New MANEET FF! My Angel - Part 6 pg 19 4th NOV - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
Loveee the starting:D
Continue soonnn.
cant wait for maan's entry!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 2:

Dev looks at Annie and she winks to him and he leaves.

Annie- Geet, why are you so mean to my brother?
Geet- Please.. He is so annoying..
Annie- Acha gussa chor.. and let's have lunch..

Both orders a sandwich and sits down.

Annie- Have you done the science homework?
Geet- What was it about?
Annie- O.M.G.. heard it? O.M.G Geet! You never do your science homework?
Geet- What? I don't like science! and makes a baby face and sees Kabir is coming to canteen with T.

Geet- See. T and Kabir. Collage most hot couple. But do you know Annie he is not happy with her.
Annie- What are you talking about? And how do you know about all this? You know na they all are seniors.. Like Dev bro
Geet gives her angry look and stands up

Annie- Where are you going?
Geet- Where? Hello Annie, Wake up.. Kabir is coming and Geet, Geet Handa will go to him
annie- and do what?
Geet- You just watch, T urf Tanushree will just watch how I will take her boyfriend
Annie- Good luck..

Geet goes straight and takes all Annie's book with her Annie gives her angry look and Geet ignores it.

Geet looks at her books and starts walking. Kabir and T passes by her and T looks at Geet.

T- Wait Kabir, Look at Geet, she is just too fashionable for the youngster.

Geet looks up to her and smiles, she know what to do for make Geet happy.
Geet- Ofcourse T.. All this is becuase of you. You are my idol you know.

T looks at her watch and then looks at Geet and Kabir

T- Kabir darling, can you just wait here with Geet?
Geet- Me?
T- Ofcourse.. I don't need to be scared of somebody to take Kabir away from me and leaves

Kabir- Thank God you saved me Geet and hugs her.

Geet got a big smile on her face.

Kabir and the gang goes in 10th standard and is 15 years old, while Geet goes in 6th standard. And Kabir knows that Geet likes him alot.

Geet- Kabir, why are you dating T?
Kabir- I'm not dating her. You know because of Valentine everybody thinks that we are a couple. but thanks to you so can I be myself.

Geet jumps and hugs him tighter and Geet's skirt goes up a little bit and you can see her thigh. Kabir smiles at his naughty toughs.

Annie wants her book back and goes to Geet.

Annie- Geet are classes are starting to come now, and drags her from there.

Geet leaves and gives him a flying kiss.

Kabir- Well , she is hot.. hehe dumb girl who will stuck with me now..

Geet gets angry on Annie for dragging her when she was doing so well with Kabir.

Annie- Can you stop giving me looks?
Geet- You!! Don' talk with me! You ruined everything Annie!
Annie- Geet, please Kabir is not a good guy for you
Geet- I said na don't talk with me

Sir comes in the class and both sits quiet.

***

Khurana House: Mom=Avantika

Dadi maa and Avantika are cleaning the house.

Avantika- Hurry up Nakul, he's room must be clean
Dadi maa- Kuch nhi hota, aram karo thora sa
Avantika- Maa ji, Mujhe Dev ko nhi dena chai ta wo kamra
DAdi maa- -.-
Avantika- Aap Maan ko janti hai na, sabh kuch perfect chai hai, ek bhi cheez yaha waha nhi ho sakti iss liye
Dadi maa- Hum aapki baat samjte hai, hamara pota hai woh, paar aap kyo itni chinta kar rahi hai?

Suddenly they hear a car stopping outside that house.

Avantika - Lagta hai Maan ae gaya and runs out. A man steps out wearing black trouser and a white shirt. Looking dashing.

Avantika runs out and hugs Maan.

Maan- Mom! I missed you
Avantika - i missed you to.. Let's go inside

Maan goes and takes dadi maas blessing and looks around to see a glimps of his siblings but they didn't seems to be at home.

Dadi maa- They are at school.. Waise bhi humne apka admission unki hi school mein kar diya hai.
Maan- Thank you dadi maa
Avantika- How is school going?
Maan- Mom great, I have topped all my subjects.
Dadi maa- Very good.. ofcourse you will take over your dad's company one day
Maan- hehe, when will they quit?

Dadi maa and Avantika didn't understand who he meant!
Avantika- Who?
Maan- Anvesha aur Dev?
Avantika- Oh.. well you can go to and pick them today alright?
Maan- really? Thank you

Precap- Maan enter the school, all girls ignores Kabir!

Edited by SaVni - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
Awesome update
loved it loadz
Cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
Thanks 4 da PM
Muahhh
Xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
Loveee the part!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.


Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
Lovely update
Hehe flirty geet was nice
Can't wait for maaneets meeting x
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
poor Kabir gets ignored everywhr
luved d update waiting 4 more
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
loved da update
do continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
nice part loved the intro of MSK
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
awesome part...

maan has come...

kabir is a jerk,,,,,..

waiting for maaneet meet...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50

hai.savni,

MY ANGEL- you have given a nice start...expecting more from u...afterall im a great fan of maneet...n i hope u'll not disappoint me...one thing i want 2 ask u ...if kabir is in 10th n he is 15yrs old...geet is in 6th std n she is 13yrs old...according 2 her age i think she must b in 8th std...please correct it...n please 😊add me 2 ur pm list...😊


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