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Posted: 14 years ago
HEY😊 i luv ur story yar😛 . awesum story👏. aisa lagta hai jaise real story hai. specially wen abhay said that he and metri r together. after that piya 's reaction towards abhay.it touches my heart. believe me mere aankhon me aasun aa gaye.😭MUJHE THODA DBT HAI 😕. CAN U CLEAR IT TO ME...
1) As per ur story abhay is a vamp that means a dead man . than wo accident se kaise mara ? he is nt a nrml human being jo ki accident se marr jaye.

2) aur marne k baad uski body mili jise uski family dekh kar roi. yar post mortem me doc's ko pata nhi chala ki ye ek nrml human body nhi hai?

3) jab metri use uske parents k naam par blackmail kar rhi thi tab usne piya ko hurt kiya. phir jab uske mom dad ghar wapis aa gaye to usne piya ko sab sach kyun nhi bataya ki wo sirf acting kar rha tha apne parents ko bachane k liye?

4) use tensed hokr apna accident kyun karwaya sumthing lyk suicide piya ko sach bata deta . piya to use vamp hone k bawazud bhi accept kar leti.

5) aadil jo abhay ki tarah dikhta hai wo human hai. iska matlab jab abhay zinda tha tab wo bhi foreign me apni life ji rha tha. matlab ek wrld me do chehre k log?


i know ki main tumhe pagal lagungi bt i want the answers yar. becoz m vry curious for ur story.plzzz mera dbt clear kar do...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey..i read both ur ffs khade khade😆but commenting here only i can't type much but all i wanna say is...

awesome but i am also sad ki abhay is no more i wish he comes back!!!!i would like that more than this khnph story
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Posted: 14 years ago
best of luck fr exams..👍🏼
will b waiting for update..

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanjha

HEY😊 i luv ur story yar😛 . awesum story👏. aisa lagta hai jaise real story hai. specially wen abhay said that he and metri r together. after that piya 's reaction towards abhay.it touches my heart. believe me mere aankhon me aasun aa gaye.😭MUJHE THODA DBT HAI 😕. CAN U CLEAR IT TO ME...

1) As per ur story abhay is a vamp that means a dead man . than wo accident se kaise mara ? he is nt a nrml human being jo ki accident se marr jaye.

2) aur marne k baad uski body mili jise uski family dekh kar roi. yar post mortem me doc's ko pata nhi chala ki ye ek nrml human body nhi hai?

3) jab metri use uske parents k naam par blackmail kar rhi thi tab usne piya ko hurt kiya. phir jab uske mom dad ghar wapis aa gaye to usne piya ko sab sach kyun nhi bataya ki wo sirf acting kar rha tha apne parents ko bachane k liye?

4) use tensed hokr apna accident kyun karwaya sumthing lyk suicide piya ko sach bata deta . piya to use vamp hone k bawazud bhi accept kar leti.

5) aadil jo abhay ki tarah dikhta hai wo human hai. iska matlab jab abhay zinda tha tab wo bhi foreign me apni life ji rha tha. matlab ek wrld me do chehre k log?


i know ki main tumhe pagal lagungi bt i want the answers yar. becoz m vry curious for ur story.plzzz mera dbt clear kar do...😊



first of all thanks u like it...now answers of ur doubts

1} well abhay ka accident blast mey hua hai... and he was stuck into the car...bec if fells from the cliff... so he was not able to get from it...so he died in a car...

2} no postmotem bec chand nahi chahta tha ki kisi ko pata chaley ki abhay was vampire...

3} abhay nahi chahta tha ki piya ko metri sey pata chaley ki abhay vampire hai aur metri can also effect piya so he did this...

4} jab insaan tension mey hta toh kya hota hai...i just want to mke stry reak so tht why bec abhay khi na khi insaano ki terha sochta hai...

5} yes an ths is the fact...in reality...

i think may be i hve cleared ur doubts...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ilove99

hey..i read both ur ffs khade khade😆but commenting here only i can't type much but all i wanna say is...


awesome but i am also sad ki abhay is no more i wish he comes back!!!!i would like that more than this khnph story


thanks for the cmment...
my lucky charm
i missed u a lot
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey just one word for your ff- AWESOME... please add me in your PM list plz.. continue soon👍🏼 ... TC... 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks frnds for the comments...really love u all...

part-20

next day:

aadil was looking his wardrobe and scratching head, ajay enters and sees aadil like this...he nodes his head...

ajay: yaar tu bi na kamaal karta hai...chal classes ke liye late ho raha hai...
aadil: i knw dude but i m confused what to wear?
ajay: hmmm confused are you joking? tera wardrobe duniya ke latest brand sey bhara pada hai see what r u saying...oh god...
aadil: stop it ok dude...and help me out
ajay: dinner pe ja rahey hai na ki engagment pey...
aadil: woh bi ho jaayegi
ajay: hmm filhal chal guru..
aadil: okay okay...


piya is also getting ready for radio station..she was looking herself mirror and making her hairs..here she gots flashback...

"piya was getting ready and abhay comes from behind put his head on her shoulders"

piya: mil gaya time Mr raichand ko
abhay: yes i have always time for you
piya: no ways kal raat kaha they tum
abhay: well i was in someone beautiful arms...chodh hi nahi rahi thi...
piya {shyly}: tum na bahut naughty hogaye ho abhay
abhay: hmm {he hugs piya} i want to be {kisses her forehead}

someone : piya piya
piya comes to her senses
panchi: piya arent you getting late hmm chalo jali karo
piya: yeah i was about to go...
panchi: r u ok
piya: yes


college scene:

aadil and ajay comes to college...he stopped hi sports car... a girl in a heals and red skirt {mihika verma see on google} comes to aadil, ajay sees her...his eyes becmes curious

a girl: hey sexy looking hot...
ajay: what about me...
a girl": oh shut up
aadil: hi tanisha
tanisha: hi lets go to canteen
aadil: no i have to smewhere else
tanisha: never time for me
ajay: i have all time for u
tanisha: get lost fool
ajay: and u gobi ka phool
tanisha: what
ajay: bye...


scene shift


piya in radio station gets a call...

a man: hi piya ji meri ek problem hai aap solve kar sakti hai
piya: ji bilkul aapki problem ka solution deney toh hum baithey hai..waisey apna naam batiye
a man: ji ajnabee hi keh lijiye
piya: ok mr ajnabee baitye kya problem hai
a man: mujhe kisi sey pyar hogaya hai lakin usey keh nahi pa raha hu
piya: oh wow u r in love who is the lucky one
a man: you
piya: pardon
a man: yes you

piya looks a karan {rohit} karan signals to listens and answers...
piya: ok toh you love me but why
a man: just like that

a man cuts the call an piya is surprised...


evening scene

aadil was very excite for the dinner an ajay knows that very well...aadil and ajay reached home...aadil rushes to his room and ajay follows him..sudenly

an old woman: rukiyee
ajay stops and turns...
an old woman: kaha ja rahey hai aap
ajay: woh nani kahi bi toh nahi
an old woman: hum sab jantey hai kya chal raha hai aapke dimaag mey
ajay: kuch bi toh nahi nani
aadil comes...

aadil: hey sexy
an old woman: aadil hum aapke nani hai girlfrn nahi
aadil: dadi aap hi meri gitlfrnd hai..
ajay: chaley ab late nahi hao raha hai
an old woman: kaha ja rahey hai aap
ajay: aapkey liye bahu dekhney
an old woman: kya
ajay: sach nani...

an old woman {sushma seth} is ajay nani {ajay is aadil best frnd and his brother also surprise for my frnds}...ajay hears a car horn and aadil gets nervous...

so friends here i end hope u will enjy...sorry for short update






Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey kajal😃

awesome update dear👏👏👏...i think this tanisha is jst like t naa...hey that man is aadil naa who called pia...waiting for the dinner...plz update soonhav a nice dayluv usunita
Edited by sunu123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Its short but amaging update dear so sweet... Waiting for dinner Continue soon... Plz plz plz PM me when you update next part...thanx...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update...
Love aadil piya jodi...
Waiting to see them close...
Can u please pm me???

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