MG ff:Thirst for revenge 1, link to thrd 2 on pg 1 - Page 12

awesome part.
maan has no emotion left in him.
feared about geet's safety now
continue soon.

Loved this concept ...but scared as u have already mentioned its a dark story...:-(

Originally posted by: neha9999

OMG faboulous update girl!👏 and what you talkin about about stopping?😳That is so not cool😆Okay after reading it...I had some questions: How did the murder happen? How did Maan know that Lala had done the murder? If he wanted to take revenge so badly then why did he wait for so long?😉

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As far as his characterization goes, Maan is indeed a stone so can I conclude that his hatredhas taken over his life?Also is he going to impregnate her?😭That might be a cheap way to take revenge😡I hope you come up with something unique for this. You have set your standards quite high😃

For Geet I like how you made her simple but please dont make a crying 24-7 girl after he does something to her. Me want a strong Geet😳

You have created a picture in my mind and hats off to you for doing that. I would fix some spelling errors /bc its is sometimes distracting. 😃Also to attract more viewers, I would decorate the first page more...first impressions are always important! Your writing is really good but if the first page does not stand out, people might ignore it😊

<strong>P.S. I hope you got your constructive criticism😈🤣

thank you for sharing your views. For all the questions you asked the answer will be slowly revealed through the story. Let me answer your one question. Maan waited for so long to take his revenge because he wanted to destroy the handas with his bare hands. And his mother's promise was somehow holding him back... The later will be revealed as the story proceeds.

Originally posted by: sharmake11

i hope he doesnt stoop low

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<div>fabulous start

love it

waiting eagerly

ty pm

dont dare stop this FF

ur doing great job

thank you. I will continue this ff so dont worry.😊

Originally posted by: siroilily

Great update . Maan has chosen geet to start his revenge on handas.Guess he ll offer her a job in his co. Pls cont soon 😳 im loving it!

thank you... Yes, maan has chosen geet for revenge. You'll have to wait and watch how the story unfolds.😉

Originally posted by: naamteeg

loved your character sketch of Maan... can't wait to see how you are going to pen Geet's character.. I love all your ffs... you are a wonderful writer... looking forward to reading this new ff

thank you for appreciating my work.

Originally posted by: _Jessi_

Loved the update..

if maan and geet fall in love, and then he finds out tht she is a Handa.. then there will surely be the end of the world

how can maan be soo mean to dadi😡poor her😭😭

buhhh loving it so far...

pls continue soon

~Jessica😃

let me reveal something. Maan is not going to fall in love with geet. Atleast not anytime soon.

Originally posted by: jnawaz

<font color="#9900ff">very interesting and different...im all for the dark love story as long as it is still a love story...lol..</font></strong>

<strong><font color="#9900ff">JAZ</font>

me too. I'm all for dark stories provided they are love stories. So i decided to write one.

Originally posted by: tanya_vi

<font color="#ff00ff">Oh God Geet is so sweet and nice- a pure angel and Maan the devil incarnate!!! i feel really scared for Geet..Brilliantly written Kathie..The story idea is so thrilling..can't wait to read more...</font>

thank you tanya...

Originally posted by: mysticangel

simply awesme update...
pata nahi...when u told that this is a very dark love story...it still gives me creeps and the way maan's character has been portrayed, he is undeniably ruthless...and i am having a feeling that the journey ahead is going to full of shocks, and creepy twists, but then i love such stuff...
BTW the update was mindblowing...
keep writing kathie
love u and ur ff

thank you. Love you guys for appreciating my work.