FF-Hot Chocolate,Rain,and You-Chp7: pg42 on 13 Apr - Page 19

Originally posted by: murphy369

Suvi!!!!!!!!

Forgiven for the delay , you just melted my heart with the update😍

It was awesome...bestest update...the most beautiful one...what else???

Oh my god, are you serious? Haye haye Sancho, u make me blush!! I didn't like this update at all, actually...I was very apprehensive about posting it😳😆 Aw thanks...I'm very greatful...and honoured

What a description 👏

"Shock and anger carved her beige-toned lips into a circle. Her chartreuse eyes were shaded with the canopy of her lustrous eyelashes, mascaraed to a curled perfection. Her cheeks were flushed, a contrast to the ivory of her skin. Her hair was tied in a classic French braid, and a side fringe covered most of her forehead"

You liked it? Thank you sooo much...

You are a professional writer😃, aren't you

You really are!!!

No, I'm not, though I want to be😆...I'm really very honoured⭐️

Good gracious!!!!

Please update a 'little' faster this time...please!!!Oooh I will try, but I've got a maths exam and I have to give that importance, na...so I doubt it will be less than two weeks away, because I will only write once the exam is over😃 because I really want to make my didi proud

Thanks once again Sancho!!

Originally posted by: meepha

y did u upd8 innna late:0

wait kar kar kar kar ke i had grown old:D

Coming nto the upd8..I loved the last bit the mood swings wala.

HAha,that was so i dunno the word..NICE?:S

So anyways u write really nice

upd8 soopr soon

Originally posted by: neahakhan

Ohmygod
I'm loving this piece of art
perfect display of asr and khushi
please do add me to ur pm Missy.

And do keep up with an amzing ff.
Update sooon<3

Originally posted by: -Vishwa-

🤣 SUVI! Call the hospital!! 🤣

Kyuuun?
I m having a laughter attack on my bean bag 🤣
Ohh

Your dialogues crack me up...wat a start to a sunday morning 🤗

Thank you..but kaunsa dialogue, twas meant to be serious!!🤣

Loved every BIT of this update... I am SO in love all your
precise and extravagant words ☺️

thanks sooo much Vishy
The fight with ArHi at the end was my favourite part... I mean I can
seriously just picture the two lashing back at each other with the
same phrases... but it seems Arnav is a bit cool over here...not the
same angry young man that always gets ready to bite back 😆

Yeah he's cool...he doesn't want to fight with a giiirll😳😆 I'm glad you liked it
Now I donno if I should exactly lecture you on being a lazy bum and not
updating cuz your updates are more than perfect... but I guess
I will follow my rule of quality than quantity

LOL...I'm not lazyyy I'm bery busy🤓...aww thankooo
But PLEASE... *Vishy gets on knees* update soon if you can
love ya n damn you rock gal

Will try my best, but only after exam :)

Love you too and thanks heaps for reading and the lovely comment

*hugs* Take care!

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Heya Suvi!! Hey Zeba!

I really enjoyed the update. Khushi and Anjali's conversation was so lovely to read. I loved the way Anjali spoke for her brother, it was really cute.

Thanks, I'm glad you like it!

Arnav and Khushi's conversation was great, I especially loved his reaction to her. He seems quite calm and collected before her.

Yeah, he is...I want him to act like he's a lil...above her, if you know what I mean..

I wonder what she would like to show him??

Now that I wont tell you😆

I love the way both of them can't stop thinking about each other.

Thanks for the PM angel and update soon!!

😊

Thankyou for commenting, you're welcome and will try :D

*hugs*