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Posted: 14 years ago
~Enigma~
Part 68


WE ARE NUMBER 2 on Caska meter
NAHIII!!!!!!!!

pls press the CM meter 2... we manneting do not want to be number 2... no no no way...😳






Geet flows maan In someone's White dress. She still not approving to were this.
Geet "is farm house pe aur kaun kaun atahi?" maan rolled his eyes then in a jeark brought her in his embrace.. "from today on it will be just us 2."
Geet "saci!"
Maan "ha baba!"
Geet "good! I do not like to were some odd girls cloths!" maan just laughed way. She showed clear jealousy...
Maan "toh kaho..."
Geet "yes?"
Maan "what brings you to trust me?" geet instantly stopped walking along with him... Even she failed to realise that she was showing trust!
Geet "mathlab?"
Maan "mathlab..." a tint of naughty smile was on maans face. Geet sighed and blushed. It's clearly visible that she have somewhere started to overcome her little fear... She hugged him back... "I only trust you." maan smiles and brings her more close...

Indian airport

Romeo walks out, wearing normal polo shirt and beggy trouser...
John "we should check in hotel now!"
Romeo "sure!"
John "would you like me to call your mother! She have already called few times!" Romeo rolles his eyes, how does she know so much information about him!...
Romeo "how does she know?"
John "I am sorry. I really do not know!"
Romeo nodes indicating to let her know to come to the office...

Car-

Geet couldn't stop arguing, even though there was flirting going on... "dekho!" she points finger at maan, which he tries to bite while driving... "maan! Stop it!"
Maan "agar tum itni sexi bathe khaoge... How I suppose to control?"
Geet "ap bohot beshram ho!"
Maan "ha! Seref tomhare sath!" geet makes a baby face as he showed no sign of stopping teasing her... He even sometime lost the control of the car, it was geet who saved him!
Geet "tum concentrate karo na!"
Maan "ha baba!" maan failed to realise that traffic light have turned red and he bumps in to a identical car like him... Geets hand was round maan... And there shocking face looked round. Delis trafic!!!!!!!!
Geet "oh no!"
Maan "don't worry! Stay here!"
Maan walks out along with Romeo! Who seemed not happy at all.
Romeo "are you having travel in bright day light? And that to on a dry day?" geet looked at the young man! A early 20s she guessed, older then her and younger then maan for sure..

Maan "hay chill! It was a mistake! I will send you a cheque!" Romeo did not say much as he gave one angry glare to maan and return maan did the same. He dis not like the way he startted the fight, but they were holding the trafic, maan walks off in attitude along with Romeo. Gave one another one angry glare then drove off!

Geet "idiot! Does not have manage!"
Maan "ignore! Let's go home!" but maan wasn't the type who leaves something this easily...

Romeo was frustrated, first he will see his so call mother and now this car bumper! And that man! Does he always have to see some idiot!

Maan "that boy!"
Geet "how do you know he is a boy?"
Maan "he looks to young to be a man!"
Geet "jane bhi do na! Some irresponsible millionaires son may be! Chado! Ham ghar chalo..."

Maan & geet could here screaming of rus and rik...
Geet "great! Ay dono ko Ab ka hua?" both rushes in, rik and rus. Basically was on the floor, there body was fighting like a snake... Rano straggling. Maan ran and held rik and geet to rus...
Geet "calm down! What's wrong?"
Rik "he told me that maan is not our jija ji!"

Geet lost her word. She was not sure what exactly to say now. They shared deep relationship, but the marriage, its to fast. The fear still somewhere lingered through her mind, seeing her mother so lonely today, she do not have the streanth to be a lonely person, her life without maan, no no she can't dream of that...

Maan "thats not true! Who els will merry your natunki sister! It have to be me!" rano smiled and walked way, leaving the love bird with some privacy.

Geet "NATUNKI? How exactly I do nutanki?" she fumed. Rik went to maans side and rus went to geets side.

Rus "oy hello, if you want to merry my sister, you have to impress the little sala ji!" he fixes his colar...

Maan "natunki family!"

Rik "would you like me to take my sister side?" rik looks up in anger tone...

Maan "but I thought you are my family! Those to can after my and geets marriage!" all three teased and fought while geet stood there, trying to join in, but her heart completely refuging...

Rik and rus ran off when maan came close to geet ... "whats wrong?"

Geet "i don't know... Why I am not happy?" she looks deep in to his eyes, like almost asking her self why she is not happy? After all this happened between them, she should be clear with marriage, maan is the first and most probably the last guy she will ever be comfortable with, then... Then whats bothering her? There should be nothing that should bother her... Maan slowly touched her chin, creasing lovingly... "its nothing! You are just thinking to much!"

Geet "per.. "

Maan "shh..." he rests his index finger on her lips... Telling her not to worry at all... Geet smiles and hugs him tight. She was sure nothing will go wrong. "acca suno.."

Geet "bolo.."

Maan "I have to go to the office! Tumko jana hi?"

Geet "I want to change cloths first... I don't know who's cloths is this!" maan smiles.. Kissing her cheek...

Maan "I will met you in 30 minute..." he was about to walk off when geet holds his hand.. "aren't you going to change?"

Maan "umm.."

Geet "you have to change.. Pata nahi, how those girls may have touched this cloths... Take it off!" she was rather aggressive, trying to take it off right in the middle of the hall way... Maan stops, even though he was loving it...

Maan "are are.. We are in the hall!" geet smiles and frees him.. He softy touches her forehead with his lips then disappears...

***

Romeo stood in the big hall way... A lady in a dress walks down. He did not look happy at all, he rather was amused with his mothers dressing style. "you would like to see me?"

Sammera "what is so hurry son?"

Romeo "please! I think I have and did see enough here! Why you want to see me?"

Sammera smiles, a cheeky smile, "look at you, you are grown up now. Oh how I wished I was there on your 19th birthday. Have you seen my present?"

Romeo started to get frustrated with her non stop buk buk... "I am leaving, hope I never see you!" romeo rushes out. Angry, frustrated. Life always have been cruel to him, but he will not allow to rule over his life.


Romoe did not consider changing as he walks in to the khurana with his summer polo shirt and beggy trouser. Texing someone iwth his new iPhone which was not even out on the market. He considered him self to be supreme, but a very nice person in heart...

All young girl loved the look, who would believe this young man is the owner of the famous XXX company. He is cleaver, young... He had every quality... The girls were dying over his sexy look... But there thought were suddenly disturbed as geet bumped in to him, landing on the floor. Flat on her back. She laied there in shock. What just happen? Whole office was trying to compress there laughter.


Romeo just looks at her then ignores.. Geet stands up, trying to fix her cloths. And looked at romoe, she felt like kicking his ass! "all idiot mens are same! Uff!... Except maan of course!" she blushed at the word maan, but then quickly fixed her self...


Romeo "all girls are same! Stupid & selfish!" he did not even look at her once or apologias. Pinky came running...

Pinky "are you alright geet?"

Geet "haha ... Stupid!"


Romeo "idiot" he whispers to him self...


Maan walks out, seeing geet have defiantly done something, specially the way everyone suppressing there smile. He came by and broke the silent, coughing... "are you alright?" geet smiles and nodes... Maan slips his hand round her waist and walks in to his office with her.. Which few girl startted to have heart attack with... They still knew geet is married and she is from some village...


Maan "what happen?"

Geet "some stupid boy bumped in to me..." she makes a baby face.. "& I feel flat on my back!" even maan tried to suppress his smile... "even you are laughing!" she makes another baby face...

Maan "nahi toh... When have I laugh"

Geet "I can see that little glare on your face.. Don't hide"

Maan "nahi toh.. "

Geet "nahi hamne dekha!"



Maan "no.. " geet tries to see his face while maan hiding.. Then in embarrassment she hugs him, hiding her face... "everyone making fun of me" her baby voice sounded so sweet...



next- ? no precap...

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
res
me 1st...me 1st...yay...
thnx sooo much keya🤗
luv u for this!!!! mmmuuaahhh


luvd the update..😳
oo J geet luvd her
so she is accepting slowly tht maan is hers and only hers!!😆
luvd the mok jhok b/t rik and rus and den maaneet arguing over it..
NAUTANKI sis...hahahahaha🤣 awesum babes!!👍🏼

but am not getting good vibes abt tht romeo😕
hope he doesn't interfere b/w our maaneet!!!!😳


update soon dear
can't wait 4 da next!
😍
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Edited by kawaii_geet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awww amazing update.. luved the jealous geet... Hmm Mr.Archer is surely goin fall for geet... looks interesting.. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
dont get upset cuz we love ur stories and since u know its summer everybody is busy maybe some ppl went on vocation. i really want to know the story behind romeo he seems interestin
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesoem udpate dear
loved it...love geet possessiveness
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
sweet update...geet still confuse bt gud 2 see maan understood her turmoil...
btw i like dis romeo...jis he is goin 2 gv tough compi to maann...😉😉😉😉😉
geet is so mch j dat she didnt wanna maan to wear d clothes touched bt other gals...😆😆😆
office mst be havin a sure heart attack by display of msk affection for a MARRIED LADY...
lv d update...maine kaha tha na...ki...MAIN HOON NA...
Lv u
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved da update
do continue
it was amazing
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for the update! Loved it!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Maan teasing Geet, so cute to see them like this😳 she is having problem with someone else's cloths also so possessive😉 Maan's remark of Geet's family being "nautanki" was superb!!! naye naye chehre mujhe phir se paresaan kar rahe hai😡
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Posted: 14 years ago

I am loving it!

but, i am scared of sameera and this Romeo, who is sure to fall for Geet!😕

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