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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: moonlitnisha

Nice Part tahnx dear😊and Thanx for the PMma pleasure am Happy for the new love birds and ABHIYA Romance seems to be on full speed😊...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: quarkinsen

hey sear thnx for the p

ma pleasure😊
love the abhiya track and kabir tooo
glad u loved it

waiting for the next update dearl try to post soon😊

keep smiling u too

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: priya.1

heena the update is awsome,fabulous, fantastic & etc.thankuuu so much dear for ur wonderful words.. plz add to ur PM listsure dear😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Eowyn

Newest addition to your long list of readers Heena...welcome to my thread nidha😊

Will catch up asap😳

Edited...

Firstly the updates so far are...
Fanbulous, Fantastic,Awesome,Superb,Brilliant etc etc etc...awww dear thankuuu so much for ur wonderful words..
Can't remember more words than this...i m humbled u said this😊
The most fabulous part about your updates is the romantic scenes..awww, bt nw i think i m done wid their romance😆😆, enough for me to write😆😆
AbhIya are just super romantic...😉
Abhay is too hot and naughty to handle...
Jamie and Kabir make a really good pair...
Thank you Heena for getting rid of David...good riddanceeven i cn't handle so much of negativity at one time
But can't forget that Metz is still at large and a wolfie is still to enter...hope the wolfie is positiveya he wl b, nt much in idea of bringing one more negative character
Kudos Heena for this fantabulous work⭐️👏 thanx once again nidha, u r too kind hun
Do PM me next time if you have a PM list ya sure, my pleasure😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
part-21
After finishing with her food, abhay made pia to av some sleep, although she was nt much interested in d idea of sleeping, bt abhy was adamant to dat!!! He put some more wooden logs in d fire place, to make dat place comfortable for her!!!

Abhay made himself comfortable nxt to her, he knew pia wl never say or accept bt frm past few weeks, her pregnancy took a sudden toll, her swollen thighs, her growing taste buds (which were nt so normal this time), angel's growing size n weight both were pushing pia's human body to edge, angel's strength was also an issue of concern for him n also some hidden truths which were still need to come out wid passing weeks!!

Abhay while massaging her temple, he said to himself- pia i don't knw how wl u react on my decision of going back to india n above dat how wl u react , when u wl come to knw abt his whole truth n my decision of choosing him for u , bt i av to coz mathali wl never pass dat ring to u so easily

N i need someone to b there for u, when i wl b all away n i knw he is d one who cn take care of u behind me n u av to accept him, u wl always b safe wid him!!! He kissed her temple!!! I love u pia!!

...

Pia came out of her deep sleep, feeling those cold lips on her skin n she smiled a little said- love u too!!

Abhay bringing back his smile asked- dreaming abt me???

Pia-dreaming abt our dream, our angel in our hands, u knw wat abhay i saw her, her eyes n smile were just like u, i saw my perfect family, i lived my future in my dream , she closed her eyes n a tear rolled down her cheek!! Abhay got worried seeing those tears, while taking her hand in his, abhay said- pia!!

Pia opened her teary eyes- my dream wl turn true na abhay???

Abhay saw those disturbed n fear stricken eyes, he himself was confused n worried!!! Pia noticed those apprehensive looks on his face n said- i knw u r also nt sure, bt promise me if a situation wl come where u av to chose b/w my life n my love for u, u wl chose my love, coz i won;t b able to survive widout u n angel!! Promise me abhay, u wl chose angel n my love above my life, promise me!!! She said holding dat pain n fear in her baby brown chocolate eyes!!

Abhay got shocked at her words, he was nt ready for this, atleast nt nw, he was trying his best to make this time , most memorable for her, bt pia's fear which she was holding deep down her heart, was making things difficult for him!!

Abhay while kissing her forehead- u wl av a perfect family pia!! I promise!!

Pia smiled a little b/w her tears n abhay hugged her n said himself- u wl av a perfect family pia, bt wid me or someone else i dunno!!!

...

Abhay made pia sit , while supporting her back wid pillow!! Abhay saw pia was feeling dizzy!!

Abhay-pia wats wrong, r u feeling dizzy!!

Pia wid her flickering eye lids – abhay i m feeling suffocated dunno y, while trying to get back her breath she asked, cn v go outside for sometime??

...

Abhay –pia , standing outside their hotel, when pia said, dat they wl walk !! abhay was nt at all amused by her idea of walking, she was nt in a condition to walk , bt then her prefect solution made him agree n d solution was , dat he wl carry her all d way to their destination after their 15 minutes of walk n he also took a promise frm her , dat she won't back out frm her idea later on!!

Abhay-pia while walking down d street, holding their hands, they were looking perfect, pia's other hand on her lower abdomen , she was supporting herself while walking, d moment couldn't b more perfect!!

While waking abhay suddenly came infront of her n while blocking her way , he showed her his watch n said- 15 minutes over!! Pia gulped her saliva looking at him n then at her surrounding, whole area was crowded, she said- abhay lets call a taxi!! Abhay while giving a smirk to him, he said- i told u, dat u won't b able to back out n while completing his sentence he picked her in his strong arms !!!

Pia smiled shyly !!! she asked- where v r going abhay n he replied- the ISAR river, which flows through munich and splits d city in two halves!!

She was admiring d beauty n peace of d city by being in her heaven, in abhay;s arms, soon they reached to their destination, ISHAR river!! It was quite inside frm d main city, pathway to d river was covered wid snow, white tress b n snow covered mountains were an addition to d beautiful scenery of munich!!

Soon they reached to d bank of d river, it was a tourist place bt still less crowded n peacefull!! There was proper sitting arrangement done by Austria govt. there were stone made seats were there, abhay took pia to d one of d seats n made her sit comfortably!!

Pia's cheek were already turned scarlet red due to d smiling faces she saw all her way to their destination!! Abhay was amused by her cute human reactions, they were together frm past so many months, bt pia's shyness, her smile, her nervousness,all were still d same which abhay saw n felt when they met first time!!!

Abhay took his seat nxt to her n pia while entwining her fingers in his cold one's , she kept her head on his shoulder n said- thanx abhay for everything!!! Life cn never b more beautiful than this for me!!!

Abhay while smiling said- for me also pia!!!

They both kept admiring d flow of d river , stars in d sky were appearing like pearls on d still water of d river, due to very low temperature , thin ice sheets were also floating there!!

Soon abhay realised dat pia's body temperature was rising, he looked at her she was all smiling n cherishing their perfect moment!!! Abhay touched her forehead , pia looked confused n asked – abhay!!

Abhay- pia r u feeling cold??

Pia- no, instead of dat i m feeling comfortable frm past few minutes, its like my body is adjusting wid d surroundings n i m nt at all feeling cold, dat shivrish feeling has suddenly gone!!!

Abhay was looking at him , he was trying to understand dis new change in her body- pia this is nt normal for a human body, r u getting me??

Pia got worried n asked- abhay is angel fine??

Abhay while creasing her cheek, pia u don't need to b worried abt her, i m sure she must b controlling ur body temperature!!!

Abhay connected himself to angel, as soon angel heard her dad's voice, she kicked her mom in xcitement!!

Pia –ouch!!!

Abhay- angel, my princess be carefull!!

Angel- dad i m sooo happy!!!

Abhay- n wats d reason of her happiness??

Angel- dunno, bt its all mom is feeling so, so am i!!!

Abhay-u knw y ur mom is so happy angel, while winking at pia!!

Angel- y so dad??

Abhay- coz ur mom is all alone wid ur dad!!

Pia – abhayyy!!!!

Angel-bt dad how cn b she alone, i m always here wid her!!

Abhay smiled at her daughter's words- i knw my princess, she is happy coz u r inside her!!!

Angel-bt dad mom was so feeling so cold today??

Abhay- my angel, this new place is so cold , dats y, bt u tell me, did u do something coz nw ur mom is nt feeling at all cold!!!

Angel- i dunno xactly dad, bt i found her body temperature quite low n then it started rising itself!!

Abhay- ok angel, so wat new my daughter has learnt?/

Angel- mom has taught me a new rhyme also, she always keeps on reading rhymes n i m learning them!!! bt i find them so boring!!

Abhay smiled at his daughters opinion regarding her mom's teaching- so u don't want to learn rhymes, so wat my daughter wants??

Angel- i want u n mom to watch a cartoon movie!!!

Abhay was totally surprised- a cartoon movie???

Pia laughed when abhay said dat!!!

Abhay- ok my princess v wl!!!

Angel- yipeee daddy, bt dad y v r here, this new place??

Abhay was smiled n said- pia ur daughter wants to knw y v r here???

Pia was smiling shyly !! abhay while kissing her forehead, said- angel v av come here for u!!

Angel- how for me dad??

Abhay-so dat my angel cn b more happy just like she is feeling nw!!

Angel-bt dad i cn only feel it, bt wat abt seeing it??

Abhay- awww my angel, i promise v three wl come here again!!!

Angel- when

Abhay while smiling- just after few months!!

Angel- luv u dad, luv u mom also

Abhay- luv u too my angel!!! Av some rest nw!

This time angel lightly kicked her mom, to which pia said- luv u too angel!!

...

pia(holding an apprehensive looks)- abhay wl v ever b able to come here again??

Abhay(saw dat fear again in her eyes)- he didn't want to lie, bt he did n said- v wl pia n while cupping her face in his cold hands, he kissed her forehead , pia closed her eyes, abhay slowly kissed her both eyes n bf4 touching those pink feather soft lips, he smiled a little n closing dat difference b/w them, he placed his lips on her, taking away all d fear n just filling her heart wid all love n pleasure of being in their perfect heaven!!!

...

Nxt morning...

Pia woke up n found abhay sleeping, she was quite surprised ,coz sleeping was nt a normal syndrome in abhay's case, she smiled looking at his cute face, ruffled his thick black hair, she touched his flawless , icy face n kept admiring his perfect angelic features n said- u r my angel abhay n on d other hand abhay was trying his best nt to disturb her, by ny of his movement , bt controlling himself was getting difficult for him, pia smiled n brought her face close to him, abhay was feeling her breaths on his cold face ...d every passing moment arousing his desires to hold n feel her, pia smiled a little n whispered in his ear- better luck nxt time abhay, i m nt in a mood today n she ran away, abhay opened his eyes in sudden shock n saw her standing at d bathroom door n laughing all d way, showing tongue to him!!!

Abhay was still trying to understand what happened bf4 few seconds bt bf4 he could av done nything, pia closed d door on his face, he kept standing their sulking!!!

Inside pia was sure dat abhay won't let her go so easily!!

She came out taking fresh bath, covering herself frm bathrobe, as soon she opened d door, she found him standing on d door, in lowers only, holding his all time favourite mischievous smile, pia gulped her saliva n trying to act normally to hide her nervousness n she said- wat???

Abhay(w hile enjoying her condition)- nthing, u knw i m in a different mood, so y don't u accompany me inside(while pointing towards bathroom)

Pia's eyes literally popped out, she was xpecting something frm him, bt atleast nt this much wild!!

Pia-abhay u r kidding right, nw move, i av already taken my bath..

Abhay who was nt a in a mood to listen her, took his steps towards her, she took her back...

Pia(While stammering )- ab, abhay listen, i mean look i cn pay !!for my mistake , i mean

Abhay while all smiling- dats wat u r going to do nw

During this whole talk pia finally reached to d end of d washroom, , standing underneath d shower, pia looked at him helplessly n abhay walled her by placing his hands on tiles n asked- now tell me wify, wat were u saying, better luck nxt time n u r nt in a mood..!!!

Pia smiled looking down shyly n widin a moment she realised dat she was getting wet under d shower, she looked at him , those sprinkles of warm water falling down their bodies, they were just looking at each other wid those love n passion filled eyes, droplets running down frm their hair to their lips, letting d moment more seductive , pia couldn't hold it more n hugged him, her wet lips touching his skin, making him go mad, abhay separated her robe frm her wet figure placing a kiss on her shoulder, pis moaned a little n clutched him more tightly , she didn;t realise dat she was digging her nails in his skin, abhay was slowly moved his lips to her neck n pinned her to d wall n started kissing all over her bare wet skin, pia was breathing heavily, she was feeling too weak to stand on her feet under his passion n desire, abhay strong arms around her thin waste were supporting her to stand on her knees, finally he cupped her face softly in his hands , her eyes were already closed , water was running down frm her closed eyes to lips, those droplets of water on her lips appearing like dew on rose petals, while closing dat last distance b/w then, he brushed his lips on her shivering one's, pia's hands automatically moved frm his back to his neck, pia's little action made him deepened his kiss while exploring her mouth , pia's response was equally passionate n then there was no end of their wild desires n love!!

Edited by heena_mehta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Abhiya romance was super hot ☺️
but I am worried as to what does Abhay means by leaving Pia to a different family. No, I hope that dosnt happen and he is able to return back to Pia with the ring.
Edited by abhayfan_dishu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

wow heena I loved it so romantic but wht yaar Abhay back in his tyagi mode ab kisko choose kar liya pagal nai yaar.Oh I love Angel-Abhay talk & Abhiya bonding so damm cute😳.Yaar heena u made my day wid ur lovely & awesome post.I hope Abhay koi stupid decision na le.

Luv U🤗
Edited by cuteshrishti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
First of all, I need a inhaler after reading the last para ☺️

Ok... now starting from the beginning...will come to last para again 😉
Ohh no.. why would Abhay leave Piya and want her to stay with some other family does that mean sepration time coming soon I can understand he's concerned about Piya's health and Angel and Piya is concerned abt him and their child... i hope abhay finds a way to keep them safe soon... and the ring... i hope Abhay find a way to get it from Metz.. 😕
Superb Heenu...how come do you describe the places so well? I can actually visualize it infront of my eyes dear 😍
The way u described abt Ishar river and the views was outstanding
and angel convo with parents is as usually adorable... u seriously have a heart of a mother... i guess all women have but u describe relationship of child and parents so beautifully... i love it yaar ❤️
Now I know if Abhay needs to leave Piya for a while..Angel can take care of her mother 😃 Abhay taking care of Piya is as usually amazing 😍

Now coming to the breathtaking part ☺️ Ufff...why do u write such things which I have to imagine 🤣
Kya karu...dimaag pe kaboo nehi hota 🤣 the shower scene was superrr hawwwt and passionate ☺️ gave me goosebumps...
now i will tell u another incident of our 'dil-ka-connection'... 😉 I was writing till the end of time when I recevied ur Pm and started reading... i just wrote a swimming pool scene... which obviously includes romance and water... and I laughed hard... gosh again we match 😆 😉
now I gave u SPOILER but I wont be able to update b4 thur night so sry u gotta w8 😛
Overall...superbbb as usual 👏
luv u loads ❤️ 🤗
Edited by princess_xeelan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome update

Loved it I hope Piya will be fine
Abhay and angel were cute as always
Continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Edited by Pari-Gupta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Heena it was hot aww i was lost while reading this chap the convo between abhay angel was so cute and adorable and abhay will leave pia no*sob*k now the last bathroom romance gosh abhay and pia getting wet under shower and abhay removing her bath robe and kissing her hot hot and quite romantic thanx for pm
Edited by strawberryrashu - 13 years ago

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