance together...i jst wanna see their reaction...i mean jab pia abhay ki n abhay pia ki painting dakhenge...n i m eagerly waiting for dance...n singing also...plz update tommarrow only haahav a nice dayluv usunita
Edited by sunu123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
šŸ˜ŠšŸ˜nice update waiting for tomorrow abhiya scenesšŸ‘
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
liked abhiya part
i am very excited abt the art result and dance competetion
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey swati
awesome update dear...
loved abhiya moments...the hug scene was so sweet
eagerly waiting for the next part
continue soon
tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey swati...gr8 update...loved abhiya moments...
when u say tomorrow...do u really mean tomorrow?...pls pls continue soon...
eagerly waiting...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter XVI
Part II
It was evening, abhay and piya had practiced a lot together for the performance they would give in the evening. All the students had great expectations from them that they would surely make mount college proud. It was clearly visible that they were the best couple and they had the potential to win. Choreographers had given them steps and they easily learnt it. Now nobody was able to take out any flaw in them, it was obvious. Now they were eagerly waiting for the grand moment to arrive so that they could perform. But piya was more ecstatic for her singing competition so that she could surprise abhay. She had to thank him for being so good friend to her and she decided to do this way. She was giving a solo performance with her guitar on an English song.
Mussorie, wellington college, auditorium, singing & dance competitions
In evening everybody stated getting ready for their competitions. Now some were participating while others were going to cheer them but everyone was busy in some or the other work. Misha and Ruhi were helping piya and aleena in getting ready. Aleena was wearing a beautiful purple evening gown while piya was wearing a ice blue knee-length dress for singing competition and a beautiful red flowing gown for the dance competition.
piya's singing competition dress

piya's dance dress

aleena's dress

Abhay was wearing a black evening suit matching with piya's red gown for the competition. He was eager to know that what was piya hiding from him because he could sense something fishy between aleena and piya. Both girls used to talk with each other a lot but when he was somewhere near then they used to change the topic.
The auditorium was filled soon with young blood. Everyone was full of energy and thrill. First singing competition started in which the participants from other colleges performed first and then at last Mount College had its chance. Aleena had to perform first from mount college, she wasn't nervous as she was confident about herself. She loved singing and music was her passion. Her room had a large shelf filled of thousands of music Cds and cassettes. Music gave her comfort, it filled the deep void in her heart and it fulfilled her desires. She was all soaked into music and nobody except abhay knew it and now piya too knew it. It was no doubt that piya had become her soul sister in every means. It was the first time she was going to perform in front of a huge audience but as always she wasn't nervous but was thrilled. Piya bade her best of luck and she went on the stage with her violin.
Piya: aleena'. I know you will surely make us proud' just go and show them what you got up sleeve'
Aleena went and performed on the song 'Udi' from the movie guzaarish. It was a great performance and the hall was filled with thunderous claps.
Then it was chance of piya to come on stage. She was excited about her performance moreover she was more thrilled about it. As she entered on the stage with her guitar, she easily saw the one she was looking for, abhay. He was sitting in the front row in the audience in his black attire looking like a perfect gentleman. She asked for a mike before singing to say something.
Piya: good evening to one and all'. I am piya representing Mount College, dehradun before you all'. I would just like to dedicate this song to my friends and most importantly to someone who is really precious to me'. Who has played a great role of being my friend and my confidant till now'. I won't take his name but I guess he will understand it easily'. He is present here and this is for you my dear friend'.
She gave the mike back and started singing the song. The song was the theme song of titanic ' my heart will go on by Celina Dion.
Every night in my dreams
I see you, I feel you
that is how I know you go on.
Far across the distance
and spaces between us
you have come to show you go on.
Near, far,
wherever you are,
I believe that the heart does go on.
Once more, you opened the door
and you are here in my heart,
and my heart will go on and on.
Love can touch us one time
and last for a lifetime
and never let go till we are gone.
Love was when I loved you,
one true time to hold on to
in my life we will always go on.
Near, far,
wherever you are,
I believe that the heart does go on.
Once more, you opened the door
and you are here in my heart,
and my heart will go on and on.
You are here, there is nothing I fear
and I know that my heart will go on.
We will stay, forever this way
you are safe in my heart
and my heart will go on and on.
Piya's voice put the essence in the lyrics. She made the song divine and out of this world. Everyone was mesmerized with the song and was waving his/her hands in air. As the song ended whole auditorium was filled with noise of once more and huge claps. Piya left the stage with a huge smile finally happy and content that now she could paste a smile on the face which always made her smile.
Everyone and of course Abhay knew that the 'someone' about whom piya was talking was none other than abhay himself. There was no doubt about it. He was feeling really special as no one had made him feel so special before piya entered in his life. She was his ultimate source of happiness and light in his dark life. A huge smile was pasted on his face throughout the song and now he just wanted to hug piya and confess his love to him. He got up from his seat and ran towards back stage to meet his angel.
Backstage everyone was just hugging and congratulating piya for her wonderful performance. The girls had really made the college proud with their performances. Other participants were now sure that there was no scope for them to win. The results were known before they could be announced.
Abhay went in the green room were aleena and piya were to be found but he saw only aleena there. Piya had gone to change her dress for the dance performance.
Abhay: hey aleena'. You did a wonderful job'. I didn't expect that from you'. I am glad to see your passion and devotion towards music'
Aleena: thanks bro'. waise last waali line kuch zyadaa bhari nahi ho gayi'..
Abhay: achcha'. Theek hai' waise yahaan akeli ho'. Mat lab'
Aleena: matlab'. Main samjh gayi'. Tumhe piya se milna hai nah'.
Abhay nodded in agreement.
Aleena: who abhi aati hogi'. Kapde change karne gayi hai'. Just wait'.
Abhay went and sat in a corner waiting for piya. When piya came out in her red flowing gown she didn't notice abhay sitting there. Abhay also decided to surprise her. Aleena was helping piya in doing makeup for the dance.
Aleena: piya'. You sang very well'. You should be a singer'. Your voice is so sweet'. Everyone is saying that'.
Piya: hey'. I sing just for interest'. It gives me comfort and you also sang pretty well'.
Aleena (teasingly though knowing the answer): thanks'. Waise who was your special friend or whom you sang'. Was it me? If it was for me then I really liked it'. No I loved it'.
Piya (under her breath though both abhay and aleena heard): jiske liye gayaa usne toh kuch kaha hi nahi'. Stupid kahin ka'.
Piya was shocked to see abhay in the mirror standing behind her. She got up quickly and turned to see him. The dance competition was started and Aleena went out of the green room leaving both the lovers cum friends together. Abhay piya had their chance at the last.
Piya: tum'. Yahaan'. Kya'. Kya kar rahe ho tum yahaan'. Aur has kyon rahe ho'.
Abhay: tumne mere liye gaana gayaa tha nah'.
Piya: pataa nahi'.
Abhay: piya'. Haan yaa nahi'. Yes or no?
Piya: tumhe kya lagta hai'.?
Abhay: yes'. Tumne mere liye gayaa'.
Piya: toh jab tumhe pataa tha toh kyon pooch rahe they'. Waise kaisa tha'. Did you like it'.?
Abhay: no'. I didn't like it'. (Piya's face fell) but actually I loved it'. It was really beautiful'. You didn't need to do this' I know you very well'.
Piya: what'. You loved it and you say I didn't need to do that'. You are a jerk Mr. raichand'. I will surely rate you on no.1 for your stupidity'.
Abhay: and I will rate you on no.1 for your secrecy'. I was trying so much to find that what was going between you and aleena and you guys didn't even told anyone about this' but once again thanks for it'.. I have something for you'.
Abhay put his hand in his pocket and took out the box in which the necklace was kept. He handed it to piya and asked her to open it'.
Piya: what's this'?
Abhay: you ask too much'. Just open it'.
Piya slowly and carefully unwrapped the box and found the beautiful necklace which abhay bought exclusively for her.
Her eyes were glowing and filled with tears. She had no words to say. No one in this whole world made her feel this way ever, not even her mother, her childhood friend jay'. Actually NO ONE. All others had no importance in front of abhay for her. Her day started from him and ended on him. It was only he who now was most close to her heart.
Piya: this is so beautiful'.. I have no words to describe now'.what to say'. It's just so beautiful'.
Abhay: not more than you'. Hey why are you crying'?
Piya: you are the first person in my life who has this much impact on me'. I feel so safe and warm near you'. I feel like I have known you for ages'. Abhay I don't know but you are the only person who means to me now'.
Abhay: piya'. Maybe I also feel the same but just don't cry'.
Piya: abhay can I ask you one thing'.
Abhay: hmmm'.
Piya: will you leave me on day as others do with me'?
Abhay; no'. not at all' I will always be with you as your friend but just stop crying'. I can't see you crying'..
Piya hugged him without even uttering a word more. She felt so special when he was near. Abhay was taken aback with piya's reaction. She was still crying so he hugged her back.
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Precap ' dance filled with passion'. Abhiya!
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So how was it? This was all about abhiya'. I just love them all happy'. But it will not be same forever'. Change is good'.
Regards'.
Swati'!!!!!!!!
Edited by swatiluvsabhiya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Eowyn

Swathi I will catch up asap😊

catch up soon and tell me how was it...
your ff is awsum...
thanks for the pm...

regards

swati...

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