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Posted: 14 years ago
part-12
it was around 7 p.m in d evening...

pia was sitting ond bed n checking out d clothes which jamie brought for her...n abhay was looking for a shirt n jeans in his wardrobe
pia(thought) wat should i wear...??
abhay turned around n looked at her confused xpressions...
abhay came n sat infront of her...
pia looked at abhay n then again at her clothes
abhay- wats wrong pia??
pia- abhay i don't knw wat should i wear...i m so confused
abhay smiled looking at her, she was acting like a small girl who was totally in mess coz of her dresses
abhay pointed towards a jeans n beautiful top...wat abt this pia??
pia(looking a bit confused n uncomfortable)
abhay- wats wrong u don't like this
pia- no abhay its not like, u knw ummm i mean i just don't feel comfortable wearning jeans nw these days...i mean
abhay(got it) n he took out a white capery of light cloth n beautiful purple top
n this time she looked quite satisfied...
abhay- nw go n get ready...
pia gave a quick hug to abhay n said thanx...
abhay- nytime love...she left for washroom n abhay smiled n then collected her clothes frm d bed n kept them craefully in his wardrobe making space for her clothes also..
pia came out of the washroom...she was looking cute...n her beautiful fragnance was there bt she was struggling wid something, abhay noticed ..n came towards her...
he saw dat clasp of her chain got stuck somewhere in her hair...
abhay stood infront of her...
abhay- let me do this
pia looked at him...she knew dat his closeness..affects her so much, her senses stop working each n evry time he comes close to her...
abhay gave his chrippy smile...although he was nt reading her thoughts bt her lost xpressions n eyes were saying much more than her words
abhay turned her around , he was facing pia's back ...n he was trying to take out chain's clasp frm her hair..his cold fingers were continuously touching pia's soft skin...abhay was totally aware of her reactions n smiling ...
abhay- pia wat wl u give me if i take out this clasp frm ur hair
pia- wat?? u r so mean abhay ,just for taking out a clasp u want something
abhay- pia i m a business man n i never enter into ny deal without my personal benefit
pia- abhay u r totally mad
abhay- yes i m totally mad for u , he said this while touching his lips to her ear...n pia clenched her fist tightly n said abhay plsss
abhay turned her n her eyes still closed in anticipation...she was feeling his cold breath on her face..abhay touched his lips through his thumb.n..thought...gosh pia u r d most beautiful n innocent gal i av ever seen i n my life, u r GOD's wonderful creation, everything is so perfect abt u n i don't knw how am i controlling myself of nt being too close to u...its impossible (while moving his thumb softly on her lower lip), bt i knw i need to give a proper begining to this thing, i cn't hurt u nyhow neither emotionally nor physically...
he came out his thoughts when he felt her hot breathe on his cold face...he controlled himself n quickly placed a quick peek on her cheek
n left for bathroom
at d door of washroom(holding a smirk)- he said ...pia i av just taken interest n principal amount still left v wl deal wid it later on...
pia opened her eyes n her jaw dropped hearing his words...
pia- abhay i m gonna kill u
abhay- oh pia i m already dead...he winked at her...n closed d door
pia was feeling shy, quite angry...he always does this to her
pia to herself- u need a psychiatrist..n she smiled ,bt its all dat i m love him like a crazy...she said while holding her chain
...
pia n abhay at french town inn near abt 8.45 p.m
a place was already reserved for four of them...pia was reli happy n feeling wowww...d place was reli beautiful, ambiance was mesmerizing...pia has never been their earlier coz it was quite far away frm her home...it was a peaceful place, lightning was very dim n beautiful, chandeliers were reli classy... in a whole ambiance of warmth, happiness,coziness n relaxation all was there...
pia - abhay its beautiful...
abhay smiled while making her sit comfortably
abhay came n sit infront of her while taking her both hands in her...
pia- abhay cn u talk to angel nw...i love when u both talk...its different,...
abhay-n i feel like i m blessed when i talk to my daughter n it just because of u...i love u n he kissed her both hands...
pia- i love u too abhay
abhay connected himself to angel...
pia- abhay cn i also hear her...
abhay smiled , bt then he closed his eyes in worry for sometime
pia- wats wrong abhay, angel is fine na...??
abhay- pia , i cn make u talk to angel, bt i need to b very craefull. coz mathali cn feel ur presence through my thoughts...so first let me block my thoughts for sometime frm her, bt it wl b just for few mins...i cn't do this longer
pia's face dropped n she asked- abhay angel wl b fine na, let it be...i m nt going to talk her...u do...i wl b happy
abhay felt bad...he held her hands firmly n said pia connect urself to me...
pia looked into his eyes...n he just blinked his eyes n said softly - do it...
pia closed her eyes n connected herself to abhay...
n abhay got connected to both his angel n pia
abhay-angelll..
angel(in her baby voice)- dad...
pia felt out of d world hearing her angel voice for d first time, it was magical...
abhay- angel, listen someone is here wid me wanna talk to u
angel- who daddy
pia - angel...(pia said holding her breathe)..its me
angel(completed her sentence)- mommy...its u i knw...u r my mommy
pia was feeling heavenly hearing her angel calling her mommy
pia- how r u my bacha...
angel- mommy u r d best mommy in d world n daddy is d best daddy...bt i m sorry mommy i hurt u so many times
pia(felt woww n bad both at d same time) no my angel...u never hurt me, u cn't...so don't feel bad at all...u r my strength angel...how cn u hurt me,ur mommy n daddy both love u...
n suddenly pia saw an image, her image...an evil one...n d image said - hi pia
pia opened her eyes wid jerk n felt suffocated...she broke her connection wid abhay
abhay was shocked
pia- abhay she was there, i heard her, i saw her...abhay, mathali...
abhay himself was confused bt he controlled himself n taking pia's hand in his n he said pia calm down...look at me...i m wid u...she cn't do nything...av faith in me
pia looked at him wid teary eyes n nodded her head in yes ...
pia- abhay angel...
abhay- she is fine...don't worry...
abhay-pia u trust me na
pia- hmmm
abhay- then believe me angel is totally fine
pia- i knw abhay till d time u r wid v both r in d safest place of this whole universe
abhay- thanx pia for trusting me so much
pia- u r my evrything abhay...
after few minutes jamie n kabir arrived there when they saw abhay and pia lost somehwere in their own world
akbir- ahem ahme...love birds...
abhay-pia saw them n come out their thoughts...
abhay- hi kabir, hi jamie
kabir- dude r u sure u want us to b here wid u
pia- KRR...r u sure u want to join us...jamie n u
kabir- chipmunk...i m fully besharam...if i av to romance wid jamie, i cn do dat publically...think abt u n abhay while taking his place..jamie also came n took her seat...
pia-kr u r totally besharam...abhay smiled n feeling relaxed dat pia has forgot mathali's thing for sometime
kabir- yup chipmunk i m totally a public person
jamie- n yes i m nt dating this public person...so stop dragging me b/w ur fights
kabir- ouch jamie u broke my heart...i av arranged this whole dinner for u..n u
abhay- pia looked at kabir..like they were saying liar
bt kabir made puppy like faces...
abhay turned towards jamie- jamie u should consider this thing yaar...atleast he is trying..
jamie- abhay u cn't lie to me...so pls..
pia- guys i m hungry pls...
kabir- gosh abhay i m sure u gonna loose ur whole bank balance wid in few months...look at her..she eats like a manic nw these days...
pia- u knw wat KR nw u r gonna pay d bill n if u wl nt then i wl tel uncle n aunty abt ur 20th gf remember
kabir- no chipmunk..dats nt fair...
pia- everything is fair in love n war...n this is third world war...got it
kabir- ok ok chipmunk i m taking my words back...pls don't drag mom, dad n vicky in all this
pia(while showing a bit attitude)- ok...so it means u av lost d battle...
kabir(while folding his both hands infront of her).yeee..happy nw...plss guys order something...i av lost all my energy while fighting wid her...
pia-ya as if, i knw very well how foody u r
kabir- just look at urself chipmunk first
abhay n jamie- together...guys stop it
kabir n pia looked at each other n laughed alittle
after some time they had their dinner
they were just sitting n aving a good talk...kabir was cracking jokes abt his gf's n jamie was quite jealous n it was visible on her face
abhay- seems like something is burning...jamie came out of her thoughts hearing his words
jamie gave killing looks to abhay
abhay n pia gave a crooked smile to jamie...
pia- hey guys wat abt ur date...??
jamie- i m nt going nywhere wid him
kabir- dats nt fair jamie, u promised me
jamie- oh really, bt i don't think so u wl b able to take out free time frm ur schedule of dating other gals on new jersey
kabir was quite surprised d way jamie said dat
kabir- ok , i promise MISS JAMIE , dat v r going on our first date tomorrow ...
jamie- bt
pia- stop it jamie, look how cutely he is asking for a date
jamie- dats nt wat v call asking, dis is ordering pia
kabir- moved his hand infront of jamie n asked her...miss jamie would u like to come on a date wid me...??
jamie finally smiled, melting under his puppy looks...
n said yes...
abhay- congrats guys...av fun...n he winked at kabir n said al d best dude
kabir- thanx , i need it
abhay- ok guys i av also something to say...
pia, kabir n jamie...looked at him wid questioning eyes
abahy moved frm his chair n went towards pia, he bent down infront of her n sitting on his knees, he took a beautiful box, covered wid purple valvet cloth, he opened it n brought infront of pia, there was a beautiful diamond ring in it...he said
" MISS PIA JAISWAL...today i m confessing this , dat i m head over hells in love wid u, u r my angel, my love n i would like to spend nt only this life bt my every life wid u, wll u marry me...
kabir n jamie both were totally surprised n happy...
n pia...she was in her own heaven...she was going through d most beautiful feeling of her life, her love , her abhay was proposing her, everything was so perfect, she wanted to say so many things, bt words were nt coming out of her mouth...she was looking at him, it was like a dream for her n dat was her best dream, she didn't want dat moment to get ended...
pia nodded her head in yes n took out her left hand n abhay slipped dat ring in her finger..n they both hugged each other tightly
pia- i love u abhay
abhay- i luv u too pia...
kabir realised dat how much abhay loves pia n jamie was more than happy for both of her friends...
kabir saw jamie n noticed her twinkling eyes, which were lying on abhay-pia...
n an unknown smile got crepted on his face...
abhay-pia was in their own perfect world...
when jamie said- hey guys, v r also here...
abhay-pia looked at them..n smiled
jamie while hugging abhay -hey congrats ...i m so happy for both of u...
n kabir came to pia- hey chipmunk...this occasion demands a tight hug...right
pia just hugged him tightly...
kabir congratulated abhay n jamie to pia n they both left
pia looked at abhay wid all love in her eyes n abhay without giving a second thought he brought her closer n placed his lips on her n pia without ny reluctance , she accepted his move whole heartdly...
...
after some time abhay n pia both was driving back to home
pia was happy n dat was visible in on her face, her eyes were twinkling...
pia- while placing her head on her shoulder- thanx alot abhay ...
abhay(he understood bt still asked)- for wat pia??
pia(while looking towards d ring in her finger)- for making this day, d best day of my life
abhay- pia u doesn't need to thanx me, coz watever i av done, its for me!!
pia looked at him in a confused manner
abhay- i cn't stay away frm u pia nymore, u r mine...just mine...how cn i stay away frm life n i want to start our journey in a new way, a fresh one without any pain n guilt, just love n only love
pia(while showing her best smile)- i love u abhay...
abhay- i love u too love n u knw i av a gift for u on d back seat...
pia turned around n saw a box was kept there n it was wrapped wid a beautiful paper
pia while picking it up, wowww..wat is in this?/
abhay- open it...
pia opened it like an xcited child n found a box of chocolates
pia- chocolatesss...awww abhay...this is for me
abhay- no, not at all, this is for my angel...u knw i promised her
pia-n wat abt her mommy??(she said while pouting)
abhay- i av something more sweet than this for her mommy
pia(while rolling her eyes)- abhay do all vampires r as naughty as u or u r d xceptional one
abhay(holding pride in his voice)- ofcourse pia i m d only one , coz i m xceptionally hot, cute, superb charming n d most important thing dat u cn't resist me n if u want, i cn prove it...
pia while getting straight on her seat...no, u reli don't need to prove to nything...i got it
abhay laughed...n pia was trying avoid further talk on this topic
...
after sometime they reached home...n they made themselves comfortable on d bed after changing in their night dresses...pia was wearing a night suit ,blue cute pyjamas n sphegetti on it...n abhay was wearing a simple loose black t-shirt n lowers...
abhay was sitting n pia's head on his shoulder n their fingers were entiwned in each others
abhay- pia r u tired??
pia- nooo
abhay- ok then lets come wid me...
pia didn't ask nything...
abhay took pia to a room...n he switched on d light
n pia noticed a home theatre, a music system there, 1000 of CDs were lying there in a shelf..., n some matressess were there for sitting, covered wid beautiful sheets...it was perfect like nyother thing in abhay's home
pia looked at abhay
abhay- wait for a sec...he went n turned on d music system...n came back n going down infront of her...he took out his hand n asked would u like to dance wid me pia
pia was reli feeling wowww bt making sad face she said- abhay i cn't dance...i m very bad in it
abhay smiled n took her hand in his ...he stood up n pulled her close to him while placing his one hand on her waist firmly n made her place her one hand on his shoulder...pia was quite nervous , abhay took her another hand in his...n made her stand on his feet...
pia- abhay i cn't
abhay- look at me pia...
n d song started playing "you took my heart away"
(guys just check out this vm...i made it long time back, bt thought of using it here, i m nt describing d whole dance sequence, i m sure this vm will do my work))
abhay n pia both were lost in each other...after sometime pia kept her head on abhay's shoulder...
they were kept standing there , they didn't realise d song got ended...they were just living their moment...
Edited by heena_mehta - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Edited by heena_mehta - 14 years ago
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Sorry bohut der tak reserved rakhna pada...chalo acchaa hai tumne acche bacche ke tarah update ker di...badna me aur Shrish tumhe bohut tan karte 😆
now coming to the update... it was awsomee as usual I was expecting that Abhay would propose Piya in the next chapter so thanks a lot for making my wish come true 😆
I loved it when Abhay said: "pia i m a business man n i never enter into ny deal without my personal benefit" he's really cute when he's naughty 😳
Just love the Kabir-Jamie part...knew they were another couple in the making. does kabir know Jamie is a vampy? I guess not...twist to com huh!! and the biggest danger Maithli agayi... 😕 so some danger in future is coming? i hope atleast the wedding will take place safely b4 she comes 🤔
coming to my fav part: proposal and dance..the vm was really romantic so as the song Heena...loved it. it was dreamy 😳
update soon---love u - 🤗
Edited by princess_xeelan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow...ausum...loved it..abhay and pia are sooo cute...and ur vm is beautiful
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Awesome update... Abhay proposed Piya was gr8... Waiting for their marriage... Kapi share a gr8 bond... Continue soon... thanks for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
so romantic
loved it yr
waiting for the next one
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
the update was just awesome...
yaar...u r so gud with ur writing...

i just loved it..when abhay proposed pia...u have defined their feelings so well...They are madly in love and that is so cute..
abhay-pia-angel convo was superb...i'm so happy for pia & abhay...they both deserve happiness...but MAITHLI...is she back? will she try to harm pia?? i hope abhay is always there for her...

well...looks like not only jamie but KABEERA baby is also falling for her...
the song was perfect..I love the song choice..i cud imagine the dance...wow!!

P.S: ur vm is superb...amazing choice of song and scenes...
thanks for the pm..
continue sooon...tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update. but now maithali knows about Angel, so trouble coming up? hunh?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Ohh heena I m late 2 day & I m sad coz of this😭

But wow I loved ur update.Abhay finally proposed Pia & I m so happy now.I was waiting 4 this so much.Loved it Abhay teasing Pia.Pia feeling shy everything was perfect.Angel,Abhay,Pia convo was superb.I guess metz is near.Love Abhiya dance sequence guess wht I was thinking abt Abhiya dance in my FF too😆😆
Luv u🤗
Edited by cuteshrishti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely n romantic!awesome.n thanx 4 da pm.

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