SS:Changed[MG] part 5 updated

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HI my name is jyothi and i am new to this forums planning to start an SS named Changed
Plz help me with this try and pass your valuable comments

Character Sketch:
MAAN SINGH KHURANA:
Owner of KC a very handsome intelligent and arrogant business man know to the world and inside a person suffening due to guilt and fear of losing his loved ones.

GEET HANDA:
A very bubbly girl whose life revolves around her college and family.Always in dreams of her prince charming and hope to meet him soon.Helps her father in his construction business and her a goal is bring the company to the top.

SAVITRI DEVI:
Grand mother of Maan loves him very much and her only one wish is to see her grandson married and live life.

AADI:
Accountant of Kc and a very loyal and also a loyal secret agent of dadi

PINKY:
Receptionist of Kc and friends of Adi

RANO HANDA:
A very loving and caring mother of geet and can do anything to keep her happy

MOHAN HANDA :
Owner of Handa Empires and loves his daughter to the core his only wish is to make his family happy.


Geet's life was perfect with her parents friends her office work,but one day changed her life completely making her live a lifeless life.



PROLOGUE
MAAN: Sorry geet i can never love u or accept this marriage. i have married you just for the sake of dadi plz forgive me
GEET: Why maan? why? U never loved me? plz maan tell me i cant live without knowing the truth plz for once agree that you loved me i can live my whole life thinking that u loved me once
MAAN:I am sorry geet i never loved u nor can i love u plz believe it is for your good only forget me geet move on with life
GEET:Stop it maan i cant take it any more i have never asked u anything and for the first time i asked u to speak the truth and u just killed me maan
MAAN:I...
Geet just ran away from there without letting him complete his sentence.

CHAPTER 1
GK CONSTRUCTIONS
Every one are running up and down in the office searching for some documents and files.All are very tensed and some are at the verge of crying.
Adi enters this place and is shocked and suprised because it reminded him of KC which will be in the same state some times if some papers are missisng.
Summit: every one calm down ihave found the file dont worry now and be back to your positions before GK comes
Seeing this place adi felt as if he is in KC with different workers,then he thought may be this GK is also like MSK that's the reason he made it to the 2nd top position in the construction field after
KC.His chain of taughts were broken when summit came and ask if he wanted some help.
Adi gave one of his typical laughs and told that he is from KC and wanted to meet GK so as they can discuss a project which they wanted to built in the south as GK constructions has turned out to be the best here.
Summit greeted him and asked him wait in the vistors lounge as GK has not yet arrived and will inform once Gk will arrive and let him know.
After some time a man with well built body came and asked him if he knew the terms to meet GK and introduced himself as Arjun bodyguard of GK
Adi was shocked to know that there were some terms to meet him and asket Arjun wat were the terms
Arjun explained that GK doesnt like media and others know about GK personal life so dont want to expose it to others and will meet anyone only if they are bound to the rule that the information of GK is not to be revealed to anyone
Adi confirmed that no such information will be leaked and would like to meet him.
Arjun informed him that he can meet her in 15 min as she is in meeting with
another client and apologized for the wait time and left
Adi was trying to digest the fact the GK was not a man but instead was a woman.
Just as adi was thinking he saw geet walking into the office wearing a white salwar and was happy as well as shocked to see her here after 4 long years and just walked as fast as he can and gave her a big smile and a side hug
All the office staff were just starring at the seen before them as it was the first time they have seen some so close with geet and also saw a small smile that played on her lips seeing adi
Adi was just asking her non stop questions were have you gone so suddenly why you dint contact us etc etc
geet just gave a small smile and said we can talk about it later how was adi pinkiy and there child doing
Now all the staffs mouth opened wide as they have seen their strict and arrogant boss who never show any intrest in others life asking someone about his family
adi replied that all were doing good and he and pinky were really missing her.
Geet asked what he was doing in the office and asked him to follow into GK's cabin
Adi informed her that he was here for a deal and was waiting for the md and was very much shocked to know that she is GK the arrogant angry business woman who terrified her office staff to the core just like MSK
After discussing for some time she asked she ordered herslf a black coffee and a tea for adi he was again suprised as he knew she hated black coffee and used to drink only tea when asked she just said she have changed adi thought she has indeed changed she has no resemblance of the old geet any more who used to laugh play pranks and live life the fullest but was another photocopy of MSK who never lives life
Adi stayed there the whole day observing her but didnt find any single features of here own when he asked some of the office staff the told that she never talks not laughs just works as a robot and is very sincere and hard when it come to work he was just lost thinking wat made here to turn out into some one like this and promised to himself that no matter what will happen he will try to bring the old bubbly geet back who was his best freind and a sweet little sister

plzz tell me if i can cont..
part-2

it has been 3 weeks adi started the project with geet and is closely watching her and analysed her every movement to be
similar to maan the way she spoke the way she dealed with things around each and evry thing he started getting the idea about her
behaviour now and was sure it was some what related to maan and even understood that she was so deeply in love with him even after
being away from him for five years and even knew that the amount of her craziness and love for him is incresing day by day and
decided to do something with this thing.he started making friends with all the office staff to know more about geets nature many of
them didnt even knew her name as geet and only knew that she was some gk whose full form is never known even in hefr business
circle very few knew she was a women avtually many thaught she was a man actually adi also thought the same before he meet her
she is being very careful and tactful in avoiding the media she is made sure that know one will know even her existence in the crowd
so that she can pass by easily.
one day when he entered the office every one wwere very happy and free moving without doing their works when he
askec he was informed that gk will not be coming to office today when he further enquired he came to know that she will disappear in
certain days of the year and no one even knows where she went how she went and when did she return it would just appear as a
mystery. while adi looking into the calender and thinking about her disappearence came to know that it was the same day dadi was
admitted into hospital 5 yrs back and the next day was the day geet left delhi without informing anyone and thought about it deeply
and decided to talk to dadi the same day and left to delhi and made sure maan wouldnt be around and called dadi saying that she neen
to talk.
when adi spoke with dadi she broke down completly and told that when she was admitted into hospital she forced maan to
marry geet then and there itself even against his protests knowing that he loved here madly and even geet did the same but never
confronted each other about their feelings so she did that and she even dont konw what went wrong with them that geet left the next
day itself without even speaking to her once.adi assured that she knows that geet still loves maan madly and explained how crazy she
is about him and promised to help her to unite maan and geet he also told that she evn changed here initial to khurana and she is now
called as gk alias geet khurana.
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on the other end of the city geet was sitting in her hotel holding maans photo and crying over and over kissing the
photo madly and expressing her love to him through his photo
she could sleep the whole night she was just thinking about the way they meet how they spent so much of time with each other the love
he used to shower on her unconditionally and the lovely moments they spent evrything about him and only him and slept with teary
eyes at 2 in the morning

precap: i love u geet
sorry for no maan even in this part but i promise to show hi in the next part i am just trying to first expalin geets part of the story and
then will tell u about maans story and i even know i am very late and will promise to update soon
thank u
part-3
on the other end of city a boy came running laughing is heart out and telling his mom and dad that he loves the toy very much
and want to store it with atmost care and started palying with it after sometime the toy falls from stairs and breaks he cries holding it
his mom comes and wipes his tears and says dont worry we will buy a new one he wipes his tears and tries to laugh and says thank u so
much mom i love u so much then his dad comes and says dont u love me son do u love onky ur mother then the boy goes near his dad
and says i love u to dad and hughs them after some time his parents kiss him and tell him that they have to attend some fuction and
will return in a hour they leave but never return back as they die in an accident he cries endlessly over there death after some years he
sees geet infront of him and says i love u geet as soon as he said that she leaves him by falling into a hole from where she never return
he wakes up in a jerk and hold geets photo near his heart and silently promises him that he will never ever utter those words to her.
he couldnt sleep any longer and stares at her photo and kisses on her lips and wishes her saying happy aniversary mishiti i dont know
where u are but i just hope u are fine and wish u have all the happiness in the world i also know that ur happiness lies with me but it is
better off to stay away from u instead of killing u i maan singh khurana is afraid of loving u but i loved nut i cant afford to loose u by
saying that i ---- u i just cant say those words to u please forgive me sweety
he moves from his bed and goes into his gym and practices his tai chi just to forget the pain in his heart and thinks
about the day he has met her her laughter her spark her hair her every thing about her and only her he closes his eyes for a while and
sees the painfula nd dead eyes of her the day of thier marrige the day when he rejected her saying he dont love her and will never
lover her and smashes the glass and blood comes out contiuesly and leaves from there
on the other end geet wakes up with a jerk and feels some restlessness inside her telling that something happened to
her maan and kisses his photo and says some soothing words to it thinking he can hear those words where ever he is and however he is
so that he can rest
maan actually feels a bit light and didnt know but felt contened and happy listening to her words as if really she
is sitting beside him and wispering those words into his ear
geet wakes up goes to freshen up and wears a white and red saree places her mangalsutra and sindoor and leaves
to the temple and parys for maans well being and goes and waits infront of kc just to get a glimse of him before he enters his office
actually its her routine for last 5 yrs to watch him secretly all dressed as his wife on their marrige day just like that and visits all the
places they spent together in delhi and returns back to mumbai she dresses up like that only on this particular day only no one even
know that she is married only her parents know that and they tried there level best helping her to come out from her depression but
couldnt make her move on in her life .
geet returned to her office as gk a cold women who dosent have any feeling except anger that will be harboured on
any one for there smallest mistake but to them she was also an enigma one moment she will be the toughest boss the other moment she
will be so caring to one and all every one of the staff who approches her with there problems will be sorted out immediately so she was
never understood by them many of them feel her to be a mystery.
adi convinced maan that it would be better if he meets the md once and finalize every thing and asked him if he
would come to mumbai or he wanted gk to vist there office in delhi maan agreed to meet gk in kc but adi didnt tell him that gk was
geet and he didnt even tell him that gk was actually a women he allowed maan to think gk as a man only.he even insisted geet saying
that she need to come to kc for the meeting to discuss the terms and conditions with them she tried to protest a lot but adi was so much
into it and finally made her agree to come to kc for the meeting on the condition that maan shouldnt know her identity untill she vists
him
actually geet wanted to see the spark in maans eyes when he knows that she became so succesfull and she also wanted
to try one last time to convince him to express his feelings to her.
precap: they meet
part -4
a week has passed the day to meet maan was coming near and the restlessness in geet in increasing day by day the frustation and the anxiety were clearly visible on geets face all the staff were thinking about the change in her behaviour but no one could make out head and tail of it her friend and body guard arjun is the only one who knew about geet in a breif he actually joined as her body guard and learned many things about her in these years he was the only one to whom she opens up sometimes when she breaks down completly when asked she told that she is going to meet him and is very tensed about it and even asked him some help if needed to make him jealous or something he was happy about that and promised to do the needy.
meeting with maan has been scheduled the day after and she was on the moon to talk with him spend some time together even though it is an official meeting for few hours but she was happy for that only she tried number of dresses sarees what not everything just to meet him usually she wears a saree for any meeting but she was reconsidering about that because she very well know about kcs atmosphere and the tauntrums they used to throw on her when she used to wear simple jeans or salwars not that she is a modern person but she doesnt like to show off her body so she prefered wearing them.atlast she made up her mind and taught of wearing a suit and vist kc them change into a saree if needed she made sure about the security because there will be so much of media around kc.
on the day when media was covering them she changed herself and acted as a pa of gk and informed her bodyguards to surround other men beside her rather than her so they this the person is gk and told them she will enter after 5-10 mins so that the media will leave.
once the team entered they were warmly entered into kc and found it to be similar to gk constructions and felt strange shasha gave them a polished smile and asked them to come inside as there md is waiting for there arrival in the conference room they inform that gk hasent arrived yet and is waiting outside for the media to clear and will enter once media leaves shasha tell the same to maan and he feels strange when asked adi he informs that gk hates media and hides from them and informsthat many also dont know the fact that gk is a women.
after 10 min geet enters kc and felt happy and contend as she is chersihing her memories which she spent with maan mean while shasha gives a disgusting look to geet and asks her what the hell are u doing here and tries to stop her by showing her hand mean while her body guards surround geet and move sasha out off gks way sasha is insulted and shocked and shouts whats all this mean while pari(gks assistant) comes there and informs sasha that she is gk their md and clears the path for geet and leads her towards the conference hall some of the staff recognise her and tries to come near her but her bodyguards cover her up once in the conference room maan is facing the other side and is spell bound seeing her infront of him like that.
geet gives him a handshake and address him as mr.khurana and introduces herself as gk md of gk constructions and asks if they can start the meeting all the while maan is just staring at her with mouth open thinking what happened to her why she was behaving in such a manner and why is she not calling him maan he was thinking continuously but she acted in a purely professional way infront of him knowing very well the effect it has on him actually she was trying to make him forget about everything and think just about her but nothing else it was her plan to do so.
maan thinks once the meeting is done then he can talk with her personally and theuy leave to his office they just sit inside and even then she speaks only about the project the terms and conditions and all but she wouldnt even let him talk about there personal life when they were in a discussion pari knocks the door and enters saying gk has to attend an imp pahone calll geet is really pissed of with that and shouts on her in the same way maan shouts when he is disturbed and tells that she will be fired if she repeats the mistake once more.pari literally cries and tells that it was the call from cm and he wants to talk to her immediately so she couldnt help.
geets takes a long breath and says why couldnt u say something to the stupid he doesnt have any other work than calling me every time his son returns from US and tries to set her up with him and asks her to attentd the call which was again from the cm and asks her to attend there only to know what she told him and asks maan for 2 mins to finish the call pari tells him that gk is not feeling well and cant attend so she is speaking behalf of her and asks if there is something imp to convey he says nothing so imp and aks pari to convey his regards.
geet says sorry mrkhurana actually it was a bit imp so she couldnt execuse that and asks pari to leave so that they can continue with their meeting all the while maan was just lookinng at her thinking how much she has changed she didnt even have any of her qualities now she was completly another person before him yes she was gk she is not his geet he couldnt think straight everything around him was confusing but his heart said only one thing she was his geet who saild she will wait for him her whole life just for being his and only his.
they were done with the meeting and geet was trying to leave maan asked him if they could go out for lunch she simply refused saying she has some meetings lined up when asked for dinner she informed him that she is leaving for the evening he was so upset he made a very cute face geet was trying hard to stop her laughter and tried to leave immediately and asked her security if they can leave but to her luck or bad luck they informed her that they was media waiting outside and it is difficult to escape them maan listened to this and was happy so he can finally spend some time with her alone.
once they were left in the cabin maan tried to speak with her but she got a call he was really pissed of seeing this she immediately disconnected the call but it again rang but this time it was from arjun she answered the call and spoke very sweetly with him(actually arjun couldnt make it to delhi bcoz of his wifes delivery and she informed him that she would speak to him sweetly and act like he was everything infront of maan if necessary so she started speaking with him)
geet: what is this arjun se bcoz u r not there beside me i am facing so many problems here if u were there u would haven taken care of everything na sweety the whole day was a hell to me media is just behind me and top of that continous calls from that stupid cm i just dont get it why is he head on heels trying to get me married to his son plz do something about that matter
what else sweety how is everyone home is baby is she fine and what else ya i am returing to night ya ya i know and even u alsi know without u beside me i wouldnt stay any where else except mumbai and what else how is nt is she fine etc etc she was continiously blabbering
maan was having hard time controlling his anger finally after 15 min he was pissed of and pulled her cell away and threw it and shouted :I was waiting for u to talk with me from morning but u didnt have a sec but now u are talking with him for so long what do u think about yourself ha tell me dammit tell
he shouted in such a manner that all the office staff of both kc and gk were standing outside his cabin staring inside trying to analyse what is going inside and why is maan shouting on gk like that
maan completly forgot about his surroundings and pinned her t the wall and asked her what the hell are u wearing dont u know i dont like u wearing short desses then why did u wear this suit that to so short just upto ir knee tell me
geet didnt say anything she just excused herself and asked him leave her hands and asked him to look out of his cabin with her eyes maan released her and banged the wall in frustation blood was flowing seeing this geet cried and shouted what do u think about urself how can u hurt yourself like this u dont have any right ok u belong to me dare u do something like this again and closed her mouth and eyes to control herself and rushed outside and asked adi ti bring the firstaid kit immediately and shouted on every one to disperse from there and continue their works and bandaged his hand tears was flowing from both their eyes
precap:geet u look beautiful
part-5
maan:i am sorry geet
geet:uts ok mr.khurana anyways i have to leave its getting late i have some meetings lined up and have to catch the evening flight back to mumbai
maan:plz geet ghar chalo daadi is waiting for u from years she will be very happy to see u
geet:i am sorry but i cant come
maan:try to understand geet for once cant u come for daadi's sake
geet was in deep thought when pari came inside shivering holding her mobile
geet:shouted what the hell didnt i tell u not to disturb me i already warned u even then u came i guess u dont want ur job fine then u can leave i will sign ur resignation letter
pari:maam i am sorry but arjun sir called he is not ready to listen i even informed him that u asked not to disturb plz maam i couldnt help
geet:its okk but dont repeat again i will call arjun and speak u may leave pari leaves the room
geet turns around the room and collects the broken cell phone pieces and gives maan an angry glare and says see what u did now i have to buy i new cell i have all my contacts in this phone what will i do i have so much of work oh good
maan:dont worry i will get it fixed and also will get the contacts copied into ur new phone now can u please smile
geet:still looks confused and gets tensed and sits down thinking and calls pari and hands over her phone and asks to get all the things done fast and tells her to cancel her meeting pari informs that arjun called again and is insiting on talking with u and leaves
geet says mrkhurana can i use ur phone once and takes the land line maan is now seriously pissed of one she is adressing him as mrkhurana and two she is making call to that stupid arjun
geet:calls arjun and by mistake presses the speaker as soon as he lifts the call she speaks
arjun: shoutedwhat is this geet u suddenly cut the call and didnt call back i am trying on ur mobile but its coming switched off ur not attending the calls from pari what happened to u are u ok did any one do anything plz speak i am so tensed
geet:uff give me a break if u ask so many questions at a time how cani answer ok coming to ur questions i am fine actually my phone slipped and is broken so i couldnt call u second how will anything happen to me when u kept so much of security with me third i was in a meeting so i asked pari not to disturb me now are all ur questions answered or still u have any questions left
all the while maan is just staring at her as if she is some devil
arjun:ok ok sweety i was just tensed u know me actually its the 1st time na u went somewhere without me behind u na thats it and what were u saying about the cm
geet:ya ya i knw this os the first time i am coming out without u after i meet u anyways that stupid cm is again trying to set me uo with his son for marrige he is damn intelligent i just dont understand what to do i have clearly told him i am not intrested in the match i even told him that i am commited but his pace is not at all changing he is irritating a lot he even thaught ur my bf i also didnt say anything about it even then he is head on heels trying to get me married to his son he even called up today and invited me for dinner i asked pari to inform him that i am not feeling well and i cannot attend he also taught the same bcoz he dont know i am in delhi not only him but no one knows i am here bcoz u are not tere na u bacame my shadow these days so they will think i am inn mumbai only
maan:so many things are running in his mind he is not able to understand the relationship between geet and arjun he is tensed he even started thinking that arjun is her bf thats why she is behaving with me so professionally she didnt even once called me maan as she usually calls all the things were just eating hi up he couldnt make head and tail of it(self thought)
arjun:i know geet its all weird u going like that without me dont worry everything will be fine i even doubled the security they will follow u every where and dont think about the cm we will manage any how the elections are close and he is to loose so he cant touch us then the elections start in 2 months thats the reason he is in so much of hurry he wants financial support he is acting smart he thaught by making u bahu of him he can acheive financial support but its ok we will manage
geet:ok u are managing everything there na how is baby is she fine
maan:he became crazy now he is thinking what baby whose baby is its geets baby all kind of stuff is in his brain (self thought)
arjun:baby is fine i guess its missing u
geet:i am missing it to how is nt isher health fine
arjun:ya everything is fine she is also well and is here only talk with her
nt:hai geet
geet:hi nt how r u sorry i am not beside u in the mrng
nt:its ok geet
geet:make the baby talk with me na
nt:i cant guarantee but i will try
geet:i am able to hear some cry is that of baby omg its so nice to hear from it i am seriously missing it ask her what can her aunt geet get for her
maan:aunt geet is aunt of the baby nt is the mother then who is arjun(self thought)
nt:aunt from when did u become aunt
geet:i have to give some relationship to baby na so i became her aunt u will be my sister and ur husband arjun my friend come my cheif of security will be my bestest friend and also my jeeju because i dont want to call him bro its weird u know to call him that knowing that he once had a crush in me dont beat me i am speaking the truth i also know that he is deeply in love with u now
arjun:for gods sake geet i had some infatuation towars u that to befor 5yrs not know i had that because i dont know about u at all then know i even feel stupid to have that
maan:he is so much relived listening to all this and feels happy and peace at heart that geet didnt move on and is still waiting like she told and even feels guilty to think like that about geet even for some time and feels lime killing himself for that but again remembers geets words that he has no right on himself and only she has that and smiles for himself(self thought)
geet:ok ok and plz plan some vaccation for a month only for me u are not accompaning me i want to be alone for sometime and make sure u will plan it during the election time and i also want no one to know about it i myself dont want to know abput the palce untill i board my flight and i dont want any further discussions regarding this matter thats my final decision and i am going alone make it clear in ur head
arjun:ok i will think about it and bye the media has left the place i just got info from the guards i have appointed leave right know before that media starts coming bye
geet:bye
maan:oh so she will leave now but i dont want her to leave(self thought)
geet:oh iam sorry mrkhurana i have taken so long with that call of mine i will leave now bye and stands to walk
maan:geet geet stop dont leave plz come with me for daadima's sake atleast if not for me
geet:ok i will come in the evening spend sometime with her and will leave to the airport i will come at 6 and starts to leave
maan:stops her again and asks why not know geet u didnt have luch na we will have together and then will go home
geet:no mrkhurana look at my dress i am wearing an suit i dont want to go infront of daadi in this attire i will come in the evening and comong to luch i am not really hungry
maan:i am hungry geet atleast give me some company and why r u calling me mrkhurana why arent u calling me maan
geet:sorry mrkhurana i cant i dont want tocall like that and i am coming home only for daadi's sake otherwise i wouldnt have come and for now lets leave u have ur luch and then i will leave to my hotel
maan:still thinking someting deep and decides to keep quiet for tome being and says ok geet lets leave
maan and geet have luncg together and leave to there respective places
maan come home and informs daadi about geet and excitedly tell about her acheivements in business telling how much he was suprised listening to her presentaion and spell bound by her aura around others and even tells about arjuns and cm part of her covo her professionalism each and everything with so much of spark in his eyes while talling he even complaints about her calling him mrkhurana instead of maan

daadi is silently listening to all this and was very happy with there meeting her success and everything she acutaully heard it from adi but listening from his words were completly differnrent she actually thaught of a plan and decided to make geet stay tonight at mansion by playing a small drama after geets arrival saying that she is not feeling well so on
time passed by and it was time for arrival of geet atlast to the mansion she dressed up in her white and marron saree ans wore single line daimond studded necklae and elegently walked inside the mansion she asked her guards not to eeven enter near the premises and asked all the staff to stay at hotel and directly come to the airport as she will come there only
maan saw her walk into the mansion and was mesmerised with her beauty and unintensionally stared walking towards her direstion came infront of her and gave a passionate hug and whispered near her ear that she looked beautiful today geet was lost in him same tome daadi came and disturbed there moment and hugged get with so much of affection and had tears in her eyes seeing her after so many yrs and promised to herself that she will never let the angel leave maans life again
precap:dadi serious whay
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Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

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4 years ago

Arhi FF: Destiny Games T6 (Chapter 23.2 Updated 3rd Mar 2025)

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

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Posted by: desidillse

11 months ago

RiKara SS : Safed (chapter 7 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello readers! I am Aditi, I have been writing stories here but this is my first short story on RiKara. Alike, you all have been...

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1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3 (90%)

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Posted by: desidillse

5 months ago

NehTaj SS ~ Written In The Stars (chapter 3 updated) NehTaj SS ~ Written In The Stars (chapter 3 updated)

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