Maneet FF: Madly in love with you(Part 8:Page 90) - Page 18

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Posted: 14 years ago
wen r u updating...😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
interesting ff...
so will she marry dev or will something happen...
i am very eager to read more of the story...
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awesome update...
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fatima - when will v get an update???
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Nice Concept. Do continue soon.
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Hey, I am surely in ur buddy list, but did not get PM for this new FF. please do not forget to PM me for the next update.
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a song from film
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dheree dheree naino ko dheree dheree u may check this song its nice
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Posted: 14 years ago

FF:Madly in love with you

Part 3

Maan came to adi's home.Adi took him inside.

Adi(Embarrassed):Sorry woh maine aaj tumhi sab se milana tha per dad,mom aur pinky ko kahin urgently jana para aur naughty group ne bhi kahin jane ka plan bana liya.

Maan(Smiled):Its ok buddy,Main inse kisse aur din mil loon ga.

Adi and maan ate lunch together.Maan looked at his watch.

Maan(Stood up):Adi mujhe site dekhne jana hai.

Adi:Haan yaad hai mujhe,Maine bhi tumhare saath jana hai.Tum wait karo main abhi aata hoon.

Maan:Main tumhara gate ka pas wait karta hoon.

Adi went upstairs and maan went towards the door.He saw a girl running while looking at her back.But still he could see her face.He couldnot believe his eyes.

Naina bhoole bhoole

Kuch Bole bole

Phir Haule Haule

Mann Dole Dole

Maan(Thinking):Is she real or am i dreaming?

She collided with maan and about to fall down.When maan gripped her waist.

Bahein Khole khole

Per tole tole

Ude haule huale

Mann bole bole

His heart was beating fastly.He looked at her.Her eyes were closed.Then she slowly opened her eyes and looked at him.

Hota hai jaise

Neendon mein bolna

Bahon mein dolna

Annkhon mein tolna

Geet:Sorry and thankyou.

Her melodous voice took him back to reality.He pulled her up.

Maan(Looking at her lovingly):Sorry aur thank you kis liye?

Geet(Making a baby face):Sorry for bumping and thank you for saving me from falling.

Then she looked at her back and showed thumbs down to yash and meera.Adi came and saw geet.

Adi:Arrey Kiddo tum log aa gaye?...Chalo acha hua maan tum logon se mil le ga...Maan ye mere behen geet hai (Pinched her nose) jisse main pyar se kiddo bulata hoon (Pointing at yash) Yash se tu tum pehle mil choka ho (Pointing at meera) Ye meera hai mere dosri behan...Aur ye maan hai mera best friend.

Maan met with them while his eyes were twinkling with happiness.Adi remembered something.

Adi(Looking at naughty group):Oh! Main tu tum logon ko batana bhool gaya woh dad kha rahe tha ka dev ne tum logon ko dinner pe bolaya hai Admiral hotel main.

Yash(Looking at geet with smile):Per isse tu sirf geet ko bolana chahiye kyuki woh tu geet ka ...

Suddenly maan's cell phone started to ring.

Maan:Adi ab humain chalna chahiye.We are getting late...Ok bye yash ,bye meera and (Looking at geet lovingly)bye geet.

Adi:Remember 8:00 pm per hotel pohanch jana.Ok takecare,Bye!

Yash/meera/geet:Bye!

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At 8:00 pm, Dev was waiting for them.He looked at the entrance and saw geet.She was looking beautiful.Then he saw yash and meera.He never liked geet's so called friends.But he called them because he knew Bajaj uncle would never allow geet to go alone somewhere.Dev met with them with forced smile.They started to select the dish.Yash cracked some joke,Geet started to giggle.Dev controlled his anger.After the dinner,He dropped them to Handa mansion.He told yash and meera that geet would come in 10 minutes.Yash and meera left them alone.Dev told geet to sit on front seat.She sat on front seat.

Dev:Maine tumhi kitne dafa kaha hai ka yash se dor raha karo.

Geet:Per dev yash tu mera bachpan se best friend hai.

Dev(Angrily):Iss se dor nahi rah sakte tu atleast stop acting like a child.

Geet(With teary eyes):Tum tu jante ho na ka main humasha se aise hi hoon tu tum mujh per gussa kyu ho rahe ho.

Dev(Controlling his anger):Aik tu tum mere baat nahi sunte oper se agar main kuch kahoon tu rone lagte ho...Dekho geet humare jab shadi hoge tu main ye chazein bardast nahi karoon ga iss liye behter hai tum pehle se hi change ho jao...Ab sab ka samne rote hua mat jana.Good night!

Geet:Good night!

Precap:Maan telling his parents abt geet + maneet 3rd meeting!

Here is the vm on the song:

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CZjjZjWNavQ&feature=player_detailpage[/YOUTUBE]

(Credit goes to the vm maker)

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Posted: 14 years ago

NOTE:

Sorry for the late update.

But thank you soo much for suggesting songs and waiting for the update.

I hope u guys like this part.

This is the banner of the ff:

Credit goes to Shivangi and Stuti (CIDMaaneetNaksh and stuti_naksh4eva)

Thank you sooo much for making banner for my ff.


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I have started a scary maneet SS.Please Check it out:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/45309282�

This is my first experience writing a scary SS.

Love,

Fatima

Edited by pickachu - 14 years ago

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