=Silent whispers= (MaanEET)updt ch11 pg 65 14sept - Page 21

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Posted: 14 years ago
cute n sweet ff loving it pm plz
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Chapter 7

"Umm… I wanted to ask… if that cat statue is sold… I cant se it at that table", she said pointing towards the table through the glass panes.

"No… its there… You want to see?" the boy asked.

She nodded with a yes.

The boy took her inside from the min gate of his house with was just a few steps away from the shop gate but in the same building. To say it was second door in this building.

It was a personal house. A very big one but still it could not be compared to any mansion but it was bigger than other houses of that posh locality. It seemed that they indeed were rich.

Get looked around. The locality was bit too silent. She looked at his back and then moved forward toward the door.

He entered the house and asked her to close the door behind. Which she did.

"Come along." He said as he looked back at her, she was still dazed as she had never entered anyone's house like that. They were not even friends and she was in his house. He was really surprised with her own act.

She came forward towards him and then as they passed the balcony of the house Geet's eyes fell on the most serene and lovely scene ever.

She could see whole city from his balcony. It looked as if she was dreaming. She stood there for some time.

When he felt no one behind him he looked back and noticed her standing in the balcony taking the view.

She looked so beautiful and innocent. He thought. But then shrugged off all such thoughts and moved towards her.

"Geet…" he called her to gain her attention.

"This is so beautiful..." she said looking at him for fraction of second and then again looking at the view.

"yes it is…" he said, too admiring the scene. "Come..." he said again taking her to the shop.

"Yeah" she said looking at him in unusual glint. Then she followed him in the room. They entered a big room but it was dark so she couldn't see anything. They walked until they reached the stairs. They climbed it and then he opened the door. There was shop. She looked in there like she had come for the first time. She looked at other showpieces and antiques.

He went towards the old wooden cabinet, opened it at took out the cat statue Geet was talking about and kept it on the big table. Geet looked at it.

"Here it is…you know… its specialty u can only notice when the sun is setting at that time its raises makes it more attractive and beautiful. Anyways you can see it and spend time here as much as you like. I am there down." He said as he walked out of the room.

She sat there near the table on the chair nearby.

She sat there looking at the statue. Thinking about the things going on in her life. She was upset. She wanted someone to share her feelings. She wanted someone to hold her and console her. Tell her that she was not wrong… that it was not her mistake.

She just wanted some piece if not a shoulder to cry on.

She looked at the cat statue. "it is alone too… where is his mistress… does it miss her?" she thought.

She was still a girl. Didn't know much about the feelings that people were trying on her.

She didn't felt it right, that Yash like her. How could he… he was just a friend. She always used to show him low and here he says that he likes her. How could that be? But there was truth in his eyes.

She stopped with her thoughts.

She thought for a second. And then suddenly looked at the cat statue again.

"Gosh "she exclaimed in astonishment. She intently looked at its eyes. It was shining like it had bulbs inside it. The green shine was so fascinating that it took her breadth away.

She admired it for sometime and then when it was dark there she left the statue there only and went down the steps.

Now there was light every where. It was a big a very big hall with big expensive window panes with exclusive design. Three large sofa sets all very expensive and a big glass table with an antique designs on its wood work.

She looked at the side where she could see him sitting on the table doing some work.

She got near him. Then saw he was carving a design on a violin.

She looked at him with surprise.

"Did you make it?" she asked in excitement.

"Yes I did" he said simply.

Then she looked around. She saw more violins.

"Did you make them all?" She asked rather innocently but in surprise.

No he nodded.

Do you only know to make violin or know how to play it. Han?" she asked with a smile.

"Yes I know... But only a little." He said.

"can you please play it for me… please please…" she said pleading.

She looked so sweet that he just couldn't say no to her.

"Okay.. I will play but you'll have to sing." he said with a sly smile.

"What…!!!.. Know... I don't know how to sing." Geet said looking at him with her big eyes.

"Come on Geet… do you sing that bad?" he asked chuckling.

She started singing and asked him in sign language to start playing violin.

He sang so well that he just couldn't control him self and he too started singing.

And as they were singing the old man and his friends too joined them with other instruments.

At last they all stopped. The old men applauded for the two- Maan and Geet.

"Hey…u are that girl who came that day." The old man asked Geet.

"Yes sir." Geet answered politely.

"Maan you know her?" the old Man asked the boy.

Maan nodded.

Geet looked at him astonished!

"You are Maan Singh Khurana?" She asked in astonishment.

"Yes" Maan said simply.

"Why you didn't tell me that before?" she asked complaining.

"You didn't know my name all this while?" he asked in surprise.

"You can't be him…" she said with little disappointment. " I thought he would be…."

"I would be what?" Maan asked.

That Maan Singh Khurana would be someone intelligent and civilize and smart and ….. Anything but not like you." She said.

Maan glared at her. While all the old men laughed at both.

"but the shops name says that your surname is Rai" she said still not recovering from the shock.

"its my grandfathers name Balwant Rai Singh Khurana" he said.

And hearing this her mouth opened in a big O.

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Okay guyz that's it for now.

please press the like button and do comment.

priya


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Posted: 14 years ago
Brilliant part!!!

Finally u revealed the Mystery Boy.

loved the update
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Posted: 14 years ago
O a bigOvery very nice update... 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Originally posted by: 18mypride

O a bigOvery very nice update... 👏



ohh.. at first sight of ur comment i thought it was a zero!...😆
thnku...🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Haaye loved the update
Geet got to knw he is Maan
She will get now that she is in love with him
Loved how bth were opening up n cuming close also
Wuld love to c more meets lik this
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Posted: 14 years ago
so Geet's MSK isnt what she thought he'd be...lol...its ok...MSK is MSK period!! lol
JAZ
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Posted: 14 years ago
guyz i m really sorry for the mistakes i have committed in the passage...

pls correct them ur self while reading coz i cannot edit it... my net is irking me alot today...

priya...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update
I liked the way story progressed.
Geet was pouring her heart out to the statue and it's
eyes were shining. Hmm interesting.
Whn geet said to the view.. it's beautiful! I was wondering if maan
said it to his view ;) that indeed it is beautiful :)
the invisible thread of their trust is strengthing. Geet followed maan wherevr
he was Taking her... That's pretty bold on her part :)
awww she found out he is maan . Now Maan can make her c all his hidden talents ;)
that she was complaining about.
Edited by basicquestion1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jnawaz

so Geet's MSK isnt what she thought he'd be...lol...its ok...MSK is MSK period!! lol

JAZ
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@red ohh yes i wil...

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