ABHIYA FF:i waited 4 u.(last part.page 87)10th oct

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Prottasha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

really god job!!!!!!! 👍🏼👏😛but use big fonts or colors to write FF its just a small suggestion😳 Continue soon!!!!

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti
hey nice part.Oh Abhay always hurt Pia wid his rude words but he love her so much😊

thanx a lot, shrishti!!😃

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Prottasha
really god job!!!!!!! 👍🏼👏😛but use big fonts or colors to write FF its just a small suggestion😳 Continue soon!!!!

thanx daisy!!actually,i wrote da 1st update 4rm cell, dats why its so.. colourless..😃...thanx 4 da suggestion..vl change it to colour..nxt parts are in colour..😊...glad u lykd it!😉

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 14 years ago

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MAITHILI AND CHIRAAG:
In a dark cave in a distant place, whose entrance was hidden by two massive trees, two figures could be faintly seen, by the moonlight that squeezed through. One of the figures, a beautiful woman dressed in a midnight blue gown watched her companion as he paced and spoke in a growling, raspy voice.
"How long do I wait? She is back. You were right, Maithili. She looks like u. Exactly the same. I didnt believe she would grow up to b like u."
Maithili(in a soft voice, that was more cold than his voice)- You owe me, Chiraag. The day I saved u from getting killed by a werewolf-"
"you saved me because of my relation with that doppleganger of yours!!What other reason would a vampire have to save a werewolf?"
Maithili(in a low, dangerous voice)- All the same, I saved u. And a werewolf owes its life to its saviour. U r bonded to me by debt. Wait a little longer. The day she turns 21- u will have what u wish. I just need a little of her blood. And Abhay's 100th birthday is approaching.Soon he wiil be mine."(smiles in a evil way)(turns to Chiraag)- u may go now. Keep a close watch on her.
Maihili watched Chiraag go, her mind going back a hundred years ago...
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Abhayendra. The boy she had loved. The boy who worked for her father, the King Of Pandher. The orphan, stable boy who had always been so generous, so kind, so eager to help and please with that cute smile that showed his dimples. yes, Abhayendra had loved her too. He presented her with small gifts he made with his own hand, and had carved out a flute which he would play only for her,in their secret meeting place,beneath a tree that gave beautiful red blossoms in spring. Together they would lie there, he playing for her, she lying in his chest, the flowers falling on them, celebrating their love.
And then all had changed when his father had started looking for suitors for her.He had invited Rigel. Rigel had fallen in love with Maithili. it had been an obsessive love. And Rigel was a vampire. After tears and agony, she had been married off to Rigel. And then Rigel had changed her. It was beyond anything Maithili ever imagined. The incredible, power, the strength. She wanted more. She wanted to be the strongest. But now she wanted to get rid of Rigel.She had discovered that Rigel could make prophecies. He had prophecised that a girl like her would be born , a hundred years later. It was a once in a blue moon event. If he could get her blood at the right time and if at that time, she made a vampire converted by her ,her slave, she would become powerful, indestructible. And she had done exactly that. She had killed Rigel and had gone back to Abhayendra. He had been delighted to see her again, though he could not understand why she looked so changed. Yes, she had chosen Abhayendra to be thatt slave. She had turned him. But he had run away. From her!Hadn't he loved her? And yet he had refused to help her. But that does not matter, thought Maithili. When I meet him again he will have completed 100 years of his vampire life. And it will make me stronger. She knew her plan was right. Abhayendra was living in Dehradoon now, as Abhay, with those fools, Chand and Haseena. He was in the same town as Piya. Piya would turn 21 the same year Abhay turned 100 as a vampire. They all existed for her. Piya had been born for her. Abhayendra had loved her for her own motive. Yes, all was hers.
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Misha pulled up Piya from her sleep.
Piya- What Mish?
Misha- Kabir had a great idea!!! Its our old school's golden jubilee this year. He wants all ex-students to get together to arrange a special prog. Princi has granted permission!!
Piya(still sleepy)-good idea, Mish.
Misha-Get ready, Piya and-
Piya- We r going TODAY???!!!!
Misah(pulling Piya out of bed)- Yes, Now!! Come on!!
😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
PRECAP:
Abhay joins them in the arrangements of the prog. Piya has a meeting with Chiraag. Abhay saves her..

Edited by abhiora - 14 years ago

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu
interesting.

thanx, dishu dear..

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MR.KooL

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Nice update...tora... 👍🏼

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: --Anurag--
Nice update...tora... 👍🏼

thanx..anurag...😃

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

wow really interesting update

maithali wants to kill pia and our angel abhay will save her

i hate that maithali😡

how can she thought of killing abhay abter loving him

thanks for the pm

waiting eagerly for the coming part

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Shruti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Wow great update.Maithili want to kill Pia!!! She is so evil...Anyway thanx for pm.

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: shivanirajput
wow really interesting update
maithali wants to kill pia and our angel abhay will save her
i hate that maithali😡
how can she thought of killing abhay abter loving him
thanks for the pm
waiting eagerly for the coming part

thanx dr..glad u lykd it!