'love N deception'- abhay-piya FF updated pg-143 - Page 111

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan

First of all, I need a inhaler after reading the last para ☺️ hehehehe😆😆


Ok... now starting from the beginning...will come to last para again 😉
Ohh no.. why would Abhay leave Piya and want her to stay with some other family does that mean sepration time coming soonvery soon, coz i cn't write more of romance, 😆😆,enough of fat strange feel which i get while writing those choccie choo scenes😆😆 I can understand he's concerned about Piya's health and Angel and Piya is concerned abt him and their child... i hope abhay finds a way to keep them safe soon dat way costs him very high😉... and the ring... i hope Abhay find a way to get it from Metz.. 😕 nt so easily, dat ring is her ace of spades😉
Superb Heenu...how come do you describe the places so well? I can actually visualize it infront of my eyes dear 😍 thankuuu so much hun 😊😊😊
The way u described abt Ishar river and the views was outstanding
and angel convo with parents is as usually adorable... u seriously have a heart of a mother... i guess all women have but u describe relationship of child and parents so beautifully... i love it yaar ❤️ glad u loved n i m humbled tanz u said such lovely words!!! thankuu so much
Now I know if Abhay needs to leave Piya for a while..Angel can take care of her mother 😃 Abhay taking care of Piya is as usually amazing

Now coming to the breathtaking part ☺️ Ufff...why do u write such things which I have to imagine 🤣 so dat u cn understand my condition😆😆
Kya karu...dimaag pe kaboo nehi hota 🤣 the shower scene was superrr hawwwt and passionate ☺️ gave me goosebumps...hehehehehe
now i will tell u another incident of our 'dil-ka-connection'... 😉 I was writing till the end of time when I recevied ur Pm and started reading... i just wrote a swimming pool scene... which obviously includes romance and water... and I laughed hard... gosh again we match 😆 😉 tera mujhse hai phele ka nata koi, yuhun nahi dil lubhta koi, jaane tu ya janne na😉😉😆 n hun i m dying to read this, nw post d nxt half yaar, inteeah hogayi inteezar ki😉
now I gave u SPOILER but I wont be able to update b4 thur night so sry u gotta w8 😛
Overall...superbbb as usual 👏 thankuuu so much tanz for ur wonderful comments
luv u loads ❤️ 🤗 luv u too😳🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta

Awesome update

Loved it
thankuuu so much dear n glad u loved it
I hope Piya will be fine
Abhay and angel were cute as always
Continue soon sure wl try
Thanks for the PM ma pleasure😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Sorry for the late comment. .
I wasnt well. .

Awesome update , heena
loved it
OMG . . ME "faints" comes back to senses"...iam blushing here and too shy to comment
i am still in a bit of daze after that most romantic morning they shared. .hehe
Beautifully written. .
Angel n abhay convo was super sweet. . I hope, abhay doesnt take any stupid decision
thanks 4 d pm
continue soon
tc
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

Heena it was hot aww i was lost while reading this chap the convo between abhay angel was so cute and adorablethankuuu so much dear 😊😊 and abhay will leave pia no*sob*k now the last bathroom romance gosh abhay and pia getting wet under shower and abhay removing her bath robe and kissing her hot hot and quite romantic heheheheheh thanx for pm ma pleasure😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pallavisarkar

thnx heena for d lovely pm ma pleasure😊

wow very romantic really loved it glad u loved it
but wat decision has abhay made for this u av to wait n watch
cant wait for next updt wl try to update soon
cont soon sure wl try😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow nice story plz update soon😊 thankuuu so much dear n wl try to update soon😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: I-love-Roses

Hey Heena! What a cute n romantic update.thanx shalini But why is Abhay thinking of leaving her and etcu wl come to knw abt this thing soon.? Angel's conversation was cute glad u found it cute! And last part... Too hot to handlehehehehe, bt u urself very good in handling this hotness stuff😉! Thanks for the PMmy pleasure😊.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: piya_abhay_love

awesome update... love abhiya moment..thankuuu so much dear n glad u loved those moments.

thanx for pm,ma pleasure😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ANTARA-2244

AbhIya romance!!! ❤️😍

Plz don't separate AbhIya!! Abhay shudn't go back to his 'Tyaagibaba' mode!! 😆

Thanx for da PM dearie! 🤗

thankuuu so much dear for ur lovely comments😊
abt separation thing, u need to wait n watch 😉
n sending pm is my pleasure😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

awesome update👏👏👏 thanx shivani
abhiya bathroom romance was super hot
angel abhay convo was gr8

glad u found it gr8 😊😊
but i m really tnsed now how can abhay even think of leaving pia
how will she live without him😭😭 mathali won't let him get dat ring so easily😉, he has to pay !!!
please don't separate abhiya
remember u promised me that no love triangles from now there wl b no love traingle, bt ofcourse there wl b love cum frndship b/w d trio, there was love in past bt present things r going to b different😉
keep ur promise yaar i wl bt wid some twist n turns😉
anyway thanks for pm ma pleasure and update soon sure wl try

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