Milan - SS of MAANEET Thread 1 - Page 34

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Chapter 14

Maan understood her answer and opened the shell in the centre of the message to take out the beautiful diamond ring. He went down on one knee and slowly placed the ring in her hand. He got up and she engulfed him in a bear hug, tears of happiness rolling for her eyes. Various colorful fishes surrounded them, engulfing them, as if shielding their love from the bad eyes of this world. In her dreams, she had always dreamt to a prince coming for her and today all her dreams had come true. He had come and just swept her off her feet.

Maan was also over the moon, that his princess had accepted their love. After what seemed like eternity they broke from the hug and walked back, hugging each other side-ways, to the Submarine under the cover of the amazing sea creatures, some following them, some surrounding them and some awaiting them. The ride back to the yacht was the most memorable for them as they had finally given a name to their unknown feeling, they sat there lost in each other, remembering all the lovely moments they had spent together. Soon they reached the yacht. Maan helped Geet to climb back and they went to the cabin to change. After changing they came back to the deck. Maan played music in the back ground and asked for Geet's hand to dance.

Maan: Can I have the pleasure of a dance with my princess.

Geet blushed and nodded for a yes.

Tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Ishq mazhab, ishq meri zaat ban gayi

Maan took her hand and placed it over his shoulder, while he moved his hand and kept it over her bare waist. Shivers ran down Geet's body and she blushed hard.

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe

He took her other hand in his hand and softly started swaying with the music. The song was depicting what they were feeling for each other

Ho tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Sapne teri chahaton ke, sapne teri chahaton ke
Dekhti hoon ab kayee
Din hai sona aur chaandi raat ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi

They kept swaying with the wind blowing. He held her hand and rotated her softly 3 times before jerking her towards him. Geet got surprised by his sudden jerk and clutched his jacket to stabilize herself.

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe

He hugged her tightly as if never to let her go. She also hugged him back with equal fervor.

Chahaton ka mazaa, faasalon mein nahin
Aa chupa loon tumhe hauslon mein kahin
Sab se upar likha, hai tere naam ko
Khwaishon se jude silsilon mein kahin

They slowly swayed with the wind in their hug.

Khwaishein milne ki tumse, khwaishein milne ki tumse
Roz hoti hai nayi
Mere dil ki jeet meri maat ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi

Maan gently broke the hug. Geet's eyes were closed and he softly kissed her eyes one by one, then he moved to her nose and kissed it. He then hovered his lips near hers, touching them ever so slightly. Geet was waiting for him to continue but when he didn't, she opened her eyes to look at him. His eyes were seeking her permission to continue, she blinked her eyes giving him the permission.

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe

He softly captured her lips sending shivers down both of them. Her lips tasted like honey, they were so sweet and as soft as a rose petal. They both got lost in their first kiss. She slightly parted her lips, giving him more access and slowly their kiss deepened and was full of passion giving them heavenly pleasure. It started raining as if heavens wanted to join in their moment together. They continued with increased pleasure getting drenched. They broke panting, both were completely breathless. Maan realized that Geet might catch cold getting drenched like this, he held her wrist tightly and dashed towards the cabin. Once they reached inside, Geet burst into laughter looking at their condition, how lost they were that they didn't even realized getting wet and Maan was lost in her innocent laughter. He slowly moved towards her in a trance and tucked her loose hair brushing her cheek very slightly. Geet was stunned at the sudden contact and stiffened, bringing Maan back to reality.

Maan (embarrassed, clearing his throat): hmmm. Geet change kar lo otherwise you will catch cold.

Geet (blushing red): hmm, aap bhi.

Maan: hmm.

Geet changed in the bathroom, while Maan changed in the cabin. Geet came back in the room yawning.

Maan: Chalo Geet, so jayo, it is very late.

Maan tugged her in the blanket.

Geet: app bhi so jayo, par…(she stopped, she didn't know how to ask where he will be sleep, since there was only one bed, it was not that she didn't trust him but still they weren't married…)

Maan understood her concern and knew that she won't be able to voice it.

Maan: You sleep here, I will sleep in the other room. Good night.

Geet (smiled): Good night. (She thanked her Babaji that Maan understood her silence as well)

Precap: Maan: What happened Geet, why are you crying…

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