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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepi20

Super awesome update! Loved the Abhiya scenes! Eagerly looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

thanks for the compliment... updating in an hour...
swati...!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: CleviveDsouza

awesome

wow
great
excellent
fantastic
fabulous
continue soon
plz pm me

thanks and will pm u for sure...!!!!!!
swati...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: .rumki.

awesome update
add me to ur pm list

thanks...
will surely add you...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rashika27.1997

its awesome dear how abhay suddenly changed the girl but feeling sad also tht he didnt kiss piya

thnx for the pm

thanks... abhay is really something you would love for sure...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

wow awesome part swati loved it.I love Abhiya.Plzzz continue soon😊

thanks...!!!!!!! i love also abhiya...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: missglam


Superb update!
Baba raichand n miss confused playing. .awww. .so cute!
Thanks for the pm. .continue soon. .tc

thanks... i also love abhiya a lot just like you...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: urmita

gr8 update...will be waiting for next update😃do continue...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

hey dat was reli a nice update swati👏👏👏

it was short bt well written...
plss continue soon , waiting for d nxt one

luv
heena

thankss a lot dear...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ifrah.

Awesome update..wish it was more longer..but as you said you are busy..so no worries..update when you can :)

thanks for bearing me...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter XIII
Kabir decided to let piya decide that with whom she wants
to go. Though he knew that she would surely choose abhay over any other boy
which was visible clearly. She was most comfortable with him only and piya was
the only girl with whom abhay behaved properly after aleena and misha. Anyone
could easily see their budding relationship in their little quarrels too.
Mussorie, hill view resort, 1:30 pm
All of them returned back to the resort and took their
lunch. They went in their respective rooms and took rest.
Later in evening all of them went in the casino and club
of the resort. Piya wore a beautiful evening designer gown which was gifted to her aunt Martha. Aleena also wore a black mini gown.
Mussorie, hill view resort, club, 7:00pm
It was quiet flooded with foreigners, and they were
drinking and dancing. Misha had already reached there and was busy in playing in the casino. Piya and aleena also reached there and saw misha. Misha was as always located somewhere near drinks corner sitting with Kabir. Kabir was normal now and was busy giggling on misha's silly talk. Piya was least
interested in drinking but misha's only interest was the DRINKS. Piya and aleena pulled misha from the drinks corner and took her to the casino. Abhay was nowhere to be seen as he had gone for hunting and would return soon. Taking the advantage of this, Kabir also accompanied the girls to the casino. Aleena and misha started playing one of the games since they knew how to play but piya didn't know so she decided to sit on the empty couch. Kabir was also busy in
playing but suddenly his eyes went on piya who was just sitting. He left the game and went near her.
Kabir:piya… are you still angry on me…. I am really sorry for being a jerk but… u can
forgive me once…. Give me just one chance….
Piya: Kabir…. U are my friend and there is nothing like that…. I am not at all angry on u….
Kabir:that's really nice of u…. so why are u sitting here all alone…. Not playing… Hun?
Piya:oh…. I don't know how to play…. Just that….
Kabir:so I can teach u…. I can train u the basics…. It's really simple… if u really forgave me then give me the honor….
Piya didn't want to break his heart so she said yes and
went with him. Kabir taught her the basics and being a fast learner she learned it all and started playing the game very well. She liked his company as a friend. Kabir made her laugh on his cute tricks and wit. She was truly enjoying his company but somewhere deep in her heart she was waiting for someone who gave was the comfort of her soul…. Her utmost forbidden desire.
Abhay also entered in the club in his white half sleeved
cotton shirt which was unbuttoned on the top with blue denims. He could feel piya's presence near and he was drawn to the casino where she was. He saw her and she was looking beautiful as ever. The only sight which lurched his heart
was that she was giggling with another man. He saw her giving Kabir a sweet peck on the cheek which made Kabir happier. He couldn't withstand this sight and this was unbearable for him though he always wanted that piya must be happy no matter what. Abhay controlled himself and went near misha and aleena who were busy in playing too. As soon misha saw abhay staring Kabir and piya, she understood that what her next move was. She quickly winked aleena and went near piya
asking her to come with her though she literally dragged her from there. A quick smile of relief played over abhay's lips when he saw piya coming towards him. Kabir was left alone and he was heartbroken as misha was helping his enemy instead of her childhood friend in gaining piya. He quickly went near the
drinks corner and start drinking though his eyes were only watching piya with abhay.
Piya was happy and content now. She enjoying the night at
its peak now. She was laughing open heartedly and abhay was also enjoying it. Whenever abhay used his wit and won the game she used to jump with joy. Kabir wasn't able to take it more. He could see abhay taking his place everywhere and
becoming the most desirable person of his dear ones may it be piya or misha or anyone else.
T was burning with anger as she saw that piya's popularity was increasing day by day and she wanted abhay but piya was the hurdle in between. She saw Kabir sulking at the drinks corner. She decides to use Kabir as she knew that Kabir wanted piya and if piya would be taken then abhay could be hers. She went near Kabir.
T: k…. what happened….. Dude….
Kabir: nothing……
T: no…. k… I know piya…. Piya is the problem…. Dude I can help you…
Kabir: meaning….
T: you can offer her a drink to impress her….
Kabir: but she doesn't drinks….
T: ok… then a cold drink will do…. Let me order it…
T bought a cold drink and spiked it when Kabir was busy
on phone. Meanwhile, abhay also went somewhere to receive an important call. When Kabir returned, t handed the drink to Kabir.
T: dude…. Go get her…. She would be impressed…
Kabir: hope so…
Kabir went near piya: hey…. Wanna drink…. U look thirsty….
Piya: Kabir…. Trying to impress me, Hun?
Kabir: maybe….
Piya took the drink and gulped it fast. T was sitting far
and watching the drama with a devilish grin. He drink showed it color after sometime and piya started having headache. She excused herself and asked to go back to her room.
Piya: guys…. I need to go back to the room…. My head is paining…. Need some rest…. U
guys carry on…
Kabir: let me take u there….
Piya: no…. I am a big girl… I can go…. U enjoy here…. Misha…. Aleena…. Make Kabir also play…. He is good….
Kabir: fine….
Piya left the casino and was walking back to the main
resort through the garden. Her head was aching hard and was like spinning also. She wasn't able to walk properly or handle herself. Suddenly a hand caught her hand and pulled her to the tree. He was a drunken foreigner who was looking as
if he had taken drugs too. Piya tried hard to free herself but wasn't able to. He pinned her hard against the tree. Her back and arms were also grazed due to the bark of the tree.
Foreigner: girl…. Why are u fighting…. I asked for just one night….only u and me…
Piya: you…. Freak… leave me…. You b*****d…. leave me….
Foreigner: you wanna fight…. Ok… but u are so delicious…. God I just can't wait… to rip you apart….
Piya: leave me…. Help…. Help….
Foreigner tore piya dress for side and started laughing hysterically: help… u think that someone's gonna come… no lamb… you are all mine….
He was about to kiss piya forcefully but was thrown hard
against a tree by none other than abhay…. Abhay punched him hard and was almost about to kill him for even touching his lady love…. But piya stopped him.
Abhay saw piya crying, she was trying to cover herself as
her dress was torn. He went near her and gave her his shirt. He saw that piya was not able to walk so he lifted her to her room and asked her to change her clothes.
After changing her clothes, piya came out and was bit
conscious. She was still crying.
Abhay: piya…. Stop crying…. Nothing happened…. He did nothing…. Just stop…. You are hurting yourself…
Piya (between the sobs): abh…ay… he to…rn my dress… he tri…ed to ra…pe me…
Abhay: but he couldn't…. leave that b*****d…. u are giving him unwanted importance…. He couldn't do anything….. Just forget it…. Try to sleep now… I am going back to my room and u sleep here okay… I will ask misha and aleena to return and
take your care.
Piya: no leave me…. I am scared and I don't…. just don't wanna be alone….
Abhay: okay…. Then sleep… I am here only…. Nobody can touch you till I am alive…
understand….
Piya went near abhay and gave him a hug:I don't know… what would have happened if you would not have come on time…. I
am so lucky to have u in my life….
Abhay also hugged her back and it was a picture perfect
moment. After they left each other, abhay picked piya in his arms and took her to the bed and gently kept her on that, he made piya sleep and then he went back to the garden to ensure that freak was given proper punishment. He found
that foreigner lying where he had left him. He was nconscious so he dislocated his both arms and legs.
Abhay: nobody…. Does that to my girl…. NOBODY…. I won't kill you but your life will now become hell…. Let's see how u can live with this body of yours…. It's worse than hell….
Abhay went back to piya's room where he saw aleena and
misha sleeping near piya. He told everything to aleena telepathically and asked her to take piya's proper care while he went back to his room trying to find
some rest which was still away from him.
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Precap – abhay and
piya in swimming pool!!!!!!!!!
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I wanna seriously
thank urmita for giving me the brilliant idea of using Kabir and t to bring
abhay and piya close…. Thanks dear….
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Please give your
feedbacks…. They mean a lot to me…. I am still trying to update regularly but let's
see when I will be able to do so….

Till then enjoy
this….. And don't forget to reply….. They are precious for me….
Regards….
Swati….!!!!!!






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