MG:~Hum Aapke Hai Kaun?~: [Thread 1] - Page 69

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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it, awesome. want to see maaneet together again.Oam eager to know what happened in past that maan left geet.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Is it that easy to seek forgiveness? Isn't forgiveness to be earned??

Maan just can't comeback and go all proprietorial on Geet.😡 He can't go put pressure on her to forgive him just because he wants another chance in life!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Maan is hell bent on making Geet give him another chance...
He needs to work really hard to earn t forgiveness after the pain & suffering he has inflicted onto Geet..
Stupid Maan slapped her...That too she was actually saying the words he had said to her then..Just think...If he felt soo bad when Geet was sarcastically saying these words,how bad must have Geet felt when he was actually meaningfully saying those words..??

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey nice yaar...
really story was moving interestingly...i loved it...
me too wanna maan to win geet's heart again😊...
looking fwd...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it!
Finally Maan is making an effort to win over Geet...he better not screw this up!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update:-):-)
though i do wonder what is really Maan's intention?? Is he really in love or just well in lust?? Maan is possessive thats for sure.
I really hope you disclose the past soon. I cannot wait any longer. But one thing Maan is feeling guilty for what ever he did. but plz do clarify whether he is love with geet or not.
And i hope geet doesn't forgive him easily. And i hope everything is disclosed before Maan's family. It would be great if Maan's family comes to know everything and that too not through Maan but someone else.
plz do give an updateor two. Possibly for the weekend .
Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb!
loved dadima and geet's convo!...
poor geet!...she had to go through so much!...
it's really diificult for her to forget everything!
continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing dear...read in one go...
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally read all da updates luv dem
fanx 4 da pms plzz cont soon x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Geet sighed as she looked at Ayush sleeping on the sofa. The whole house was a mess by his things...he spent the whole day talking and showing her every single picture. She never thought that he would actually manage to take picture of where ever or whatever he did..litteraly. She smiled and looked at the picture of his shoes showing he is currently walking and then the picture of their bus then the picture of his seat then the picture of outside the window...well the list goes on and on...Every single pictures were on the floor scattered...she had a long night ahead of her to clean up the whole place. She looked at his camera and took Ayush picture of while he was sleeping. She puts the picture on the table and goes to Ayush to wake him up.

Geet: Ayush beta come on get up...(He stirs in his sleep...) Looks like I have to carry him inside...(She bends down to pick him up) Alright Ayush lets go...(He hugs her around her neck. She gently pats his back and moves toward the room when the door bell rang. She sighs and goes to open the door. She was shocked when she saw Maan standing there. She hugs Ayush tighter and was about to close the door on him but Maan stops it by putting his foot between the door. She looks at him with anger.

Geet: How dare you? Let go of the door.

Maan: Geet I came...

Geet: I don't care why you came. Leave right now.

Maan: Ssshh Geet Ayush is going to get up...

Geet (hugs Ayush and moves back a little) Don't worry about Ayush. I am his mother I know what is best for him.

Maan (steps inside the house and looks around): hmm seems like you were busy today...(he looks on the floor filled with pictures...he picks one up of Ayush and Annie..Geet comes and snatches the picture away from him. Maan looks at her shocked) Geet whether you like it or not I am his father. Don't you think he has the right to know?

Geet: NO...he doesn't need to know...Listen Mr. Khruana...

Maan: Maan...call me Maan..(he steps in front of her and caresses her face) remember you used to call me Maan...

Geet (moves her face and steps away from him) You lost that right and I no longer remember my past.

Maan: Really? (he moves closer and closer to her and holds her hand) I doubt that...(he puts his one hand on her waist...Geet closes her eyes)

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