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Posted: 14 years ago

#481

Love it, love it, love it.

it was sooo hot☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

so now ur gonna make the story progress😉 hmm wonder how tht would be now with the love birds

love ur ff so much.. may it have 500 parts😆😳

Pls update soon

~Jessica😃

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roopali

@rsroopali

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#482

wowww it was dam HOTTT

luved ittt

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savie_

@savie_

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#483

luved it aot...

awesome..romantic part ...

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umaa

@uluvmg

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#484

its very very hoottiieesst update !! very well done😆 waiting for next...

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#485

awesome, romantic, hot, passionate update☺️.
loved it.
continue soon.

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Dilsay

@Dilsay

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#486

hot and passionate update...😳☺️

Edited by Dilsay - 14 years ago

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Tamanna_TJ

@Tamanna_TJ

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#487

hey Marvee,tht was way too hawttt...
m totally bowled out wid tht updatee...
m not able to speak coz of the effect of the FF on me...
loved tht part,"wer's ur self control Maanji??","went swimming wid urs."
awesome lines n emotins well depicted from each n every line...
just loved it...<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
desperately waiting for the next one...